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Glytch, Itch, Witch, Switch, Twitch

Sometimes I muse that life can be a *itch When every prospect seems of rosy hue From cerulean sky a fatal glitch Precipitates its mischief; then I rue That naive expectation of a child On whom Dame fortune yet has only smiled Then something in my skin begins to itch In parts inviolate to ease of scratch And paranoia whispers: “‘tis the Witch Who cast her evil influence, to hatch Black parasites that burrow in my brain Contaminate all thought, implant a bane” Should this dark image linger unrelieved Or might a metaphorical light switch Restore a life where hope may be conceived So cradled safe and calm, with ne’er a twitch Neath skies with butterflies where bluebirds sing Believe that? Chance you’ll believe - anything Date your poem written: 10 October 2019 Contest where Not Placed: Itch witch glitch or twitch DATE CONTEST WHERE NA'D WAS JUDGED: 1 Nov.2019 Writing Challenge - December - Any poem NA'd in November 2019 Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 12/10/2019 7:21:00 PM
Geoffrey congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem, well done!
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Date: 12/8/2019 5:29:00 PM
I agree with you, Geoff, that it is lamentable that the tryany of political correctness has come to the Soup. The fact is that 'bitch' is not an obscenity, no more than 'bastard' is, and of course you use it in a very general sense. I've always wondered why we make certain words taboo, since they're just sounds, without intrinsic evil-- that can only lay within the evil-minded. You do though make a mistake in syntax in the last line-- you meant 'chances are you'll believe anything', didn't you?
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Date: 12/8/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thanks for the detailed feedback, Len - much appreciated. You are right about the syntax of the last line. I granted myself poetic licence in order to fit the meter of the verse.
Date: 10/17/2019 8:46:00 AM
This is smart and skippy at the same time! Well crafted... excellent fun! I think Nina will love this!
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