Smoke Filled Poems | Examples

Premium Member wildfire

 

flames burn
sky smoke filled
dark like late day
the smell of burnt wood drifts-
I weep
Form: Cinqku

Premium Member A Career in Undercover


It's no surprise
that I'm back here
looking out over the river,
painting thoughts, dripping
memories, smearing streaks
of the here and now 
across the canvas of a dull,
overcast day.

There was a time 
when I had ambitions to be
an artist, high school dreams
of a life in smoke filled studios,
tee shirts and paint splattered
Levi jeans. ( A la Jackson Pollock )
Fate though had me 
nine to five dressed in a suit, 
white cotton shirt and a tie.

Over a long career I digested
libraries of corporate jargon,
studied the intricacies of office drill,
the dark secrets of management
all with consummate skill. 
To survive, I mastered the art 
of disguise and deflection
as an undercover poet 
learns to do.


what must I say to get you to speak

what must I say to get you to speak—
I’ve tried the soft approach,
the hard approach,
drank whiskey alone in dark corners
wrote letters I never sent
screamed at the night sky
asking the moon to drag your voice out of the void
I’ve said all the wrong things,
tried all the right ones—
sat in smoke-filled bars
with the ghosts of old conversations,
sat on bus benches with
a thousand cigarettes burning holes in my throat—
I’ve been your fool,
your priest,
your punching bag—
but you never say a damn thing back.

White Smoke

Perhaps the new pope
Can offer some hope
To those who are lost and in need,
But to ones who can’t cope,
At the end of their rope,
That improvement is not guaranteed. 

Though white smoke filled the sky
And no one can deny
The selection was balanced and fair,
Many skeptics will sigh
For the clergy on high
Can’t help everyone desperate for care.

To the faithful, this choice
Is a cause to rejoice
And we all, with respect, will take note,
But the world as of late
Is in such a sad state
It’s not likely to change with this vote.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member AM PM Revisited

I wrote this on a bus ride through the city
An early morning excursion with no sleep
A chance encounter flooded by unknown 
Original reference AM/PM 26 years ago 
The gritty rhyme blindly spoke for itself 
Like the back of a smoke-filled jazz club 
Notes transporting me to another place 
Destination decided with no destiny 
For certain this was uncharted waters
A whispered verse beneath streetlights
Each syllable swaying with the potholes
Did I write this or did the city pen it?
Its pulse echoing in the hollow of my ribs
Doors hiss open stepping off into fog
A silhouette waiting for me at the curb
Eyes I’ve never met but already know
Together we disappeared into the abyss


Your sorrows

My friend, how deep can be your sorrows?
Through smoke filled maze of modern days
When time flies by in bleary haze
And we don't know about tomorrow?

Your eyes, once bright and full of life,
Nowdays, instead, to my dismay,
Are filled, like rainy days of May,
With hate, and pain, and fright.

No, you can't plea, no, you can't flee,
'Cause life is known for no compassion.
Your lust for it and inner passion
Have been dried up, like bloodless fleas.

Yet we don't know of what's to be.
You shed your nightly tears in bed,
But love, I beg you, please, don't fret,
And share them here, with me.
Form: Elegy

Premium Member The Player's Lament

In cozy sweaters, played with fire,
While smoke rings danced up high and higher;
Seven years of warmth I'd known,
Till her spark made me her own.

Through Italy, in knitted threads,
While cigarette smoke filled her head;
Each message wrapped in woolen lies,
As smoke and passion dims the skies.

The truth burned through, like raging coal,
As screenshots pierced my sweater's fold;
My comfort wear could not disguise
The burning guilt behind my eyes!

Now cold, without my shield of wool,
Two hearts I've turned to smoking pools;
No warmth can hide what I have wrought—
Through smoke and shame, I'm left distraught.

Like ashes scattered in the wind,
My sweaters torn, my soul has thinned;
No comfort clothes can warm this chill
Of hearts I broke, of trust I killed.

-
Form: Rhyme

Soul Intact

Sticks and stones may break my bones but words can't hurt me so let's draw a truce lock arms and go dancing under this year's 1st full moon. Giving all praise to my creator while you give praise to his creation.Yes! Once I was you drenched in black mind loss and blue. So blue Lucifer said it's time to meet you. Day to night, Night to day oh my gosh! Morning dew seeped through this smoke-filled blacked out room,eyes aflame feeling gloom so much mind 
dragging affliction. Ouch! No jerking,
Soul intact,
My love for God won't be doomed

Premium Member Haunted Cemetery


The other woman I was not the other worldly one I was 
with sexy strut she came she did this is what I ghastly did 
with a ghoulish voice I spooked and thwarted no applause 
no I never did forget the hurt she caused, he caused...


