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IN THE MOOD


lately, i have been in this female mood for some kind of abandon, that which exhales the tigress fire out of my lungs digging the veins from a week's' routine movements pruned to the barest of a payroll’s droll… antiseptic cubicles dictate the rags of chlorine-infected lunch where rooms i strut around have nothing except robotic people, same rye snacks, basins of expired coffee and files of schizoid folio.. just outside, the sky coughs of gas masks rendering a paper bag of humanity to suffocate on clanking bones along claustrophobic subways: such a hemorrhaging day waiting for 5pm to hiss, halt ,and heave… i need to dance with the arms of a jazzy moon fondling my back and whistling the tunes of recklesness when all but the spirit lusts for is just a slice of raw breaths spiraling into tangy punches of rockstar blues... spare me the cranky claws of a friday so sore; i alight like a feline dressed in black lace with cabaret wings, feathers splattered on glitzy cobblestones... voluptuous legs hot and wild sniffing sultry lavender scent of friday night’s parade; and the band notes howl, free like me.
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  1. Date: 3/22/2015 10:23:00 AM
    Nette, I know this feeling and the joy that comes from getting out of the office and the city as well. A dance with nature on a starlit night is a bath in tranquility. Congrats on your wonderful win!

  1. Date: 3/21/2015 10:26:00 PM
    Wow this is impressive Nette! Congrats on your win with this beauty!

  1. Date: 3/21/2015 10:14:00 AM
    This is another example of your talented pen weaving words that take more than one reading to truly appreciate. You have a gift, dear Nette, that we don't usually see here or on any other poetry site. The complex emotions in this one, so human, a bit of the dark side of each of us, wanting to escape and have the wild freedom, that perhaps our gray world does not allow...it's a wow from me !!

  1. Date: 3/20/2015 7:43:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/19/2015 11:24:00 PM
    Amazingly beautiful write nette! Congrats on great win!

  1. Date: 3/19/2015 9:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Nette :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2015 4:15:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 3/19/2015 12:30:00 PM
    NETTE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Congrats on another nice win.....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Nette, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Nette, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Love what Scribe said....manhandle people's emotions with your words...you sure can do a lot that's for sure....awesome and congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 2:56:00 AM
    A great one nette. Wonderful. (: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:07:00 PM
    I think we all have a wild side to us, and some of us are just better at hiding it! But, the claws do come out every now and then! I really love the descriptiveness of this poem, Nette. Excellent work! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:00:00 PM
    CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Loved it nette, I enjoyed the abandon! The last verse is especially good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 10:52:00 AM
    job can really boring and after 5 pm our truly self will rise.. a very good one nette, u sexy feline :) congraattss!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:39:00 AM
    Congratulations Nette on a nice win. A well written poem...Roger

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:46:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Nette !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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