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Buddy Can You Spare a Comment

I feel like I can move forward now

I have completed what I think is my legacy ?

I've staked my reputation on it 

So if you want or feel the urge to comment

Please go ahead make my boring day

As to me even criticism I do not mind

At least you took the time

I will be fine I am in my prime 

Buddy can you spare a dime 

Or a second of your time 

To fill in my comments line

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Date: 8/19/2018 4:14:00 AM
This is an awesome poem...well-written and great! Thank you for your super kind and friendly comment on my poem. -JWE
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