A solitary candle glowed on my gravestone mod it glowed 
a putrid smell of stinking corpse arrived when I arrived 
like a hunk of foul skunk hidden  in an old commode
I sent her goosebumps and a lump of hate archived   

Smoke filled the air a tomcat appeared at her heels 
with claws, fangs and two angry eyes ready to fight 
yanking at her flaxen hair I prepared for a tart meal 
as she screamed and screamed, wildly into the night.

The other man he was not the love of my life he was 
wearing faded jeans and a Nike T, he goaded me 
Slimy slithery things crawled up towards him with a cause,  
he never knew what hit him as he burned to the 3rd degree!
Form: Rhyme

Clockwork Girl

In cogs and gears, her heart does beat,
A clockwork girl, both strange and sweet.
Her eyes, like polished brass, aglow,
Reflect the time, the world below.

With gears that click and springs that chime,
She measures moments, day and time.
A copper bodice, sleek and tight,
Holds secrets in the fading light.

Her hands, of bronze, a delicate dance,
Point to the hours, a fleeting glance.
A winding key, a silver thread,
Keeps her ticking, unsaid, unled.

Amidst the steam and smoke-filled air,
A whisper of her presence, rare.
The city's pulse, she knows it well,
Her clockwork heart, a silent spell.

But in her gaze, a sadness hides,
A yearning for the world outside.
To feel the warmth, the human touch,
Beyond the gears, beyond the clutch.

For though she runs, on time's own whim,
A part of her, forever dim,
Yearns for a soul, a beating heart,
To break free, from the clockwork art.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Nightshift

they're cold but they don't judge
blue lights respond to everyone
even her, so small, hiding
in a wardrobe
tree lights are other lights
sparkling joyously, festively
it was difficult watching my own play
after her, so small, smoke filled,
never getting to play with whatever
she got under those other lights

Premium Member Cafe' of Apathy

Depression is a Nomad wanderer, searching for a hope to break
In that place of heartless, smoke-filled rot where even laughter proves to fake.

The Darkness is a bold intruder, a critique of one's existence, 
And hides in places, corners of gloom, an outcast from soul's resistance.

In the Café of Apathy, the face of dejection reappears, 
Taking up cudgel in bedrooms and bars, traveling through streets of tears.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Rainbow's End

I’ve walked	
	Many a mile
Since every Rainbow’s End
	Was just a wish away 
Every pot of gold
	Has stayed a wish ahead

I’ve walked 
	Many a mile
Through smoke-filled haze
	And alcoholic daze
		Melody now gone
	From lonesome cities

I took no time
	To listen then

Now I’ll sit a while 
	By the Banyan Tree 
		Draw its cosmic force
	Replenish my spirit
		My energy

	Journey on to
		Find hope at
			The
		Rainbow’s End

Premium Member Rainbow's End

I’ve walked	
	Many a mile
Since every Rainbow’s End
	Was just a wish away 
Every pot of gold
	Has stayed a wish ahead
I’ve walked 
	Many a mile
Through smoke-filled haze
	And alcoholic daze
		Melody now gone
	From lonesome cities
I took no time
	To listen then
Now I’ll sit a while 
	By the Banyan Tree 
		Draw its cosmic force
	Replenish my spirit
		My energy
	Journey on to
		Find hope at
			The
		Rainbow’s End

Everything seems fine to me

Splattering dried soil upon my face 
Lying on that bed for a space 
Space for stars, rainbows, and the moon I plunged my eyes; the sky took me into a room
 An inch of fumes and smoke filled my lungs 
Drown in how they pierced their fangs 
Space by space, acre by acre—work as a trade 
My skin, eyes, and hair were cascading. 
Treasures like golden quicksand, 
Provider at most, even in their  command 
Midst of the haze, everything seems fine to me 
Died at most, thou poorest tree 
Let them cultivate their land and squeeze out my skin
Everything looks fine to me; I have no kin 
Let them pulp my eyes and scorch my feet 
Does not matter when I live in a threat 
The gift of their deeds is the scaly land 
Uncage the air and mutate the hand. 
Living in hell or living in a raging tie 
Raging storms, zapping lightning, polluted realm, and it looks fine to thine eyes 
Stood a strong soldier with all those mishaps
 Hiding my scar and fertilizing all my stuff 
When you are all broke and I’m here to embrace you 
Complaining is not my cup of tea

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