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Beneath Her Dress Premiere Contest Winner

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e her womb I grew to be a fetus live and breathing free With tender hands she did caress a tiny bump, beneath her dress Amniotic fluid, "WATER " protecting her golden daughter She sang to me as she did bless a tiny bump, beneath her dress A vital sign of heart and soul I kicked inside her like a foal Immersed in liquid no duress this tiny bump beneath her dress A Pisces child who chose to swim after a nine month interim An embryo of small, compressed a tiny bump, beneath her dress August 6th 2022

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Date: 9/28/2022 7:55:00 PM
A wonderful poem so deserving of your top spot win in Kim’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:04:00 PM
"Amniotic fluid" - Great metaphor. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/25/2022 7:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats for sharing this truth in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 9/24/2022 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Date: 9/24/2022 8:26:00 PM
Great write Vie, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/24/2022 10:31:00 AM
Mystic Rose. Congrats on this great piece.
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:39:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this before Vie. It's fabulous - congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:05:00 AM
Absolutely my favorite! Well done, Rose! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/9/2022 4:18:00 AM
Vie your message is clear and beautiful. God bless you for it...
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Date: 8/6/2022 10:10:00 PM
Lovely poem though I feel sad at the murder of abortion. Deserves highest praise.
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Date: 8/7/2022 3:20:00 AM
thank you Victor, babies are God's most precious gift.

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