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Bliss State

Heaven has kissed the rolling hill
the ocean waves, and desert
an earthly token of goodwill
set sparrows to sing in concert.

A gentle touch awakes the morn
in shades of pomegranate
a fragile lipping, dawn is born
through the woods and cliffs of granite.

The globes caressed and embraced
as each denizen is delighted
for death is not a rendered grace
life is heaven, all are invited.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:51:00 AM
    I found one here that I really love!! It resonates with beauty and good will for all. a fave.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Debbie this is a very graceful walk through life's journey, I think the pomegranate tree is one of the most exciting things to seek they hang like globes of life and when the sun hits them they light like a ball of fire, wonderful to read your work again...David

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Faving this. You, who tsks me about perfect words used one here that had me reading the line four times... lipping... YES! Will be back tonight... got my email, FINALLY... Al, my brother in law, is dying. My sister in law is working on getting a hospital bed so he can die at home. Hey, glad you took summer by the hand and frolicked. Life is so painfully short... and beautiful. Hugs and love from Dee...

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:00:00 PM
    A very uplifting poem Debbie, I love the last line you versed "life is heaven, all are invite" we often forget how he repeatedly extends his invite to his table, I am glad I am supping with you at your table, cheers my friend, I drink to your good health, and free spirit, love always vie xxx

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 3:20:00 PM
    lovely soothing poetry very relaxing to read tina x

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Nice poetic way to describe a morning sunrise. Overall, a splendid work as usual.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Nice work Poetess!!!!Cindy :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, A most charming and delightful write.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Very very beautiful and serene, Debbie...Wow...wonderful words. Thanks for posting this. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:00:00 AM
    Life is heaven indeed and so besutiful the imagery in each stanza...Awesome