Astonishingly Poems | Examples

Valentine's day from the perspective of a hopeless romantic

Valentine is what they say to their valentines to describe, 
The enchanting heart's whisper, how much they are special to them. 
Nevertheless, I fell sick, to be exact, not in the ocean of my lover's love. 
Astonishingly, the lover is what I mentioned is not real just an apocryphal to be enough. 
Dwelling in my mind from the dawn to the sweet kisses of night, 
He is nothing just fictional, a creature of my imagination, only to ignite. 
The day of fourteenth February, in which people celebrate the cherish of love,
 Where I prefer to live in my room, with my lover in my head, no any reason found to shrug.
Hoping him to convert into reality, to create the world with me, I imagined,
But the reality is a curse to us, I'd rather enter the world, I create, nothing to be tangled.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Disciplined Dogs

       
                   Disciplined dogs are waiting in queue
                   Astonishingly fantastic view !
                        A  lovely scenery 
                        and  extraordinary
                     How this happened ? Have you any clue ?
Form: Limerick


Premium Member Sequencing simultaneously

It's

The simultaneity 

Of it all..

Sequencing expected

Is no more..

Yet

Astonishingly 

And not so

Sequencing shows up

Simultaneously..

Not 2..a story...

Premium Member Wingless Flight

Astonishingly are the reflections of moonlight
Colors dancing from prisms taking wingless flight
Waters' second nature is so abundantly bright
Spectrums turning the sheens of wrong into right
Aquatic mirrors paint a tapestry within the night
Singing visual melodies, waves glittering with light
As the sun rises across, the morning takes its own slight
Just listening to its rhythm causes my pen to write
Form: Monorhyme

Infinity

Gazing the stars in the heaven
Contemplating on the mysteries of the hidden.
Counting the petals of flowers in the meadow
Astonishingly its Fibonacci sequence though.
Diving deep into the cell nucleus
Phi ratio of DNA makes me curious.
Does infinity lie within everything?
That made my mind gawping.
Perhaps our destination is infinity.
That gives our soul serenity.
Like two parallel lines
Destiny will make us align.
At infinity we will reunite
To rejoice in the moonlight.
Form: Rhyme


Being Good

Purely innocent
Completely tolerant
Unconditionally loving
Totally understanding
Overtly gullible
Unobtrusively humble
Intimately sympathetic
Thoroughly empathetic

Throughout caring
Never ignoring
Perpetually loyal
Consistently grateful
Labouriously studious
Discreetly judicious
Immediately yielding
Indiscriminately sharing

Socially polite
Un-assumedly modest
Flexibly adjusting
Unquestioningly accepting
Astonishingly punctual
Immanently answerable
Ever committed
Naturally obligated

All definitions read but not hold good,
For, being good is definitely being victimised!

Premium Member Points of Reference

POINTS of REFERENCE
reinventing
 tradition
on display
undeniably
 arresting
 at
 making waves
 defined
in
 the  contemporary
&epitomises
in
bedecked settings
 deliberately
elongated
unresolved
& unravelled
 happening

prominence
 of
the
touchstones 
 the
of
the
explicit
both
 intense
&passionate
 with flashes
of
 fixating 
on
the
 fascinating

composition
of the bespoke
 that intersect
astonishingly diverse
& paradoxically
 sense 
of
the
 cool aesthetic
  simultaneously
  painterly
 offsets 
the conceptual
elaborate
&
equivalent


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Form: Other

Premium Member Ugly Downhill

People's life was ruined and degrading almost instantly, said the CDC.
Things quickly shifted into an icky situation, devolved ugly by NPA.
Things went from awful to worse astonishingly, with SSA.
To be fair, things were a lot worse, obviously, because of COVID.
Originally, situations were commonly grisly, WHO
Despite being performed with keen care, it still ugly, said CIA.
It becomes ugly at times, but mostly entirely at YMCA.
Things seemed to turn messy quietly but in an idyllic way after AHLM.








