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Grape Fruits

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
this wine smells better

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
vine has more of them

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
raisins made for me



CONTEST:"Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" sponsored by Alfred Vassallo.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:24:00 AM

    what a cute title you put for these!!! I enjoyed the read.
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 10:05:00 AM

    Well done... Best wishes bro. AO
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:31:00 PM

    clever play on words - congrats on your wins: )
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Sara
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 3:32:00 PM

    I enjoyed this very much...especially the last line...
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Nice one OA. Good luck in the contest. Rick

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