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Premium Member KING COBRA

Confronted eye to eye
Deep in the jungle
A Bite
Predator venom attack
Accelerating poison
Effect thereafter
Slowly shortness of breath
The thought how much time left
Body rhythms started to erupt
Suddenly black out
King Cobra took charge
Control and Large
Death was slowly sinking in
Medical Staff response arrived
Luckily in time
The venom was quickly extracted
Victim survived the ordeal
Could have been worse
The venom could have been with no reverse
Curse of the King Cobra
Caution alert
Beware

The Courage of Stars

You taught me the courage of stars before you left
How light carries on endlessly, 
even after death
With shortness of breath
You explained the infinite
And how rare and beautiful 
it is to even exist

bagatelle

Bagatelle

You see the old olive tree  at the entrance of the village
 take it for granted until you see the tree is dying
still, it has about it a non-communicative dignity
an acceptance of life`s unplanned cosmic shortness.
Dying slowly, a  botanist is trying new soil around 
to get more mileage, but in the plant is
too old, cow dung or artificial fertilizer can stop the tree  
bark goes wrinkled, 300 years is enough
To be dead is to be unborn
 there is no second coming
Not even for a 300-year-old tree.
The morning wakes us up with a dance of sunlight
thought of buying a pair of shoes, bagatelles are
the sum of our existence.


A Day in my Shoes

Practicing how to breathe, when there's a shortness of breath.A slow rhythm in the background calms me down, when a void tried to look into me.I was up alone yet again while the demons of the night visited me. Has it been a year now since sleep has become paralysing.I dared something much deeper within me, to find out it wasn't me who was talking back. A mindless creature may exist outside my comfort zones. Too long since we found a sense of belonging inside our lives, so I stepped into other people's life. Only to be found as different than all the rest. Being like this was never choice, have you ever seen what afflicts me? Please don't kick me out of your circle, it's dark where I am.I found you to understand me, helped me out of my misery. It's a gratitude that I don't belong with the monsters,my skin still remembered the abuse it's done to me. I've grown to be stronger than them, yet still my mind has captivated an attention of a million.

Premium Member October creeps amid the shadows

October creeps amid the shadows
Lengthening
The shortness of the day
Dancing amid the pumpkins
Chortling in its chill
Adding boney fingers to the trees
Reaching into our fears
Tickling with terror
The mystery of a gleeful night
As demons dance with ballerinas
Midget masterminds plot
Against larger super heroes
Trembling
As the door opens
A hand reaches out
A shriek, a panic of footsteps
A hollow laughter trailing


October
She scares ‘em every year
But gives really great treats

Premium Member one of the strongest relationships

the child held onto her grandmother
knowing she was in safe hands
her mother smiled, glad they had this time
she understood the shortness of life better than most
she loves you, she told her mother
and I love her, her mother replied.

She handed the baby to her daughter.
They had to be going, but they would be back tomorrow
she was glad she lived here now,
having moved closer because of this child
knowing that a working mother with a child needed her own mother
three generations of women, depending on each other
comforting each other, leaning on each other
one of the strongest relationships in an uncertain world


Premium Member The Sweetest of Kisses

My tongue tastes the sweetness of your kiss

Both heart and spirit are awake

The long languid suppleness of this

Is almost too much for me to take

My body trembles from your light touch

As you softly caress my cheek

This time with you that I love so much

Is disarming as my knees grow weak

Heart pounds with a shortness of breath

Oh what a delectable sin

And though it draws me closer to death

Still, I can't wait to do it again

Pressure

Do you ever feel like you are dying
Like someone is sitting on your chest
Constricting the flow of oxygen
feeling the shortness of breath
Pressure that threatens to steal your last breath
I'm not dying
Although sometimes
I wish I was.

