Slimmed Poems


Premium MemberBliss Me -

bliss me farther
for..

i have slimmed
my...

thoughts to feast
andt...

can't free some almighty
god...

andt these thoughts are my
sync...

so i shall be zen able to
forgive...

my self-fishness too
understand...

an actual reality be out
there...


stan
Categories: slimmed, absence, creation, world,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberJust Like That- Gone

Running wild 
Through beds of rocks and stones 
His voice echoes... 'Neath the mountain tops 

Years gone by 
Slimmed thin; his narrow bones 
His arms, still trickling slowly downstream 

Of man-stocked 
No more reproduction 
Like a blood transfusion...the trout swims 

Just like that 
Outliving you and I 
One day, Old Man River...will be gone  



Images in Parallel Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Joseph May 
2/15/2021
Categories: slimmed, nature, river,
Form: Verse


Trousers

trousers

Three pair of trousers hang on a wooden hanger
no, not the wires they give you ate the laundry.
I only fit one of them but have kept two pair 
should I slim lose ten kilos, you must be joking
but hopes are eternal, and my doctor is good looking
she has a nice smile like should be interested in
my well being, every time I go there she has to look 
into her computer, oh, yes him with the funny heart
and tries to flirt with me, fat chance.
The trousers slid from the wooden hanger fell on the floor
and since I was naked at the time picked up a pair of
grey slacks, the fitted just, but there was no room for 
a shirt, I put on an over-sized T-shirt and thought 
it was slimming, but my wife who loves to tell the truth
said I looked like a tent.
Her sarcasm was lost on me, I had slimmed and wore
the grey slacks that day.
Categories: slimmed, anniversary, april, atheist,
Form: Blank verse

Premium MemberMonologue of a Bonsai

O’ little Bonsai, looking elegant!
Ah, you are quiescent!
How do you feel when trimmed?
Discontented for being slimmed?

I feel a conscious impulse - carries
Back to mother earth’s hands.
I wished I would be a great bower,
For passers-by and for birds a big tower.

It’s not my silence,
But sadness that cast on my face.
Deprived of my original charm,
And last as a showy in the living room.

People wonder at my pretty figure.
But never realize that I have lost my vigor.
My stature makes them exuberant.
But never recognize that I am poignant.

Contest : BRIAN'S Choice U, any form, any theme
Contest judged on: 25/05/2020
Sponsored by : Brian Strand
winner : Honorable Mention
Categories: slimmed, feelings, nature, sorrow,
Form: Free verse

My Wonder Woman

Soothing the structures slimmed and sized,
The toning and textures of skins tendered,
Of waists curved into molds bold and shaped,
From the fines of hourglass and dusted in gold,

The Fragrances, The Dior's, deep the stimulation,
The Dressing, The Hermes, best in shape definition,
The soulful, and you that brightens all my desires,
Is one I envision to be the woman worth the elevation.

Behindhand with that that truest shone on days dark,
The choco-lightness, the facial beauty, pure of no mark,
The natural and you that stays faithful to creations alike,
Is one I envision to be the wonder woman worth the elevation.

written on 2nd October 2018
Categories: slimmed, for her, girl, girlfriend,
Form: ABC


Once a Tursle

Silent you were, aloud you shouted
Heavy it looked, lighter you took
Imbalanced you were, in balance you are
Know how had you, but his deep in you
Over and over along, the moons waned

Many shouted to you, I just whispered
All you put off, I kept trying
Men swarmed in, your actual hive
My knees I bend, to thought and thought
Turning my eyes agony,for you but gone
Out of the odds, you  thinned and slimmed 

Luck is not sun, we know must set
On the contra, it shoots like flashes
Vivacious is luck, before it thunders in
Every trouser feel, every dress to stress
Categories: slimmed, 2nd grade, africa, appreciation,
Form: Acrostic

Premium MemberSue's Excess Weight Didn'T Look Great

Sue was putting on weight
at an alarming rate
Was it down to fate…
or too much food on her plate!

She got asked by a mate
when was her due date
But Sue’s monthly was not late,
at her friend Sue got quite irate!

