When you think of places that are sad,
you might think of the Germans in Stalingrad,
or you may consider, too,
Napolean, leading the French, at Waterloo,
but, by far, the saddest place around,
for a hundred years, is Mudville town,
the place where Casey at the bat
failed, as his mighty swing fell flat.
Casey made excuses. Folks said, "Save your breath",
and mighty Casey drank himself to death.
Flowers in Mudville, they say, never bloom.
Children grow up in misery and gloom.
Yet, as all hope is disappearing,
lately, I have been hearing,
about a strapping young prospect,
the one standing there on deck.
Do you think he can make Mudville smile?
Will he strike out or hit the ball a mile?
~ say no other word to someone that gives you the silent treatment twice ~
My thoughts seek companionship in substance
Substance of the five senses, yes
But mostly of conscience
Isn’t it torture to go on and on, days across
Pasting social norms over truth
Constantly barely pulling order out of chaos
Can we be serious and real
Or is it just me, or circumstance
To want to not try to feel
Fake
I witness so many shallow laughs
Thinking, save your breath, what’s so funny
Your miraculous brain isn’t such a dummy
I struggle to gasp
When the situation calls for it
but really I’m stronger and would need more of a rasp
Don’t want to seem numbed and awkward
But lately thinking it’s okay, even Zen
To not have to be another clucking hen,
trying for the “don’t ruffle my feathers” award
The Visit Part 6
The hospital room was bathed with a warm light. Prisms of luminosity shone
and fired out through a mass of flaming red hair. She was the most beautiful angel
she had ever seen. "Hello, my name is Pietra, I'm your guardian angel. She
wanted to speak but words failed her, " Save your breath. I can hear you through
your heart and soul. " (she smiled, and an ice castle crumpled from within)
"From the looks it Jenny they are struggling to survive. Follow me. This will help you
change your mind"
Love, Your Mystic Rose
full story found on the stories section of poetry soup.
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The heavens themselves are crying
They long to see you smiling
With rain comes new life so hold on tight
Earth and heavenly angels are working overtime to help you win this fight
Save your breath and rest easy
There will be oodles of love and prayers floating your way so don't be alarmed if you feel a bit breezy
Your light still shines bright no matter life's form
You are the rainbow illuminating amazing strength and beauty at the end of the storm
Pity is not wanted
Understanding is the need
He told her....this way...
Don't say a word....
Just turn out the lights
I don't think I need to hear
What's kept you out all night
So, save your breath
Save that perfect alibi...
No, I won't ask you questions
And you won't have to lie
Chorus:
You won't have to lie
In my arms...anymore
And you don't have to cry
'Cause we've been there before
I don't need an explanation
Just say the word, goodbye
And I won't ask you questions
And you won't have to lie
Don't look surprised....
Did you think I couldn't see
Another lover in your eyes
When you were holding me
I'm all out of trust...
Let me keep my wounded pride
And I won't ask you questions
And you won't have to lie
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I see you talking,
But I can't hear what you say,
Your lips are moving,
Get out of my way.
I had faith in you,
But oh, how your lies flied!
This is nothing new,
God knows I tried.
Save your breath,
It's not about material things,
It was about our love,
And our golden rings.
I see you talking,
But I won't hear what you say,
It is too late,
I can't live this way.
Flashing unto myself a photo advertising, his bates motel
Peering inside these eyes thinking, no, not the entire kingdom
Of hell shall escape what is coming, their way ? So save your breath....
Tell them Belial, exactly what you do know: perhaps they shall escape a fateful day.
Gotta move in here move out there, do what you can to prepare. Pay more attention to your bills, be responsible and you'll have more thrills, in life. You wanna make your own rules and be on your own, get away from the parents but you gotta be strong. You suffer from the pain of death, but you need to save your breath. Be prepared but dont be scared, its apart of life here and there. Its easier said then done, but in the end there will be one. Live your life with no regrets, do what you can, but no need to fret. Everything will be alright, but sometimes you need to look on the bright side. Be prepared but dont be scared, its apart of life here and there. You wanna do this but not be wrong? Still, you gotta do what you can to stay strong.
Argument With a Wife Is Futile
By Elton Camp
Some say that truth will prevail
At times, the old adage will fail
If, with your wife you disagree,
Then you might as well let it be
Anything you say, she’ll deny
So save your breath--don’t try
You’re wrong and she is right
Give in and avoid a big fight
It’s one a man will never win
So there’s no need to begin
The only thing she wants to hear
“Yes, you’re right about that dear”
there’s a casing on the floor for every lie you ever spun
make a case in pointing out they’re all coming undone
shameless is as shameless does, was there a point to prove?
well, i’ve got just what i needed now, so tell me, who used who?
two nights of lovin', lips bitten and sucking
ample reason to leave and proof it ain’t worth nothin’ to you
cause your mouth’s full of tricks; the proverbial ditch
and confirmed suspicions; the shovel with which
i’ll bury your name, and make no use of it,
filthiest word i ever knew
so justify for peace of mind, there’s nothing more for you
to find between the lines i write, you had everything to lose
i’ll lay it out and wear it thin.
red riding hood or wolfish grin?
just save your breath, kid. hold it in
and choke on your own excuse.
Darling, it's time we had a chat,
" Don't hurt me like Bernardette,
she stirs up jealousy
with the same stupidity;
just ignore her and save your breath! "
Both Mom and Dad felt so very ill at ease.
Impotent when it came to discussing the birds and bees.
Reading up on how to handle a subject so delicate,
Determined to provide Johnny with knowledge accurate!
Sit down, there's something we need to discuss with you,
And it ain't your acne - it's a topic about which you have no clue.
Nothing will be held back - we're laying everything on the table.
Don't be shy about asking questions and join in if you're able.
Because this matter is so important we want you to be well versed.
Endure with us because we want you to hear it from us first.
Excuse me Mom and Dad, save your breath, 'cause you see,
Sex education was thoroughly discussed in school during my puberty!
Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 10 in Carol Brown's "The Birds and Bees" Contest - September 2010
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Inflate This...
Inpatience...
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