Slackness Poems | Examples


Premium Member Is there anyone there

Is there anyone there? I read the eyes that stare
Mouths appear numb..must have been struck till dumb?
While media streams, out from foul drains (who cares?)
Who cares? It seems no-one but fools? Who concern with
The mechanic's of rules..There are rapists most righteous.'
Being quoted in readers digests and a religion traced from
Dante's inferno; indeed (not cool,) when will we awaken
Out of slumber? How our forebears would wonder.?
At such slackness and much lauding; of the current
Leadership of incumbent; macro-fools.!

To Journalists Compromising

Walking here and there,
Scrounging for messages of Care,
Journalists of the day.
Standing by at door or gate
Spirited, to interrogate the great.

A long-serving microphone,
Miking words from those interviewed,
And an esteemed bagged camcorder on the shoulder;
Always await eventual days
So they’d pace with grace

But, their presentations tremble under status’ feet
Whereto their integrity doth greet.
Their job hence counts slackness of Justice:
That if they are to question a poor fellow,
They’ll do it diligently till he’s zero
But if they are to question a rich man,
Minister or president in particular,
The ‘eye-box’ is covered with red cloth,
Their journals closed, 
And their inkers halt;
They’ll compromise till he’s out of any cases.

Sorry
They are!
Turning a blind eye to the rich’s injustices
And giving a bright eye to the poor’s…
Yellow Journalism eke in Africa?

The Local

Stupid Penny toys with her button
Biting her bottom lip, Frowning her brow
Misery pulls at her
Loneliness sucks 
Fill voids with Mall time 
Plastic replete.
Feeling so fulsome; flirting with clothes
Racks upon racks upon shelves upon drawers 
Cover your colours up cleverly hide
Futile fickle figures flickering tinkering 
Gripping and stirring and numbing and dumbing 
Dutifully dip down diving in devilry.
Pens empower punters people pledge revenge
Pondering pointlessly pointing at pendulums
Wasting breath wasting life wasting time
Waste away get wasted get wanted
Get Wankered get wired 
Glitching through roundabouts 
Loopholing widely 
Hold your box tightly its preciousness
Leaks your Lifeline runs swiftly 
Through slackness and slime
It’s dirty It’s soiled now
It’s tainted. It’s gone.

11 February 2023
Acquaintance and Neighborhood
Sotto Poet


Protect Your Eyes Like a Chief

Your eyes need your first - class care,
Which has to include some yeast
And they shan't Midday Sun dare;
As Sun eyes The West, facing The East,
Lest one turn Prince of Darkness, 
Too early feeling one's way
While reading ' Moving Slackness
Coverage of page all day!

In eyes kids pack playful sands:
Madness that turns them crimson;
Lots of filth from wild hands,
They are, each, blinded Samson

Eyes for lasting protection 
Dusts saving like a loved Chief
Foreign bodies' detection
For dabbing with handkerchief
Or "Here I come cataract
And one stops to interact
Or real Frightful Glaucoma,
Eyes drifting into coma.

Premium Member Slackness

crying out in agony
I growl at the hollow
I'm shivering
arguably

odds aren't in my bias
utter something
seal my orbs
purblindness

testimonials for verse 
deny verve's blunt truism
rather not realize
pick a sleight

plagiarize
one abundant
to survive
inhospitableness

Written: March 30, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIER CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived. ( Poem inspired by Poet Brian Strand Form)

Premium Member Ritual Unique

To a learned philosopher
Or to a logical thinker
The gesture of this lone lady
Wrapping linens around this tree
Might look like a modern madness
Or drabness rooted on slackness...
Only one with a heart love-filled
Could feel her longing unfulfilled
Bearing children; rearing gladly
Owing barrenness, stilled sadly
She, hence, prays to this banyan tree
Age-old sign of fertility
To make her life absolute whole 
And fill with gladness, her sad soul…


31 January 2022


Lies

Utterances people could like garments wear,
Except that they look the more naked;
Voiced ideas their hearers could bear
But much like the cruel whip of the wicked,
Their glad receivers betray a 'mental slackness
And are fetched a thickening darkness.

Confidential documents you could file,
Save that file jackets would keep laughing at you
Quite sure you 'd gone a crazy mile
With that which had turned out of the blue.

Lies every patience tries
And arrives away the Truth flies:
Lies are a southern pole to Northern Truth,
Never failing to dovetail into its halves;
To every man unhelpful like an aching tooth
What even a moron hears and violently laughs.

Down-The-Line

Do possess dedication, 
In fulfilling your duty; 
Have less talk, have more action, 
Sans slackness and perfidy.

Let the commitment be right
There inside your heart and mind; 
Do your work with all your might, 
Success is not far behind.

