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Sue's Excess Weight Didn'T Look Great

Sue was putting on weight
at an alarming rate
Was it down to fate…
or too much food on her plate!

She got asked by a mate
when was her due date
But Sue’s monthly was not late,
at her friend Sue got quite irate!

Her friend’s comment made Sue instigate
a course on how to roller skate.
Her weight gain Sue did negate
and she’s slimmed down and looking great!

10-19-17

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/20/2017 7:41:00 PM Awesome, now she can skate AND lose weight!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/21/2017 3:12:00 AM LOL, just a fun poem :-) I was inspired by the monorhyme contest and wrote 3 poems in the end... maybe reading the rules properly in the first place would have helped lol. I love the pic and the woman shooting the weight display lol:-)hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty Date: 10/20/2017 4:06:00 PM Like it funny Jan Congratulations I see you made the best 100 poet's list. Not bad hey Login to Reply Christopher Flaherty Date: 10/20/2017 7:46:00 PM Always wonder what it takes to get noticed or why. Taste or beauty is in the eye of the beholder But still nice to be appreciated all the same Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2017 4:27:00 PM Thanks Christopher, I take no notice of the lists on soup they can be so easily manipulated - its more to do with popularity than quality of work and there are many more deserving poets who should be on them but they are not particularly active on the site-( hugs jan xx

John Gondolf Date: 10/20/2017 11:04:00 AM This is great Jan, thanks for the laugh. Back when I was much younger and not so wise I made that mistake; I don't know who was more embarrassed the woman or me! I will NEVER make that mistake again... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2017 12:18:00 PM You wouldn't be the first person to make the mistake John... and although it is embarrassing it may make the lady think she needs to do something about it hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort Date: 10/19/2017 7:07:00 PM Very cute Jan. I read it to my wife, and she said, "it is really cute." So, you have brought a smile to our faces. Thanks for everything!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2017 7:14:00 PM Your current run of Trump poems make me smile - he makes such great fodder for us Duke!:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/19/2017 5:29:00 PM The second verse can really happen. I asked that of a young lady about a year ago who was my doctor. Never was I so embarrassed. Cleverly done monorhyme. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2017 5:40:00 PM Thanks for your comment Janis I can imagine how embarrassing is is for both parties!:-( hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/19/2017 12:32:00 PM Hi Jan, I really enjoyed this entertaining write. I love the monorhyme form as well. Good ending. I better go get some skates lol:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2017 1:49:00 PM You will judge it one day my friend :-) hugs jan xx Alexis Y. Date: 10/19/2017 1:31:00 PM I'm glad my contest inspired you to write three monorhymes. Too bad I can't judge the anytime soon. But you never know:-) Alexis Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2017 12:55:00 PM THANKS Alexis - I was inspired by your contest and wrote 3 monorhymes:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 10/19/2017 11:49:00 AM I think her choice was really fate...let's hope no more that she'll inflate...cuz I'm taking her dancing Friday night and can't wait to see her gyrate Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2017 12:15:00 PM LOL Tim:-) we now go dancing on a Tuesday night:-) hugs jan xx