Her friend’s comment made Sue instigate
a course on how to roller skate.
Her weight gain Sue did negate
and she’s slimmed down and looking great!

10-19-17
Categories: slimmed, body, truth,
Form: Monorhyme

The Book I Read Last Night

Crazy is the holy name of the book 
I had read last night, paper backed
 And very slimmed priced about dollars fifty three 
Published and written by none other than this cherubic me 
The theme is very simple telling about my rise
 From very humble position and the attention I got 
From the pompous girls and lustrous women of our locality 
The critiques analysed it critically and said this is very false  
But I am telling them I really saw a cute baby 
Standing quite right at the end of the queue before my fall 
And I am learnt from the lines of the last page 
That for me she is still waiting with anxious breath 
I feel pity for inexperienced her and still I regret 
I should have continued writing, say, fifty more pages 
To find her soul a mate but I am very ashamed to say 
I am made a fool myself and a sense of self cheating creeps in 
The book is not crazy nor am I, nor are there real critiques 
Under dark I took a book  unknown written by somebody else.
Categories: slimmed, books, fun, , cute,
Form: I do not know?

Premium MemberGiggle Spreader

There doesn't seem to be enough humour here
That's where Jester Jack earns his pay
Been commissioned by the jolly police
To spread joy and giggles each day

He's provides this service totally free of charge
There's no reason to change that now
He also reaps such happy benefits
Creating laughter is his vow

Ain't a serious bone in his slimmed down body
Though some say he's still overweight
It goes with being a jolly old elf
Or a happy-go-lucky primate

So next time you need a pick me up my friend
Click on me, I'm online all day long
I'll try to chase your worries away
With a cheery word and a song!


© Jack Ellison 2013
Categories: slimmed, happiness, life,
Form: Quatrain

1-31-12

At dawn, we collect our nefarious swords,
Drenched with dusk's wailing chords.
Hordes congeal steadily in torrents, aboard
Vessels abreast a boy who's bored.

Insipid wounds burst like dwarf stars,
Spattering lapels slicked with stagnant scars.
In battered lands stands a striated limb
And jeering tiers of perverted peers, slimmed

In spirit, hoarse and nauseating. Rumpled sheets,
Amass writhing; blackened defeats,
Repressed urges surge and singe sporadically.
Timid expressions impress, yet he still tallies.
Categories: slimmed, angel,
Form: Cowboy Poetry

Shall I Compare Thee To a Summers Day

 Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more annoying than a buzzing mosquito.
Rough winds do radiate from your way,
And your face is red as a ripe tomato.

Sometimes too bright your sweaty skin doth shine 
And often is my fair vision dimmed
By the sight of your face, in decline,
And your thighs, needing to be slimmed.

But thy eternal summer shall not fade
When will you pay the money that thou ows’t?
Thy personality cuts me like a blade
When in eternal lines to time thou wrinkles grow’st,
So long as men can breathe and eyes can see,
So long lives this: thou shalt remain ugly.
Categories: slimmed, funny, lost love, romance,
Form: Sonnet

Tyne _ Built Ship 1968

TYNE - BUILT    SHIP    1968

Gigantic steel  behemoth
Sitting on the ways greased
And ready to give it birth,
Ten-storey-high  street-darkener,
Rusted and immobile  -

Once launched in silent swish
And cheered by a thousand voices,
Transformed to marine elegance,
And slimmed by the vastness 
Of the endless ocean  -

She moves easily in her element,
Dolphin and whale at the same time.
Categories: slimmed,
Form: Free verse

Disappeared In Bulge .

Big Brenda knew things were not right
When she saw the rolls of cellulite
She could not disguise
The wrinkly thighs
And her hanging butt groaning with fright .


Skinny Jack just stood there and leered
It was worse than his lean frame had feared
When he sat on her lap
And had a real bad mishap
Skinny vanished .... He just disappeared .


But Weight-watchers opened her eyes
Slimmed her "Michelin" way down to size
And Skinny was found
In a wrinkle that bound
Her bum to the back of her thighs .


Inspired for Carolyn's contest .
Categories: slimmed, funny
Form: Limerick
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