Let loyalty bring or give
Recipe to glorious goal; 
Allow attachment to live
In your spirit, in your soul.

The systematic approach
Carries progressive outcome; 
Results are beyond reproach, 
The employer ups his thumb.

Be a devoted servant
Of God who knows everything; 
Let your life be triumphant, 
Whether it's winter or spring.

Form: Tanaga

Premium Member Achievement Thoroughness

Faced with daily multi-tasks’ pressure
we need God’s help of divine measure
making us fulfill each chore as great treasure 
turning work-rigor into labour-pleasure.

Gripped by varied assignment strain
we seek Christ’s strength of productiveness gain
toward caring and sharing engagement terrain 
though afflicted with impediment's pain.
 
Conquering futility of slothfulness' attack
through the Saviour’s power with His mercy-pack
we strive for achievement thoroughness of blessings' sack
against indolence slackness, making stewardship vigour lack.

Triumphing over procrastination blight 
seizing championship in today’s functionality fight
we cling to God Who enables* by His might
thanking Him for today's accomplishments midst faith delight.

*1Timothy 1:12 And I thank Christ Jesus our Lord, who hath enabled me, for that he counted me faithful, putting me into the ministry.

July 4, 2019
Honorable Mention, "STRAND CHOICE H, any form, any theme" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 3/17/2020.

The Teacher-Teach To Each

In those , 
learning never ends 

In whom , 
The earning of knowledge is ever and 
Continuously continues 

In whose endeavor, 
Disparity disappears 

With whose effort, 
Impossibles are made as Incredibles 

In whose avenue, 
the revenue of teaching endeavor 
never stops 

With whose act , 
the useful goodness is imbibed

With whose alertness , 
the slackness  is eliminated 

With whose reaction , 
the gracefulness is embedded

They are none other than the TEACHERS 

They are the only one , 
Who Teaches to each to bring
 in cheers in an individual, 
in group in present and future. 
Teachers' Teaching is above all. 
It's the commitment. 
It's the Willful Wish 
It's the Wishful Will 
It's the Way of dealing and 
leading lively and lovely  Life.

Premium Member God's Promise of Patience To His Elect -2 Peter 3:9 Kjv

First of all in regard to this verse
God here is speaking to His elect
for He names them lovingly His beloved
such love so pure believers willingly detect

God brings many a promise to His own
He's not at all slow for them to fulfil
despite how some think wait too long
for all His acts are spot on in His will

The Lord is full of divine patience
waiting and seeking for His very own
by His holy spirit in His effectual draw
pointing to Calvary their sin He did atone

To fulfil the demands of the saviour
God grants His own the gift of repentance
then they come in a spirit of humility
bowing in homage  at His dependence

This election is not for all of the world
again God's showing this for those He chose
from before the world began marking them out
for Christ died only for them this God knows

("The Lord is not slack concerning his promise, as some men count slackness; but is longsuffering to us-ward, not willing that any should perish, but that all should come to repentance.") 2 Peter 3: 9 (KJV)

Dried As Parchment

I feel my skin crack and split
as I watch dust seep from my old wounds
         in puffs of smoke.
The gore that encrusted my skin long ago
dried up and flaked off.
     I have to reach up with my left hand
and wrench my shoulder back into place
 but I barely grunt
and that only because I know it should hurt,
although my nerves ceased to exist long ago.

I put my hand to my back
and start to pull
the multiple daggers protruding from it free
letting them clatter to the floor
with hunks of dried flesh
stuck to them.

There is a slackness to my jaw
and I can't make it move
nor do I wish to.
I get fully to my feet
and take a few steps,
then as if I was struck by lightening
I come crashing to my knees.

My body actually feels 
like it's on fire and I feel it rehydrate,
blood pouring from open sores
the discarded blades 
come hurtling back at me,
plunging deep into my spine
    and ribs of my back.

As my sight
    begins to darken
my mind blurts out
     "Such a viscous cycle."
and I collapse in a heap on the ground.

Premium Member Desert Cactus

Waiting to quench thirst
Drying every single day 
Withered by slackness
A cactus in the desert
Until one day blooms again 











2-15-2016

Ronin 38

When a body dies there is a split second slackness
and softening in the eyes as the soul leaves the shell
a mutual acceptance by body and that which is beyond
that the partnership has ended
when the soul dies before the body
that which remains is consumed 
in anger betrayal confusion loss and abandonment
On my knees looking up through eyes filled with 
blood and dirt and the refuse of animals
digging hands clawing the earth like a wounded dog
trying to bury its own heart 
I see Him
Death stares smiling back from across a field
of broken harvested silent bamboo stumps
He knows his new pupil will not rest
until he has extracted his heavy toll
I seek I now hunt for my revenge

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