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Premium Member SPACE TIME GRIDS

There were boxes of memories piled high
From the ground up to the sky
And in each one like cubes of solitary glass
Shinning in the sun
It seemed as if time were frozen in the past
Unrelieved by forward or backward reverberations
In this matrix of unending associations.

Recitations on these grids of spatial time
Were punctuated by equal strips of glowing 
Equivalences of rhyme
And standing there between these strips 
Of shimmering iridescences
I could look back over my shoulder and see
The future mirrored in the past of essences.
.

Time tarries not

Time tarries not for anyone,
Still, I can't outpace my shadow.
Forever chasing what’s begun,
Success, in its season, will show.

Not minding little yet achieved,
Time tarries not for anyone.
Though dreams remain still unrelieved,
And countless tasks are left undone.

Old age begins its quiet run,
The clock moves fast with every tick.
Time tarries not for anyone,
Yet fleeting hours are hard to trick.

Twilight ignites the fading skies,
As shadows chase the sinking sun.
I race along with weary sighs,
Time tarries not for anyone.

The Enemy Incubates

They could be anywhere
Greased on my bus fare. Any Tom Dick or Jack and Solitaire 
On every bit of bittie bit, on any drop of there.

They're everywhere in ambush
On every pull you push. Each panicked ceramic royal flush 
Pirates hide, ride crazy-eyed, with itch-sticky triggers to crush.

And anything I breathe
Down the red throat of my sleeve. The miasma mere clean teeth can't cleave 
Goes in out in out freaked out out, so every grin and weep's knot-weaved
And my besiegement
Unrelieved.


Glytch, Itch, Witch, Switch, Twitch

Sometimes I muse that life can be a *itch
When every prospect seems of rosy hue
From cerulean sky a fatal glitch
Precipitates its mischief; then I rue
That naive expectation of a child
On whom Dame fortune yet has only smiled

Then something in my skin begins to itch
In parts inviolate to ease of scratch 
And paranoia whispers: “‘tis the Witch
Who cast her evil influence, to hatch
Black parasites that burrow in my brain
Contaminate all thought, implant a bane”

Should this dark image linger unrelieved
Or might a metaphorical light switch
Restore a life where hope may be conceived
So cradled safe and calm, with ne’er a twitch
Neath skies with butterflies where bluebirds sing
Believe that?  Chance you’ll believe - anything


Date your poem written: 10 October 2019

Contest where Not Placed: Itch witch glitch or twitch

DATE CONTEST WHERE NA'D WAS JUDGED: 1 Nov.2019

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Dream Night

Dream night

My wine glass is full of moonlight, 
drank and floated dreamily, on a carpet of night.

Couldn’t resist the moon’s pull, my home bathed in a spectral 
light, both beautiful and mortal. 

Flowers in the garden were deadly pale, olive trees wore 
silver capes of unrelieved sorrow

This nocturnal landscape isn’t to my liking, put me down, 
red, green and golden are my colours

But I did glimpse, behind the tall mountain, night’s ultimate 
sacrifice, giving birth to dawn

Pain and Relief

Patience, not disturbed by words,
works wonder
to hide the unrelieved pain
of a guilty conscience 
remaining the overburdened broken heart 
untouched by an unwanted peep 
into the turbulent mind
and the skeleton
thrown to its ultimate destination
where Peace serves the dried eyes
a perpetual relief
that the soul always looked for
to grow the flower of life.


The Forgotten Teacher

The city's dark and silent streets
Are wet and cold in late November.
The trees stand still; a fireplace heats
A house which few care to remember.

In this forgotten, lonely place,
The heavy tomes entomb the teacher
While, in the dwindling light, his face
Betrays a soul of noble features.

In this cocoon, he has amassed
Much wisdom drawn from lengthy sorrow
While, unrelieved, his worries last
Far past the grim and hopeless morrow.

The world around him moves untouched
By knowledge, art or erudition,
For those who breathe don’t care for much
Outside obtuse, absurd tradition.

He is a candle to the world
Whose light is seen by ever fewer:
His learning shrivels in the cold
Before the eyes of heedless viewers.

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Nine Haiku About One Thing

And she picked it up -
The sleek black and white feather,
Threw it in the bin.

Black and white against
Unrelieved grey. Graceful curve
Against the straight lines.

