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Premium Member Adrift In the Midst of Gladness and Sadness

Walking upon silent parched paths,
under speechless scarlet skies.
Your name sits upon the tip of my tongue,
listening to the susurration of my heart.
Each vibration echoes tones of lament,
conflicted by the principles of time.

Adrift in the midst of gladness and sadness,
in a plot without a twist, lost in blackness and slackness,
through turbulent trials, I yearn for you to return.

Distance remains an unknown intangible pain,
but visions of your timid cute brown eyes remain.
How your mouthwatering scent seduced senses.
How your luscious lips dissolved all walled defences.
Now I yearn for queen of my heart to re-appear,
to sleep in each others arms, into the new year.

Adrift in the midst of gladness and sadness,
in a plot without a twist, lost in blackness and slackness,
through turbulent trials, I yearn for you to return.

Without you the mind is misplaced in marshlands,
where intimacy is lost to complex riddles called life.
Under cold ebony skies, your memories flicker like candlelight,
you are the flame, which insulates my heart with devotional delight.

Silent One
26 December 2019

Wanted to experiment with a mix free verse and rhyme.
After contemplating calling it a free verse or rhyme, I settled for lyric.
Maybe an idea for a contest.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Desert Cactus

Waiting to quench thirst
Drying every single day 
Withered by slackness
A cactus in the desert
Until one day blooms again 











2-15-2016

Premium Member Achievement Thoroughness

Faced with daily multi-tasks’ pressure
we need God’s help of divine measure
making us fulfill each chore as great treasure 
turning work-rigor into labour-pleasure.

Gripped by varied assignment strain
we seek Christ’s strength of productiveness gain
toward caring and sharing engagement terrain 
though afflicted with impediment's pain.
 
Conquering futility of slothfulness' attack
through the Saviour’s power with His mercy-pack
we strive for achievement thoroughness of blessings' sack
against indolence slackness, making stewardship vigour lack.

Triumphing over procrastination blight 
seizing championship in today’s functionality fight
we cling to God Who enables* by His might
thanking Him for today's accomplishments midst faith delight.

*1Timothy 1:12 And I thank Christ Jesus our Lord, who hath enabled me, for that he counted me faithful, putting me into the ministry.

July 4, 2019
Honorable Mention, "STRAND CHOICE H, any form, any theme" Poetry Contest; Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 3/17/2020.


Adrift Through Time

Our souls 
   like ships 
have been set 
   adrift through time, 
pushed by 
   wandering winds, 
pulled by 
   strong cross currents. 
 
Sometimes slackness 
   in the sails 
   brings rest or boredom 
with no forward speed 
   or direction, 
and our soul-ships 
   are stagnant and empty. 
 
Other times our soul-ships 
   have spotted each other 
   in the distance, 
and we prayed for strong winds 
   to fill the sails 
and God to steer us 
   so we may at least 
   pass by close enough to touch. 
 
Over the course 
   of our lives 
our soul-ships 
   have passed each another 
   many times over, 
and a few times 
   we’ve followed one another 
     into the nearest port 
     for some R & R. 
 
Then the storms of life 
   blew through 
and again we were set 
   adrift through time, 
blown in different directions, 
   perhaps never to sail 
   in the same waters again. 
 
But, recently, 
   as fate and fair winds 
   would have it, 
our soul-ships 
   are sailing together once more 
   on a roughly parallel course. 
 
And when 
   the rough seas of life 
try to tear down 
   our masts 
or cause us 
   to drift apart, 
I hope our love 
   will always keep us 
   tethered together, 
so we’ll never lose sight 
of each other again. 
 
With our soul-ships 
   tied together 
   and God guiding us, 
we’ll never be lost at sea 
or separated again, 
and finally we will be allowed 
   to sail through  
   the rest of time together.

Conversation of a Nigerian With Nigeria

Uncertainty, 'grand potentate', 
swathes my lure
For renewed insight. I dropp 
upon
My groove, primed, to settle my 
lot. Help! 

