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A sister strides amongst the clouds with teardrops in her eyes. wisps of hair fly in the wind as thunder claps her cries. I call to her, as up I rise with sunbeams on my lips I grasp her cheeks with my two hands as round her the wind whips Her tears kissed dry she lightly trips down to a lower plane where breezy winds stroke gently by a storm released refrain. Arm in arm over jade terrain the sisters dance so blithe One dark one pale, both beautiful each waiting to be wives. * Dedicated to my muse Dee in Darkness & Light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/4/2012 12:34:00 PM
lovely write indeed, Debs. Thanks for the message from Carolyn - please send her a big hug back when you speak to her again : )
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Date: 8/3/2012 9:52:00 AM
... i love the images that you create, how you go from the groan of a soft cry to the lightness of sisterly affection, debbie... thanks too for selecting my heat piece for your contest!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:03:00 AM
Weeping... oh, this is a gift!!!.... on my 16th birthday, my dear friends who played violin gathered together other violinists. I was an audience of one. They played Pachabel's Canon for me, a piece I fell in love with earlier that year. 5 violins for me. This WAS my favourite gift that I have ever received. One that I can still hear. YOU surpassed that... I will print this out, frame it by my bedside. Truly, you have no idea how you have touched me. Even using BLITHE... damn, crying again :-)
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:52:00 AM
A sweet and serene delication to your muse, Debs! Love the imagery "One dark one pale". Feels nice to read something lovely and inspirational.:) I suppose a a muse will marry whomever it adheres to, through thought and words. Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 7/31/2012 3:41:00 PM
nice one! i like the imagery very much.
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Date: 7/31/2012 3:41:00 PM
A lovely write Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/31/2012 3:38:00 PM
Debbie a good dedication of a strong friendship...David
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