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AMNIOTIC FLUID

AMNIOTIC FLUID I am your amniotic fluid imbibe me I am your amniotic fluid I nourish you implode me impetuously lengthen laugh strengthen through me master thighs thyroid open palms create hips high or low lingering touch bones bygone birthing within my dantien dome Source sparkles spice from rice roses rubies I am your amniotic fluid muse mould mysteriously myself gold goblets silver spiral slivers soft exploring explanations exploding ecstasy exists endlessly ©GhairoDanielsPoetry &Song2025

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Valsa George

Date: 3/6/2025 10:24:00 PM

Amniotic fluid stands for nourishment. You are indeed an energy source. I can't actually delve deep into the depth of your thoughts. But I know that as a poet your verse is marked by beautiful alliteration and profundity. Keep soaring dear poet friend, Ghairo.

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 3/7/2025 7:42:00 AM

You are so kind with your feedback, my poet friend. Yes. One has to go very deep to get to the amniotic fluid. But the deeper & darker, the better, because life begins in the dark. ThkU for the read. Xxx

Ink Empress

Date: 2/6/2025 9:15:00 PM

So good to see you post after a long time poetic soul and as always your alliterations are on point and these words feel like it comes from the soul of a healer and nurturer. Especially the opening lines drew me right in, i really love the lines “I am your amniotic fluid muse mould mysteriously myself gold goblets silver spiral slivers sof exploring explanations”just brilliant! Pleasure reading you today, sending you light always