Modest citizen. Our battles, 
girthed
For selfish intent, lunges at your 
faceless sense.
We have rasped our own 
reasons from
Bullets impassive, gratifying bills
Upon your waters of slackness 
tethered slow

He, skirmished hearer to define 
this
Wit-flourished folly, clasps 
sweaty palms, 
Murmurs chrysalis of half-
hearted wishes: 
I slack to lack, vision spires for 
tatty hope
Tosses my insight upon starved 
ambiance. Help! 

No thrill, no ornate flight for 
thought, 
Just one 'grand potentate' nods 
frugal, 
Spreads fancy upon polished 
strips

We saw you lose route upon 
hundreds and
Tin and columbite- we glimpsed 
sprouts
Of your self-righteous mutiny 
kindled
By flat angst.
We falter at your gates of 
defiance.

Fifty-two fetid years, freshly dour 
for me, 
Turns my flesh to scales. Forgive, 
'grand potentate'
To fling at me abundant pellets, 
lost or left.
Of grisly death I sniff, brash and 
fierce
Fifty-two fetid years flame my 
scales

We must fling pellets, but now, 
your allies
Must bolt their greed against 
your waters, hassled
And strew you nether with 
backward tides

A resurrected applause in steep 
praise. His cabinet
Indulges my lassitude to forbear 
further
Moans and tears
Fifty-two flaming years, will me 
not, sheer contortion
Only one stirred heart to fight 
along many

Vox Populi

I'se  been working my ass all day
in them government agencies in this here hot city	 
and them only giving me this little to pay
for food, rent and give them back the change in my grocery bill and utility.
First, I can't sleep on your job but you sleeping with my money
Using it to fill your belly, while I here contemplating
what making salting and what go be food

giving them prisoners three meals a day 
while I'se in the free, dying for hunger
(poor me!)

Personally,  me thinks dem crusty hand, old niggas
must board old trucks like my granny
tell dem hol' on tight and truck dem offsite 
to work for dem food and a better life
an' dont figet the shackles! Put 'em on three by three
(modern slavery).
 Lest they go free.
Professionally, I kibbain' ma mout'
Make dem bun tax money 
Til dem get let out.
An dis yere darn government-
tolling our country's rusty, old bell-
Off with their heads.
sitting on the high chair we holding up
(if we let go, dem go fall)
tearing out dem dry eyes looking for more than them really deserve
(slackness dis 'ere!)

Might lose my job tomorrow
really, I no care!
cause what is the difference between poor and poor working class?
when all day I'se been  working off my ass
Fi tit-bit more than bus fare!


Columbine's Fifteen

From ground zero, the shocking ripples reverberate!
From the heart of a nation, the cry lingers on the wind
And still circles further and further out, sending tears into space.
It continues on with unabated tears; gruesome fears.
The healing begins with mournful sobs and angry shouts.

Who is to blame for this heinous sin?
Who can stop the gnawing pain?
Look in the mirror, then cover it black,
We are..all of us..to blame!

We, who spend only a fraction of our day
Nurturing those precious and closest to our hearts,
We are to blame for their wayward paths;
We didn't see it coming...didn't see it start.

We didn't care enough to ask the hardest questions
Or force the toughest issues; to pull tightly on the reins.
We didn't once think about their future or their pain.
Now, it's too late for Fifteen to ever smile again.

But it's not too late for those of us left in the quake behind,
Not too late for us to change, uplift our mind;
To ask the hardest questions,
Or demand of ourselves a new commitment,
To give our children a new day; hope-filled suggestions.

Look into the sacred eyes of your children.
Look into their hearts with a new understanding.
It does take a village to raise your child,
But it starts with you, and basic planning.

Plan to be there for them, no matter what!
Never give them up to a harsh and hopeless world.
Every day, every minute...stop thinking only of yourself,
Your inconvenience, your tired and weary life!
Emmerse your heart into the life of your boy or girl.

Out from ground zero, Columbine's Fifteen 
Will not have died in vain if they have made us see
The need for total commitment in the shaping of young lives.
These young lives are our future..it lies in our children eyes.

Look deeply, look closely, don't turn away.
Listen more carefully, Search more kindly
For the truth, and at the end of the day
They will love you more for your protection
Than for your lack of supervision and slackness
On the reins. Show them that you love them
By showing up every day.

