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AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 9, 2019 for contest YOUR TURN FOR A TYBURN sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 3RD
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Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:07 PM
this one is so darling, LIne One of the best ones on the list for me. Congrats.
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 5:47 AM
Love this tyburn, Line. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs always.. Charlie :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:35 AM
- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Line :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine.
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Oh, Line, I just love your word choices and how your poem bubbles with whimsy. Enchanting poetry! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Susan.
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 4:25 AM
Perfectly penned, Line. Fabulous entry for the contest. Light as air! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 5:34 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Whimsy Poem, I like it!
Gauthier Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:15 AM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 5:37 PM
A delightful Tyburn Line. :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, Gary. Most appreciated.
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 5:17 PM
what a charming poem Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Jan. Most appreciated.
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