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Cyndi

She mostly sits on the outside looking into the worlds around her. Day by day gazing into strong hearts interlocking with others, bonding in the friendly way. Her rationale, by and large is to cope with life as a mom, with a two year old and the love of a husband giving hope that neither will be left out in the cold. She is assured by his drive and his verve. He - - in return lets her live her own life. Sometimes her other self loses her nerve: she revives, being mom, poet and wife She offers a sonnet for sweet respite, for life, being young, and living outright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/7/2012 7:50:00 PM
Hi Charles. I sent you a soup mail, a request for help. No rush! Methinks you will be quite busy with a new fan base, soon... :D
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Date: 11/7/2012 7:53:00 PM
PS--- I never did receive that soupmail. Odd. A captcha glitch? Time-out? I double checked, again...
Date: 11/6/2012 1:51:00 PM
You know Chas I think you have found YOUR form, most excellent modern sonnet! And good on you highlighting all that's good in our Dee. Light & love
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Date: 11/6/2012 9:55:00 AM
Wonderful job Charles. Cyndi is one very special person. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 4:46:00 AM
Oh, poets! We see so much & say so much! I'm so touched by your thoughtfulness and the gift! I guess I should be soupmailing you, but hey, :D , I'm outright... now to temper some of my habits! LOL. My girl is the me I was, not that long ago, and she raged at me yesterday. After a time out, tears, hysteria, she then comes to my lap & says, "I'm sorry I got so angry. I couldn't stop the words." she already sees herself. I checked my S.M. Nothing there yet. I'll float today! Thank you, Chum. Hugs..
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Date: 11/6/2012 1:06:00 AM
Intriguing and thoughtful piece. Thanks for posting. The last two lines were very powerful and touching for me. Overall, a tremendously awesome poem. Always, Laura
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