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Slackness Subduer

March 3 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Joshua 16-18

Key Verse –Joshua 18:3 And Joshua said unto the children of Israel, How long are ye slack to go to possess the land, which the LORD God of your fathers hath given you?

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY SLACKNESS SUBDUER
				
Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your holiness-mount
Thank You for Your help against trials I need to surmount 
Along coasts of temptations refining my faith as greatly paramount
With Your grace-inheritance of life eternal-amount.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your joyfulness-sea
Thank You for Your peace making me anxiety-free 
Along refreshing waters of bountifulness-spree
With Your mercy-kindness as I dwell in Your will for me.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your service-lot
Thank You for Your paths of righteousness checking any filthiness’ dot 
Along streets of good testimony leading me to Your favour I miss not
With Your compassion-touch to become spiritually hot.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your power-terrain
Thank You for Your strength as I tread on rocky roads with pain 
Along avenues of hardships I should pass through against complaints’ strain 
With Your victory-assurance I rise up to, never in vain.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your contentment-land
Thank You for Your lessons teaching me compliance to Your demand 
Along valleys of willingness to obey Your command
With Your gentleness-hope that braces up my biblical stand.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your care-spring where I should abide
Thank You for Your provision fountains supplying my needy side 
Along brooks  of satisfaction generously wide
With Your cheerfulness-glee that overcomes my worries’ tide.

Lord God, You are my slackness Subduer 
toward Your transformation-corner
Thank You for Your wisdom I need as Your soulwinner 
Along foundations of principles for my conversion as a saved sinner
With Your faith-building might fencing me around Your truth’s banner.

March 3, 2023

Ronin 38

When a body dies there is a split second slackness
and softening in the eyes as the soul leaves the shell
a mutual acceptance by body and that which is beyond
that the partnership has ended
when the soul dies before the body
that which remains is consumed 
in anger betrayal confusion loss and abandonment
On my knees looking up through eyes filled with 
blood and dirt and the refuse of animals
digging hands clawing the earth like a wounded dog
trying to bury its own heart 
I see Him
Death stares smiling back from across a field
of broken harvested silent bamboo stumps
He knows his new pupil will not rest
until he has extracted his heavy toll
I seek I now hunt for my revenge
© Ryan Kelly  Create an image from this poem.

The Teacher-Teach To Each

In those , 
learning never ends 

In whom , 
The earning of knowledge is ever and 
Continuously continues 

In whose endeavor, 
Disparity disappears 

With whose effort, 
Impossibles are made as Incredibles 

In whose avenue, 
the revenue of teaching endeavor 
never stops 

With whose act , 
the useful goodness is imbibed

With whose alertness , 
the slackness  is eliminated 

With whose reaction , 
the gracefulness is embedded

They are none other than the TEACHERS 

They are the only one , 
Who Teaches to each to bring
 in cheers in an individual, 
in group in present and future. 
Teachers' Teaching is above all. 
It's the commitment. 
It's the Willful Wish 
It's the Wishful Will 
It's the Way of dealing and 
leading lively and lovely  Life.

Premium Member Is there anyone there

Is there anyone there? I read the eyes that stare
Mouths appear numb..must have been struck till dumb?
While media streams, out from foul drains (who cares?)
Who cares? It seems no-one but fools? Who concern with
The mechanic's of rules..There are rapists most righteous.'
Being quoted in readers digests and a religion traced from
Dante's inferno; indeed (not cool,) when will we awaken
Out of slumber? How our forebears would wonder.?
At such slackness and much lauding; of the current
Leadership of incumbent; macro-fools.!