As Snow Falls

Gentle flakes dance gracefully to the ground
Each one made with perfectly unique crystals
They blow and swirl, going around and around
Until reaching their destination, frosting the world below

As snow falls during the brisk cold of winter
It is beautiful and alive, lasting for a period of time
Just like a fire that we can add to tinder
But in time, the flame will always burn out

We fall like snowflakes, each one of us set apart
Alive as we take our journey, creating meaning in our existence
The shortness of life is what motivates our hearts
To strive for greatness, to make our marks

And then we melt, to fade away into time
The cosmic carousel of the universe moving forward
The seasons change and move us past our prime
Until the new snow falls in the next yearly cycle

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Anxiety.

Breathing heavily, 
heart fluttering,
shortness of breath.

Still environment surrounding me.

Overly piercing voices of others.

Pounding head.

Worry creeps in.

Will it be different today?
Will today be the day it all changes?

Or is it once again the paranoia?

Autumn

The Autumn crocuses sway
amongst the shadows of the pine trees
The air is resonant with smoke
As the buddleia dies down

August as thick as musk
Blackbird came a calling
about Autumns shortness 
Somber yet always lonely

The impending storms
ignite the skies
Finding a talisman
To acknowledge the epiphany

August you are a gust of leafs
floating downstream
you are about  heartfelt loss
Tameness is not spoke

Plaything of Time

I live like a cancer - quick, unplanned growth unheeding of greater designs.
I devour information like a starving wolf - never sated, never tasting the goodness I consume.
I throw myself into activities under exhausting self-compulsion. I should ... so I do ... so I'll die ...
I create in a fit of madness, barely finishing one draft before my mind races to the next.
I busy myself and flood my ears with music.
I let my seething mind boil over without restraint.
I do what I can to escape thinking of you - O Time.

Scythe-wielding Saturn, most ancient of fears.
First to murder his father, only to taste the same fate.
Do I fear death so much?
I don't know ...
But I quail at the shortness of life.
There's so very much I want to do ...
And surely it's better to do much, right?
Especially when we're not sure whether all we do is right.
How can we love what we fear? What we dread? 
Time, O Time ... Time ... Time .... Time .....


16 October 2023

A Weightloss Journey - a Life Changing Dream

Shortness of breath, the struggle with stairs
The paranoid thoughts, of judgemental stares

Tomorrow I'll start, next week I will too. 
The person you're fooling can be only you.

You carry on, each day just the same.
Every week again and again

No planning, no prepping, just take and away.
Spiralling down, delay underway 
Hoping and dreaming, I'll do this one day!

One month later, a burger, a pie
Feeling low, as life passes by
Outstretched clothes, low confidence too
It's now your decide to do this for you!

You take to the web, to find nearest group
Hoping and praying "Please not only soup"!

The hardest part? First step through the door. Always remember, who you're doing this for.

You meet all the members and go through the plan.
At this point you realise, "Oh yes I can".

Now weighing and measuring, healthy A & B
The change is incredible for all to see.

The feeling of pride, the spring in your step.
It's now you can't wait for what life brings next.

The Queens of Stirling Castle

The Stirling Castle flowers speak
To those who stop their feet and mind walking
And declares in honesty the verity of the corporeal soul
Among the insects who fill the air.

The Queens of the Castle though colourful, beautifully crafted, fresh, scented, celebrated and majestic
Will enjoy a short reign
Before they fade in the summer Sun
But the shortness of their reign
Does not traduce their glory and usefulness.

But the invisible soul smells the new life won
Sees the hope in the beauty
Hears the sound of the Chief musician
Feels the joy of the Producer.

And has Royal ascent to lounge and play
For the dancing Composer calls the tune
Tends His garden
Protects His field
Provides for His guardians.

When these Queens pass,
Next season, new proclaimers will be appointed,
And continue to personify the beauty of Him.

Being a Care Taker

It happening again
I see it
Even with me 
eyes closed
I talking about my
sister Brenda
you know.
I wanted it 
many times.
Jerry first than mom.
The shortness
of breath.
That feeling of
what next.
Standing  behind
her walker
Oxygen hose 
It all the same
you know.
Brenda fell down
yesterday
It all happening
the same way.
I want to crawl
into a small hole
and just peek out
now and than.
Until her or my life
come to that very end.
If it was not for God.
To walk us through
I don't know what
I would do .
Because
It happening again...

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