Astringent Poems | Examples

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Big hitters love all that glitters



Tech Rex big hitters

Respect what glitters

Our new babysitters

Not Grandma knitters

X cortex hex twitters

Hate mission transmitters

Gaza or Persian fritters

Emission spate emitters

Vile bile style spitters

Culture war splitters

Astringent mocktail bitters

Seedier leader flitters 

Don't get the jitters

Don't be permitters

The media embitters

Don't become quitters

Need pinch hitters

This lot are critters

What's in cats' litters

All just bullshi**ers

Reckoning

The years I let slowly steep
were quietly astringent
and on the road where I lingered
I wandered into side paths
that left a faint, stinging trace of regret

I also met a brief sunshower
its light thinned by the red of evening
but when a lifetime turned full circle
and something in me began again

there was no need
to keep my ties wrapped
like a scarf at my throat
for the end and the beginning of life
lean toward one another
and kindle
like a candle in still air

Premium Member Watermelon-Wise

Gallagher, likewise in the front row. Green
melon astringent holds bodily form. Flesh
seems harmless lying on the butcher’s table.
Rank and file juiced up for the battle. “Wizard-
of-Odd” holds high, like Thor, his “Sledge-O-Matic.”


Premium Member An Astringent Memory

Why do we exist? That's a query I hear quite often
It's jocular with loved ones, according to many
For others, it's a roller coaster of swings and turns
I had never entertained such trivial notions
Yet all I had were fears they couldn't fulfill. 

When precisely I ceased to hope, I fail to tell
The goal is to lead a delightful and fulfilled life
I don't step back to dwell on how split I've come 
When it's time, I can bury my pain and carry on 
To a family who enjoys prying into my private life
"Can you advise a person to lead a typical life?"

While having little to gaze out to, I raged to live 
Actually, life has no value if not for a rushing river
Running unabatedly over the difficult terrain
I never found out how or when it escaped my grip 
I am currently blind to the future of my life.

Written: June 3rd, 2023

Premium Member Sweet and Sour

sweet 
            saccharine, sugary 
     dulcifying, tasting, adoring 
confection, savory, tangy, acidity 
fermenting, distasting,  frowning 
           vinegary, astringent 
                         sour



Date written: 05/13/2023

Premium Member A Swamp of Adjectives

I am lost in a swamp
of adjectives, gooey, sticky,
boggy, messcatastric (don't bother looking that one up),
longing to rise above the mess, excretion, digest
completion, Gobblystinko (don't bother) – and
fly into a sky of non billowy, yet brilliant, resplendent,
eyeglareoffendic (forget it also) to meet bright
Nature Spirits, wings shimmering, gleaming, after the
rain-steaming~ those fumes of rainbows at high altitudes, gaggaliftic! (yep, now
you are catching on). So, please save me some adjectives, that
I may use for my own bejeweled, overly flamboyant, astringent,
laxateric-metafatalelastic (toss it) facsimileing-irredeemable,
superfluous poetry.


Don'T Expect Too Much Out of the Love

Don't expect too much out of the love
It's just like a flower blossomed instant
Somewhat an orchid bloomed by tune

It will fade back to its before late or soon
To face the wind and to bathe the rain  
Or tragically to taste even more pain 

It grows more astringent spot
But more like burning wood
It needs both wind and firewood 
To make it burning and to sense its hot

Don't expect too much out of the love
Nor decorate it with any more illusion
It’s not the birds flying in the heaven
Nor dance the butterflies like a queen

Premium Member First Picnic After Pandemic

Each step seems my first
Grass bends as my
Boot invades it's empire
Astringent scents arise from
Bruised blades          Strange
Piercing, those sounds of families
Gathered in cheerful reunion

Slowly, a newfound feeling of
Enchantment goosebumps
My arm         As I turn and

Smile

At my family


05/31/21

Berries In West Gippsland Scrub

When fishing is slow, there is time to think,
or I go for a walk, kneel down for a drink,
take note of the trees, the vines or a shrub,
exhibiting berries in - West Gippsland scrub.

Some of these berries I read I can eat.
The author’s description is juicy and sweet,
and quite edible if shove turns to push,
the berries I find in - West Gippsland bush.

There are plenty of words describing a taste;
why many a berry could go to waste.
Insipid, sour, bitter or mild,
aromatic, astringent, tart or reviled.

There’s red currant bush, yellow elderberry,
translucent green or a blue appleberry,
ripe kangaroo apple, black and raspberry, 
purple flax lily and pallid pink cherry.

So West Gippsland scrub grows one tasty treat!
When you’re looking for berries that you can eat,
but if I were you as you search and comb …
make sure you don’t leave, your lunch at home.

Premium Member Blaue Reiter a Ride On Blue Print

follow paths
         undreamt
a glance
 an understanding
  of the
     sensual
in time&
      distance
   
intuitively
  capturing
          the inner sound
of
autonomous
      abstractions

on the threshold
             of innocence
             astringent&
spiritual
      encoded
                     linear
                          idiosyncratic

allegory in ambiguity

Premium Member Blaue Reiters Ride and Paint

follow paths
            undreamt

a glance
an understanding
of
the
    sensual

in time
&
distance
intuitively
     capturing
             inner sound
of
autonomous
abtractions

on the threshold
of
innocence
              astringent
              & spiritual

encoded
         linear
              idiosyncratic
allegory
in
ambiguity

Cathartic Katherine

Helper for heartbreak's dissipation
           Coat of slick paint covers pain
        His younger hair longer temptation
           Gives dead Romeo fresh frame

        Travel miles along Australia's coast
            Brought assailed soldier to me
       Astringent ginger kisses Kylie ghost
           Instant skin soothe of proximity 

       Tersely told stories, recently passed
            Undo injury of passion's abort
       Urge rapid recovery, characters cast
           Script for infant territory taught



     
                            27th January
                        Cathartic Cleanse
                 (He chose name Katherine)

Premium Member center moon 1

middle of winter
	astringent environment~
		wolf howls displeasure

Premium Member An Undeserving Prayer

Thank you lord for giving me two-hundred-and-fifty loveless nights,
for rerunning dull experiences so I can revisit past delights.

Thank you for isolation, for removing all temptations.
For drawing out this punishment far beyond my expectations.

Reward our solemn and astringent lives by helping - if you please. 
As you form galaxies from dust and your moon lifts lazy seas.

If you created life in your universe to give it all some meaning 
- then look on us with charity please, we’re in need of love and healing.

Premium Member My Father's Pen

My Father’s Pen

Drizzle turning sleet.
Window pane cold
as he rests his cheek against it.
Coke fire,
astringent bitter warmth filling the room.
 
On the table
amber in cut glass, no ice,
next to the tablet.
 
An old pen
cradled in the arthritic hand.
From long ago; given
him by his father before him,
to cradle, to write.
 
Now his to make words,
to paint letter pictures,
to fashion the stories.
 
The words swirl and loop,
playing endlessly.
 
Atonal but rich,
they form a trellis
upon which to paint life.

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