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Cyndi MacMillan lives in a small town in Ontario that is home to North America’s largest working waterwheel. Her writing has appeared in notable Canadian literary journals and local newspapers. 

A Cruel Light is her debut gothic mystery (4/4/2023). She has been a Jill-of-all-trades, but for as long as she can remember, she has dreamt of being a novelist.  Hard work and the wonderful team at Crooked Lane Books have made that dream a reality.  Please note that her husband and daughter kindly keep her coffee mug filled when she is wrestling with a suspenseful chapter.   During a pandemic lockdown, the family adopted a rescue cat who chirps. 

When not writing, Cyndi enjoys reading Gothics, scrapbooking, and losing horribly at board games.  Works-in-progress include the second (and third) Annora Garde Mystery, a Canadian noir series, and a standalone horror mystery, so more often than not, Cyndi is writing.  She is a member of Crime Writers of Canada.

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FARMHOUSE: Uncommon word pairings poem #2

Blog Posted:4/9/2015 6:02:00 PM

FARMHOUSE

 

A tombstone, the husk of her homestead.

I return, alone, though wry ghosts

 

are not so far away.

The plow vanished, the red barn left—

 

without a trace.  Forensic acres,

wheat chalks a too familiar crime scene.

 

More than a welcome was lost.

Now hemorrhaging walls milk mortality,

 

see the parched wood bleeding colour

on still life fields.  Winds pause their prowl

 

and I mourn worn linens on lines,

the tole-painted rocker, daybreak creaking,

 

afternoons shucked, a hint of rosewater.

The prairie mercilessly claws

 

a deserted shell, there, a fresh gust rises,

nods heads that will outlive all that once was.

 

Roots dare to deepen as shingles fall.

A hollow egg cracks        to amber applause.

 

 

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“Parched wood bleeding color on still life fields.”

Contributed by John Lawless

 

“a hollow egg cracks to amber applause”

Contributed by Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

 

Tole-painted heritage rocker :)



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Date: 4/10/2015 7:40:00 AM
A WOW from me, too, Cyndi! I love how you weaved our words into this work of art. I thank you for this exercise. My first question when I start a new poem now, "Do I have anything new or original to write?" Sometimes, yes...sometimes, no. That's my biggest challenge.
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:09:00 AM
:) You guys started it. I was a bridge between your two images. As far as those uncommon word pairing, the originality, if a poem only used them, the reader would be EXHAUSTED. Even one every five lines will make a difference. Enough to "romance" the reader. I struggle, too. I must edit some of my work a dozen times. HUGS!
Date: 4/10/2015 6:51:00 AM
wow! i like Rhonda and John's phrase but i so like also the hemorrhaging walls milk mortality and toll-painted rocker.. that gives me creeps but it is a wow!!!.. :)!//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Olive. I ran with their wonderful phrases... I had to 'marry' two opposing moods...one of death and one of jubilance (clapping) John's line sparked the "hemorrhaging walls" I added a picture of a tole painted rocker above. Folk art. Yes, trying to do more "show" with that description. HUGS.

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