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Afloat

Feels like I’m floating
Yet… doesn’t feel far enough
I’m not here, seems I’m staying
To think… myself I can bluff

I cannot find a self I know
I’m finally lost
My shadows I can no longer follow
Once only was

I’m desperately… calm
There is a need for a no need 
Everything and nothing to want
Yet nothing leaves everything to seek

Do you know me like I don’t
How do I find myself for tomorrow?
Did you know me like I won’t?
That me when only you will follow…

Almost like I’m floating
Who am I to want bluff?
I’m here…not staying
Will I know to be far enough?
……………..

Premium Member blooms afloat

blooms afloat
surfing still waters
gentle on my mind



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Afloat

I am simply trying to stay afloat 
In an otherwise sinking land
An escape between past and future 
An island of pain 
Treaded up 
Barefoot in the sand 
Grains of memories stuck in the creases 
Standing is sore 
Walking is sore
On my hands and knees I beg
Relief is all I pray for 
The physical and mental torment 
Occupying a vessel that doesn’t know how to swim 
My head hurts from thinking 
My hands hurt from holding on 
The sun hasn’t risen in a while now 
But the clouds bare a similar resemblance 
To the ache that wants to be unearthed 
Tears and rain, all in the same 
A necessary cleansing so we can grow beyond

Afloat

Find myself disconnected

From the web

Which underlies my life


Is it humanity misdirected?

Or am I?

This underlies my strife

Afloat

Afloat
Not drowning
In murky depth
Nor hover
A single wit
The darks below
The glares above
Keep still
Afloat


The Sky Is Afloat

Night drips into dawn
the sky is afloat,
a gentle sadness
a comforting tenderness.

Raindrops carry both the dark
and the light;
gleams of moon and sun
and dark wings dancing 
between the two.

The rain slowly dream falls
as if each liquid pearl
were the first and last,
teardrop
to rest upon the world.

Now the rain and earth 
are speaking
a rain language,
surface words form
a speech
that enters 
to be received.                                      
                                                                                                                       
The sky is planting
time-seeded moments
that linger longer
in the deep the soft.

All is well, all unspoiled.
Once more
The world is a child again.

Two Afloat

he moves with the gold, talks to the rocks
his voice is a river, he’s looking at her;

she flows through the fire, says she is water
her eyelids are sore, from looking at him as they

blink, again; again she and he
are holding back tears as they fall, fall.. fall waterfall

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Premium Member Family Life Afloat

We left our abode 
       in old Cowfair
  haggled a price 
for an old shire mare

Onto the 
     landlord's canal boat
lock stock and barrel 
        for a life afloat

farewell to our 
     Buckingham birthplace &
its meagre living 
     from old point lace
dawdled slow 
   up to Cosgrove
 taking our meals
   . . around a blackened stove

our moveable house 
    .painted castle& rose
not a life
    we would have chose

Eighteen fifties harsh 
&
mean
   coal cargo
 so nothing stays clean

doff your cap touch your forelock 
every two mile 
   at 
the gatekeeper's lock

Fresh food scarce 
     except for fish
perch & roach
       a staple dishc

clothes dry 
on a washing line strung
out for a timeout
  the toddlers young their
number so soon increased & grew
places to sleep 
    all too few
family life impossibly hard 
    back we went to a tied cottage
 in 
Aylesbury's Anchorage yard

Premium Member Happiness Afloat

Happiness is a state of mind
Resounding in spirit and voice
I am happy and so are you
Starting our journey we rejoice.

The excitement and expectation
Flowing like a river through
Banks now over flowing
In waves of Joy.

Squeals of laughter rock the boat
Contagious smiles now afloat
In a glittering stream
Two happy souls, caught between.  

05.10.2020

Untamable

You stare into the abyss, 
And the abyss stares back. 

Take a look into my mind, 
Through every little crack. 

It's dripping from my finger tips, 
It's throbbing in my veins. 

The wild inside my bones, 
Won't stay tied up in your reins. 

If I let my poison pour, 
Let it gush out of my throat, 

I'll flood out your pretty kingdom,
And set myself afloat.

           - Pragya Nandi @scarletfruit2004

Premium Member Dreams Afloat

footnote
remote
dreamboat
afloat
footnote remote daydreams so flimsy
dreamboat afloat bubbles of whimsy



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 9, 2019 for contest YOUR TURN FOR A TYBURN sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 3RD

Afloat

The length of days
that stretches ahead

      promises me again
      a skyey breadth,

a watery and windy
primeval union

      of the Earth
      and the Sky.

In their dark depths
and heady heights,

      there I swim,
      there I fly.

Premium Member One At a Time God Takes Us Home

Freezing water.
Many hours.
Prayer, hymns, and laughter.
Gray fins begin circling our group.

Day Three There are thirteen of us now.
Twenty-six numb legs stop moving.
Hymn singing stops.
Who will be next? I hold my breath.

Goliath is taken.
Pulled away from the circle.
His girlfriend screams. 
Goliath makes no sound. Gives me a sad nod.

I watch in morbid curiousness
As he is pulled under the water hard.
The water fills with vast amount of red liquid.
Frenzied sharks swim in for their taste of the kill.

The rest of us hold our breaths.
The third day of our capsized non-rescue.
The ocean is deep. Eight others had already been taken.
Which is easier – to be taken or to watch those taken?

The sharks swim around us one more time.
We who are left give praise for another hour
Of life, each minute a reminder of how quickly 
We are taken. Tears in our eyes.  Who will tell our tale?

Premium Member Afloat

Set a sail the sea of blue for what 
I know not why a cleansing maybe 
Of my soul to cross the oceans wide
A Myriad of senses and visions ultrusive
Meaningless yet overpowering to the eye
And I the captain of this illusion of vital
Natural repetition wave after wave 
A castaway of my own desire yet free
Cupped by the waters so wide and deep
At times cradling me to a wondrous sleep
Others thrashing my whole being 
As if a hell bent force to leave me 
Smashed upon a rock body and boat
A helpless lifeless molded heap
And who would know the gulls 
First at the scene the crabs ah yes
Scavengers and then the waves 
Would wash away the rest 
Shake my head uncluttered the mind
This journey is not ready to end 
Dolphins surround my frail vessel 
As we sail into the sun such
Happy mammals of the blue sea
The dog barks I open my eyes
Someone’s knocking at the door 
No more time to dream wake up
Get on with life’s daily chores

Premium Member Senses Afloat

AUDIBLE HORRIBLE
hearing paddling away
think silence bouquet

PALETTE TRAGIC
taste creel caught
meals easier bought

EMOTIONAL REVERSAL
warship bombards feelings
cheaper dental drillings

OLFACTORY REFRACTORY
smell setting sail
restroom odors bail

VISUAL PITIFUL
eyesight in lifeboat
memorize your remote

LOGIC FROLIC
mind barge bound
serenity island found






... CayCay
October 19, 2018 
(written for contest)

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