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AMNIOTIC FLUID

AMNIOTIC FLUID

I am your amniotic fluid
                               imbibe me
I am your amniotic fluid
         I nourish you
implode me
                   impetuously
lengthen laugh strengthen
      through me 
                        master thighs 
thyroid open palms
              create hips high
or low 
         lingering 
                      touch bones bygone
                                  birthing 
        within my dantien
 dome
Source sparkles spice
                   from rice roses 
                             rubies
 
I am your 
         amniotic 
                        fluid muse  
mould mysteriously
                                  myself 
                         gold goblets silver 
            spiral slivers 
                   soft
exploring explanations 
                           exploding 
ecstasy
  
exists 
              endlessly 


©GhairoDanielsPoetry
&Song2025

Morning

Morning

When you wake up each morning a 
great start of 
the day is a 
glass of 
amniotic fluid originating from 
the womb of a 
woman with a 
baby or 
babies inside her so 
you can diagnose the likely abnormalities in the 
foetus before they can be 
abnormal. Possible side effects: part or 
total memory loss, instant employment in 
the public sector, parking tickets will 
follow you around, stalk you, and 
you’re voice box may turn to 
static mode.

Premium Member When the Baby in the Womb Was Chilling

A silent world, a watery space,
Where shadows dance and light takes chase.
A soft, warm home, a cosy nest,
Where tiny limbs find gentle rest.

The world outside, a distant hum,
A muffled beat, a muffled drum.
But here, it's quiet, calm and deep,
A peaceful slumber, secrets to keep.

The baby floats a weightless dream,
In amniotic fluid, a silver stream.
No need for worries, no need for strife,
Just gentle rocking, a blissful life.

A tiny hand, a tiny foot,
Exploring space, a gentle loot.
The umbilical cord, a lifeline strong,
Connecting to the world, where it belongs.

The mother's heartbeat, a steady beat,
A lullaby, a comforting treat.
The baby listens, knows no fear,
Just love and warmth, oh so near.

The world outside is a distant call,
But here, it's safe, within this wall.
Awaiting the day, the time to come,
When the baby's journey has begun.

So, chill, little one, in your watery bliss,
Let the world outside, just kiss
Your dreams with whispers, soft and low,
For now, it's just you, and the gentle flow.


Premium Member A Surgery

Every writer's work
a soulful surgery

we draw from mysterious
substance, submerged man's core
in fluids indefinable – amniotic sea of source
buoyant, yet only mistily determinable, unknown
were it not for subtle leaking

sort of a chill, in search of its draft

a stutter, keeping its voice from 
apparent reason

how can I truly love 
my God! my Christ!
when trapped on a page
with a pen pressured down
mostly always printing in 
favor of 
self-serving 
human treason

The Bang the Life the Conscious

The
 human sperm cell is haploid, so that its 23 chromosomes can join the 23 chromosomes of the female egg to form a diploid cell with 46 paired chromosomes.

he bulk of our mind's contents is found in the unconscious.uns

The Gatekeeper of unconscious and of the conscious mind is the Subconscious,
Preconscious, the murky
the unconscious the mind undercover, the conscious the deliberate, the discovery of each is once again the big bang. 
The sperm meets the egg and The bang of a life is created.
The life within the vessel survives on the murky, the clear amniotic fluid feeds the life, unconsciously feeding the unseen thoughts of the vessel, the delivery is where the conscious mind is slightly awaken, some our brought in pleasing serene environments, others are awaken by a slap in the buttocks with a violent twirl to cold hands, the conscious mind knocks out, the unconscious resides for safe keeping. The big bang ride begins

Premium Member Beneath Her Dress

e her womb  I grew to be 
a fetus live and breathing free
With tender hands she did caress
a tiny bump, beneath her dress 

Amniotic fluid,  "WATER "
protecting her golden daughter 
She sang to me as she did bless 
a tiny bump, beneath her dress 

A vital sign of heart and soul   
I kicked inside her like a foal 
Immersed in liquid no duress 
this tiny bump beneath her dress 

A Pisces child who chose to swim 
after a nine month interim 
An embryo of small, compressed  
a tiny bump, beneath her dress    

August 6th 2022


Species

The lake is black, high country water,
ocular.

Beneath the surface, a species
reflected in an amniotic sky.

There are three here,
three progenitors
searching for the lost children
of mankind: -

water, sky and
that which watches.

Three wombs that wait expectantly.

The water stirs,
something born too deep
wants to emerge.

Let it!

