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Ghost knight, playing Tolkienesque chords over common, white noise, I still hear you, cosmic brother, strumming the songs of pentagrams from your optical guitar, like that scene out of Star Wars, all were always welcome at your wild bar – interplanetary troubadours, euphoric warriors or a ninja geek incognito, a wistful rhymer who knew truth seldom whispers, love is the only real free-artistry, requiring no discipline, no perimeters, no limits and no definitions I still hear you, cosmic brother, so alive, streaming a high volume of colours, blue still holds a torch for you, loud and proud,red engulfs night without one regret, but its your delicate gold, my friend, I can never forget

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/17/2018 7:04:00 PM
A lovely poem, Cyndi.
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Date: 12/12/2014 11:04:00 AM
I simply love your style,congrats on the successful sponsorship...huggs
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:16:00 AM
Hi Cyndi, This was brilliant and poetic. It is a 7 Fav. for sure. Congratulations on this gem of a tribute. Also; Thank you for the challenging contest. Take care. Earl
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:23:00 AM
I liked and admired imagery,images,imagination and expression in representative Chan a twin of noble siul.Best regards,O,B
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:40:00 AM
So touching and thoughtful, Cyndi.. "truth is seldom whispered" could go among the great quotes. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:50:00 AM
Ahh so beautiful dear.Am.favouring this.Read your blog and did one just for Chan.with twelve words.How are you.hon?Wish tosee more of you.
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Date: 11/11/2014 9:06:00 AM
missing the guy, soul sis... and missing you more.. had bouts of bronchial allergy---confined thrice! this is a heartfelt, uplifting song for our chan!... SOUPIE.. huggs
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Date: 11/11/2014 6:33:00 AM
A brilliant tribute, from the heart true. I will fav this amazing piece and hold on to a piece of two great poets.
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Date: 11/10/2014 4:08:00 PM
fantastic tribute to this young man. I don't know how any of can create a better poem than this one!
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