A flash of beauty
In the gutter. Tidied up
To dull, gritty grey.

Mock Jasmine flowers - 
Beauty and perfume all lost
For neatly trimmed hedge.

Bright scattered colour - 
Gold and bronze leaves down the drive,
Machine blown away.

There’s a concrete path
Through the forest now. It’s grey
Stark, unwelcoming.

Remember? “You don’t  
Know what you’ve got till it’s gone.”
Paradise is lost.

We’re lost in a world.
Where Nature is untidy.
We’ve cleared it away!

She robbed us of it -
The sleek black and white feather,
Stole it from our sight.

The Value of E-Bay

Sometimes he needs, driven by
remnants of hunger for things 
that he can find on E-Bay, gifts. 
Life in the sea of faces passes 
like a trip through mayonaisse,
bits of effort inhibiting his eyes,
seeing the same configurations unrelieved. 
He needs something new 
when life became a worthless 
ritual of empty questions 
that the mere biology of continuation 
never answers.

Betrayal

Mercury nights unrelieved
betrayal passionately suggests
Our future- parallel in jest
From jumping many potholes
Freewheeling college enterprises
Found my candle beside a manhole
Your tongue is dirty like fame

Premium Member The Parting of the Green

The road winds, black and long, across the field.
Fellow travelers merging as traffic flows,
the freedom gained by linkage seems unreal
across the world on rivers others go.
No beaten paths are worn where jungles grow.
A freedom gained by movement, we’ve achieved.
Others wait in poverty unrelieved.
They can not rise and leave, if they so please,
trapped are they in isolation, they grieve.
Roads, good roadways are sought for their release.

Oh, to have a road that winds to market,
or, to run down when the wars come too near.
A paved lane, a street, we dearly covet  
a way to reach our neighbors once made clear,
a safety value when things are most dire.
So, let man tame the jungle wide and green
the mountaintops and rivers in between,
let all mankind be so very blessed
to have good roads, not dead end might of beens 
which join us all, as village greens acessed.

Found Poem

Both remained suspended, motionless;
The storm began to subside
But still the sea was disturbed.
“Come! Come courage!”
As I said it, I knew it was a naïve hope.
Who are you if you lose your favorite person?
A sheer drop, black and faceless
It was a bleak, harsh view, 
the sea and the rock unrelieved by any tree or sweep of grass or sand.
Will we ever meet again?
I will sail into the future on mystery’s wings 
and I will not look back.

Taken

The clock is chiming
Since ancient times
My mind is roaming...I'm in a haze of bewilderment
I'm sprawled in a puzzling maze
Thinking deeply...
wandering...contemplating

My voice is rumbling,
altering into whispers
troubled by the clock
bursting my skull open
releasing tension
oh, how agonizing
deepening in my ruins

my mind blank with ashes

Unable to figure my way out of withering hopelessness...
Thrown into my unfailing demise
Don't seek after me; I'm not wise

My voice is mumbling
Fumbling...stricken with every word I pronounce 
in every devastating line
missing my disoriented family
taken away from my family 
because of my defiant decisions
I foolishly took advantage of that opportunity 

Deepening in my ruins...
Unsaved...unrelieved
Have a generous amount of mercy on my soul 
Because I've been yanked away from my cheerful parents

Give me some hope at least 
Wipe away the unmerciful decisions I took unwisely
or I'll remain in the 
cluster of ruin

On My Hands

On my hands there are a million things
Cuts, stains and pencil marks
And a thousand little dreams

On my hands there are so many lines
Little roads leading one to another
Like moving stories of losing time

On my hands there are many words
Of joy and sorrow unrelieved
That seem precious and old

On my hands there is shame
For a friend to come near
For someone to bear my pain

On my hands there is an unseen stain
it’s someone’s blood this I know
left while I remain

Dissonance

All of this unrelieved tension
Between you and me
Sounds of near sudden death
Softly overbearing
Plot your dispositions carefully
You would find yourself wrapped around the tree
It should have been me
I should have taken your place
Unglue your painful misconception
Of the world you might miss
It took a day and a night
To figure out your whole entire life
I wouldn't know what to do
If I knew you might die
I learned a lot about life today
About how I should live
And how I should sometimes let things go
Or hold on for a little more
I think about you everyday
I hope the world won't stay the same

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