Premium Member Finally Home

For love of night I claimed my fears released them to the moon 
like a crawfish in the sand I sifted through my magical runes 
seeking symbols and answers but only finding the quiet croon 
of a lonely seagull, over trees shaped like big black balloons 

The ocean resembled tempered glass reflecting stars above 
foamy sea spray, a roar, a wave then, silence... 
leaping into the deep I probed the mysteries of my living essence
and found a kindship with the creatures of the sea 

Watching a lighthouse from a distance I heard the foghorn go
three blasts from the lighthouse, "going astern" 
returning to the amniotic fluids of my mother's womb 
then reborn by the stability of past virtues, soul accepted day 

For love of sleep I dismembered before the sea 
diving into its partitions like a mermaid longing to be free 
claiming meteors and shooting stars as my very own 
I sailed away without a life jacket for I was safely home.

Some Have Watched

Some have watched her rising from the ocean for years.
These amniotic visions return at the pull of the moon.

No clam shell boats for her.
After she wades from the waves
she and the shoreline disappear
only to arrive in a Chevy convertible or on a donkey.

She likes desert nights and all the dance moves
of the free roaming wind.
She delights to drive, ride, or fly through starlit streets.

When the moon begins to starve she returns to the sea
vowing everlasting love
for those who still dare to dream of rebirth.

Baby's First Flight

If so inclined with reservations
Amniotic baby will float on water
Just around the corner of a smile
Embryological y correct you could say
Adequately enclosed in fluid aquatic
Practicing goo goo and gaga for mommy

Clothes would be nice
Naked is better
A hotel will suffice

Is this a room with a womb?
With an ashtray to steal?
With a balcony overlooking tomorrow?
A window to parachute out?

A room with a view would be nice
Where's the glasses and ice?
Where's the towels and mommy?

Umbilical ready for birth
Thumb in the mouth for security
Cord is secure according to Forbes
Don't want to bounce off the walls 
Not exactly a Wall Street journey
It's baby's first flight out

Riptide Wilderness

Lunar swimming in angry cerulean torrents
swiftly as primeval passing of blue equinox
sea-born of indomitable nautical command
to envelop cloaked within mother the ocean

Remembering in-utero wild amniotic hunger
I dive deep submerged inside Poseidon's lair
Senses burning alive tribal inebriated oxygen
embryonic aquatic kingdom, vibrancy revealed

Strong, steady, maritime language fathered 
techniques of stout heartedness hold strong & fast
as I scan deep the watery sapphire horizon
multitudes of planktonic organisms weave dancing

The harrowing, drowning sailors sinking titanic ship's
watery struggles plunging to Davey Jones locker
obeisance to the kingdom the fisherman warned
no safety or surprise for the iconoclastic swimmer

Submarine amygdala hijack tsunami unfolding
losing myself to wave patterns monstrous in my brain
luminescent molecules reverberate to my touch
Gliding through hidden cephalopod realms

Spiralling up microscopic kelp-laden kingdoms
I rise to kiss the air with salt-water gasping
This holiest oceanic communion does heal
all my riptide scars, delivered within lands prison

Life

Hyperbolic

Parabolic

Symbiotic

Life

In the amniotic

Catatonic

Platonic

Life

In the mnemonic

Esoteric

Symphonic

Rhythmic

Life.

Premium Member Poets That We Are

Poets That We Are…

Poets are umbilical cords—
chosen links of the pregnant mind
and its births—amniotic guardians
of the poetic descendent.

As mere servants of the word,
we cannot be more of an apostle
than that of: Humble.
Let us who write, worthily walk
in our own integrity;
man judges—The Most High chooses.

We’ve been blessed with the creativity
of the griots and muses of our own reality.
No longer must we let ourselves be led astray;
rather, let us forever write truth each blessed day.

When the keyboard, cobwebbed in silence,
ceases to ink, let not stillness miscarriage the word;
and may our creativity become like Lazarus.

Our World

Amniotic emerging 
Language judged based on merit
Tragedies on Earth occurring
Very few are those caring
People with messianic spirits 
Goals in the messuage 
Faith only brings untidy even though God is hearing
Human's we're loosing
Cheaper metal to conduct electricity 
Opaque, fusible, ductile, lustrous
More respect for the cities
Love is damaged and had enough
We need matamerism is a brighter sense
Behavior acting to pretend
Lucifer was the metaphor
Now we're shutting doors
God is who we ignore

Fallout From the War On Women

I was warm and toasty, 
curled up, napping 
in amniotic fluid, 
without a worry 
when suddenly 
this metal thing
came into my room 

poked around 
and pulled me out.
The doctor stabbed me, 
smashed my head,
cut off my arms and legs,  
threw my pieces 
in a bucket 
with the others.
It's been a busy day
at the clinic.

At the closing hour,
a nurse dumped 
the bucket
in a freezer sack,
took it out in the alley
and threw it in a bin.
In the morning 
a private truck 

took the sack to 
the garbage dump.
The driver tossed it 
on the highest pile, 
launching flies,
at least a thousand. 

Sitting up here now
I can tell you 
I don't need arms or legs. 
I can hear 
the angels singing.


Donal Mahoney

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