Mystic Rose Rose Poet Kyrielle

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Beneath Her Dress

e her womb  I grew to be 
a fetus live and breathing free
With tender hands she did caress
a tiny bump, beneath her dress 

Amniotic fluid,  "WATER "
protecting her golden daughter 
She sang to me as she did bless 
a tiny bump, beneath her dress 

A vital sign of heart and soul   
I kicked inside her like a foal 
Immersed in liquid no duress 
this tiny bump beneath her dress 

A Pisces child who chose to swim 
after a nine month interim 
An embryo of small, compressed  
a tiny bump, beneath her dress    

August 6th 2022

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Beryl Edmonds September 28, 2022 at 7:55 PM A wonderful poem so deserving of your top spot win in Kim’s contest… Belle

Christuraj Alex September 25, 2022 at 10:04 PM "Amniotic fluid" - Great metaphor. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin September 25, 2022 at 7:03 AM Wow! Congrats for sharing this truth in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Thompson Emate September 24, 2022 at 9:03 PM Congratulations on a well-deserved win.

Joseph May September 24, 2022 at 8:26 PM Great write Vie, Congrats on your win

Curtis Johnson September 24, 2022 at 10:31 AM Mystic Rose. Congrats on this great piece.

Linda Alice Fowler September 24, 2022 at 7:39 AM Don't know how I missed this before Vie. It's fabulous - congratulations on your win! Linda

Michael Tor August 9, 2022 at 4:18 AM Vie your message is clear and beautiful. God bless you for it...

Victor Buhagiar August 6, 2022 at 10:10 PM Lovely poem though I feel sad at the murder of abortion. Deserves highest praise. Mystic Rose Rose August 7, 2022 at 3:20 AM thank you Victor, babies are God's most precious gift.