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Surrender To Love

It is not worth the pain inflicted to continue our mutual fight so let me be the first combatant to wave the flag to make things right. In an attempt to remove the darkness that has crept into our life I wave the flag that lacks any color hoping it will restore the light. We united together in marriage born from a love so deep and pure to stop this argument from ruining it I wave a flag from the dress you wore. I surrender to you completely it’s not important to me who’s right I hope the colorless flag that I wave puts an end to this stupid fight. white / for nette onclaud's Color My World contest / by Joe Flach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 7:52:00 PM
well, that was easy to figure out. Is it your favorite color after all, Joe? This was really great reading! congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:41:00 AM
right white write. Mike
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:03:00 AM
Just great! unique..a peace maker! congrats. BG
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:27:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Joe
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:03:00 AM
Congrats Joe on this fine write...and win
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Joe in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 9:42:00 PM
Hi Joe, This is a poem conveying your true colors and they are beautiful.. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:01:00 AM
:-) Okay, this was a refreshing take on the colour contest and was really a touching and MEANINGFUL poem. Sometimes the craft can outdo the message--you've done well with both! Take care and thanks for messages on my poems. I touch my hat in deep respect, Cyndi
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Joe. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:18:00 PM
a great spin on color ( or lack of it..lol) for the contest...well dont. and thanks for letting me know about the typo...BG
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:59:00 PM
thank you for gracing my contest, joe... inimitable... will relish this more come judging time... with huggs, nette
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