Made Me Smile - Comment Contest
A lovely comment I received
I treated it as fun
Surmised I was a girl from the east
With attributes per sun
Thought I might have been
delicate and womanly
As though I am not, for sure
I wonder if she thinks that I'm
A great big boring Boar
I know when she reads these lines
She will laugh and be pleased
That her comments made such an impression
That I could write these words with ease
So now I leave with my thoughts untold
To write more poetry, for you to behold.
Shall I write with pizzazz with a flare
Or just be boring me like my usual fare
For Jack's comment contest.
Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014
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