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Senses Afloat

AUDIBLE HORRIBLE
hearing paddling away
think silence bouquet

PALETTE TRAGIC
taste creel caught
meals easier bought

EMOTIONAL REVERSAL
warship bombards feelings
cheaper dental drillings

OLFACTORY REFRACTORY
smell setting sail
restroom odors bail

VISUAL PITIFUL
eyesight in lifeboat
memorize your remote

LOGIC FROLIC
mind barge bound
serenity island found






... CayCay
October 19, 2018 
(written for contest)

funnyhumoroussensessillycouplet

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Mark Toney

December 3, 2018 at 7:02 PM

CayCay, you even made each title rhyme! How cool is that? Thank you for entering the contest, and congratulations for your placement! ~Mark

CayCay Godwin

December 5, 2018 at 6:54 AM

Thank you, Mark, for hosting such a fun contest - writing for it was a good time, indeed. All the best to you ... CayCay

P.S. Awtry

November 15, 2018 at 10:41 AM

I especially love the visual pitiful couplet! :)

CayCay Godwin

November 15, 2018 at 11:49 AM

Oh, you came to check it out (theme). How sweet of you, I wasn't expecting that and I'm delighted to have your input. Who knows what will win, we had fun, right? All the best ... CayCay

Joanna Daniel

October 22, 2018 at 6:13 AM

Nice set of couplets, CayCay:) sure to score high:)

Andrea Dietrich

October 20, 2018 at 11:41 PM

Caycay, you did GREAT with your set. I love when people do this form based around themes, and YOUR theme is perfect for this challenge. Such creative lines as always from you! (I tried to call you today. Oh, what a mess everything is)

Rico Leffanta

October 20, 2018 at 2:14 PM

Loved the "smell setting sail restroom odors bail"! Right on the money! Well done and good luck! Aloha! Rico

M. L. Kiser

October 20, 2018 at 11:36 AM

Oh that's a good one; especially the title! Great Job on this one.

CayCay Godwin

October 20, 2018 at 1:55 PM

Your comments make me feel quite good. Cool to know you noticed the title. Thank you for visiting me today and staying around a bit - mighty sweet. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Charlie Smith

October 20, 2018 at 10:08 AM

I know that mind barge part, love it CayCay, best wishes in the contest...

CayCay Godwin

October 20, 2018 at 1:54 PM

Yeah, I've seen the barge, too! So glad you enjoyed the mini-couplets, Charlie. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Gondolf

October 20, 2018 at 8:34 AM

So there are things to look forward to in getting old? Oh well I have a long ways to go before I get old ;). Enjoyed your thoughts, CayCay. Best of luck. John

CayCay Godwin

October 20, 2018 at 1:53 PM

The only thing 'good' about old age as depicted in my short couplets is sense of humor. As our bodies shrink, may our senses of humor grow! Thanks for visiting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Vladislav Raven

October 20, 2018 at 8:02 AM

Hi Cay Cay, six wonderful couplets for the contest. Each is excellent in its own write, encompassing its own single thought. I wish i could write these shorter writes. It takes me twenty lines to say hello. I love the content of each. I think my serenity island has become poetry. have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

CayCay Godwin

October 20, 2018 at 1:52 PM

Somewhere in your talent, I KNOW the ability to write 'shorties' does exist. I had to search for mine, too. It is comments such as yours that enforce my ability to believe I succeeded. I thank you for that. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Tom Cunningham

October 20, 2018 at 6:37 AM

Love these CayCay, like the memorise the remote lol Getting on in years is a drag. Good luck. Tom.

CayCay Godwin

October 20, 2018 at 8:01 AM

We have to laugh at aging, other reactions are all so gloomy tinted. Memory is a fav of mine to poke fun at, what else can I do when its such an easy target ... Thank you, Tom, for your visit. Poetry hugs ... CayCay