Premium Member God's Promise of Patience To His Elect -2 Peter 3:9 Kjv

First of all in regard to this verse
God here is speaking to His elect
for He names them lovingly His beloved
such love so pure believers willingly detect

God brings many a promise to His own
He's not at all slow for them to fulfil
despite how some think wait too long
for all His acts are spot on in His will

The Lord is full of divine patience
waiting and seeking for His very own
by His holy spirit in His effectual draw
pointing to Calvary their sin He did atone

To fulfil the demands of the saviour
God grants His own the gift of repentance
then they come in a spirit of humility
bowing in homage  at His dependence

This election is not for all of the world
again God's showing this for those He chose
from before the world began marking them out
for Christ died only for them this God knows

("The Lord is not slack concerning his promise, as some men count slackness; but is longsuffering to us-ward, not willing that any should perish, but that all should come to repentance.") 2 Peter 3: 9 (KJV)

Premium Member My God, Thank You For Enriching Me With Your Blessings

June 17 Scripture Meditations Based on Proverbs 10

Key Verse – Proverbs 10:22 The blessing of the LORD, it maketh rich, and he addeth no sorrow with it.     

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR ENRICHING ME WITH YOUR BLESSINGS

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ gladness
Against foolishness’ heaviness
Away from treasures of wickedness
For me to abide in Your righteousness.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ profit
Against hand-slackness in slothfulness’ pit
Away from poverty of indolence-hit
For me to practice diligence by Your work-wit.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ harvest
Against shame of barrenness’ pest
Away from embarrassment of pride’s zest
For me to trust in Your guidance while doing my best.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ commandments
Against perversions, full of disagreements
Away from sorrow of disobedience-discontentments
For me to walk uprightly toward Your ways’ fulfillments.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ instructions
Against mischief’s destructions
Away from hopelessness-caused transgressions
For me to receive Your favour for my faith's victorious decisions.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ wisdom
Against lying and slander uttered at random
Away from wealth offered by materialistic freedom
For me to desire Your approval in seeking first Your kingdom.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ bounty
Against lack and scarcity’s difficulty
Away from crises of prayerless spirituality
For me to love You with my devoted sincerity.

June 17, 2022

Dried As Parchment

I feel my skin crack and split
as I watch dust seep from my old wounds
         in puffs of smoke.
The gore that encrusted my skin long ago
dried up and flaked off.
     I have to reach up with my left hand
and wrench my shoulder back into place
 but I barely grunt
and that only because I know it should hurt,
although my nerves ceased to exist long ago.

I put my hand to my back
and start to pull
the multiple daggers protruding from it free
letting them clatter to the floor
with hunks of dried flesh
stuck to them.

There is a slackness to my jaw
and I can't make it move
nor do I wish to.
I get fully to my feet
and take a few steps,
then as if I was struck by lightening
I come crashing to my knees.

My body actually feels 
like it's on fire and I feel it rehydrate,
blood pouring from open sores
the discarded blades 
come hurtling back at me,
plunging deep into my spine
    and ribs of my back.

As my sight
    begins to darken
my mind blurts out
     "Such a viscous cycle."
and I collapse in a heap on the ground.

It Was Peaceful

It was peaceful down there
Sitting on the bottom, 
Water muffling what I hear. 
A lovely day in autumn 
To explore some water, 
the task at hand. 
To escape temps getting hotter 
By treading lake instead of land. 

It was peaceful down there
Looking up, seeing the shimmering 
Of what is usually blinding surface glare
Instead be gorgeous graceful glimmering. 

Floating just barely, a little free 
Moment seen rarely, for young me 
But, to speak fairly, what else could be. 

It was peaceful, then it was dire
See the distance to the surface 
When my lungs turned to metal on fire. 
Full panic, not anxious nor nervous 
Only desperate to get to my air
Desperate to be off the floor 
Desperate to be pulled from despair 
Desperate to live, welled up from my core. 

It was peaceful, then it was dire 
When I couldn’t  kick or stroke legs or arms 
Fast enough before the time did expire 
For me to surface, despite my head’s alarms. 

I remember next only the shore
Dizzily aware that I wasn’t where I was before. 
An attempt to vomit, with a much different feeling, 
Like being squeezed in the lungs, and it sent me reeling 

Back to whatever is called floating in blackness, begging to come back 
When you can feel in the tether the slackness, but you’re still trying to track. 
When you’re keenly aware that you’re in danger and something is very wrong. 
And all you can do is hope to whatever gods that they made your body strong.

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