03/16/2021
Form: Couplet

Fading Fate

No language they speak, no senses 
Trailing behind the trauma they wipe all the traces
The passionate flame they once burnt 
Is now replenished with stale hurt 
In the rhythmic rhythm of the craved waft 
They yearn to endorse to this fading fate 
Their endless embers astonishingly ablaze 
Shooting fellow hearts they caste a crimson lace
Which connects their mirrored fingers 
And witnesses their synchronised falter.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Tune In


Who says Love-braising is easy

Growth and affinity
crave

An elusive trigger
A split second of blast

Courage to proclaim.  Mindfully.  Courage to launch
Courage to ache

Courage to apologize.   Awakening.  Courage to accept and respect
A long walk to forgiveness

Without my consent
It hurts

Dismantling a dam Inside fatherhood
Ouch
It hurts
Surprise attack dismayed extrovert and introvert

Tune In, QQ
Again 

Tune In
Pace self-resilience
Allow vulnerability
But 
never mistreatment

Ouch
It hurts

Pause on the edge of open sea
Oh, my darling compassionate man
Painful at times, yet 
Surprisingly liberating

Wisdoms slay inner obstacles
Honor and duty endow survivorship
Clinging to cherish deep feelings
River of energy flowing unobstructed

June gloom
Astonishingly spoken
‘I love you’

Love-braising is an insight job
Tune In

Abc Poem

A~B~C

Astonishingly 
     Beautiful 
           Cornucopia    
Dancing  
     Entrancing
         Fairies     

Graciously
     Handsomely
         Infinitely
             Jubilant         
Kittenish
     Lively
         Mood 

Naughtily
      Outrageously
          Playing
Quaint
       Rapturous
              Simplistic
                    Tunes

Underneath
      Velvet
           Willows     

Xylophones                   
Zinging…

Written 9th May 2020

Contest  ABC 
Sponsor Allright Poet

Contest Brian's Choice A
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Form: ABC

Premium Member 17 Syllable Opinion

closed-minded people ultimately sound astonishingly stupid
Form: Monoku

Lets Go Fishing Inspired By Reginas Poem

Mathew 4:19
Follow me and I will make you fishers of men

Following
Our
Lord
Leading
Our
Walk

Miraculously 
Everywhere

Astonishingly 
New
Desired

Inspirations 

With
Internal 
Love
Looking for

Men
And
Kindred
Exciting

You
Over
Unity

Fishing
Inward
Speaking
Honestly
Each
Reveling 
Scripture    

Of
Finding

Mankinds
Eternal 
Newness
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Move the Clouds,A Reason For Rainbows

      ~~Move the Clouds~
      (A Reason for Rainbows)

When you left, you took my heart!
It was midnight.
You darted out of the house into
that midnight Spring moonlight,
with but two sentences.
I stood there weeping, with my tears 
falling on my starlit engagement ring.

Like a fool, I believed what you said.
You bag of arrogant wind!
I seriously thought of suicide
each day for months.
I went into therapy, too
But God had much bigger plans
for me.

He placed a beautiful man in my life, 
who never hurt me or caused strife.
I became the Mother of a
beautiful girl, an outstanding 
grandson and a totally transformed life.

I don't let people's outrageous
evaluations of me cause me
pain.
Others judgements are what
they are, their judgements!
They are not me.

I learned to soar like the white 
sea gulls above the Pacific.
So astonishingly high above 
San Francisco Bay!
Whenever, I chose~night or day.

And be totally me, me, me.
Now and forever.
Free ,free, free!
Of others' arrogance and
grandiose superiority.
               ~~~~~

June 2, 2019
3am PST

Premium Member Music To My Ears

MUSIC TO MY EARS

     Dear! 
     Three syllables voiced by you turned music to my ears.
    My dormant dream was favored
    by fervent fervid fortune
    amusing my muse melting in melody.
    Three syllables changed my life
    spreading gorgeous tapestry covering my flaws.
    Divine rhythm resonated as my emotive urge
   engrossed, blended to synchronize with the tune.

     Dear!
    The sweetest sentence you uttered
    ringing like jingle bells
   turning music to my ears, 
   flowed with blowing breeze adding magnificent whistling.
    Song birds were alert, I was alarmed.
    Symphony of song of life reached me in heaven.

    Dear!
   My ears were hankering to hear those three syllables.
   Waited for years.You appeared ruthless rigid rock remaining silent
   Astonishingly my yearnings are fulfilled.
   Three simple syllables rang in amazing amorous tune.
   You out spoke sounding as music to my ears.

    02/14/19
                      Second Place
   'Music To My Ears' Contest by Silent One

  Poetry Anthology 'MUSIC' Theme by Geraldine Taylor

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