Remaking Poems | Examples

Becoming What Is

Materializing 
memory
photos on the wall
Immortalizing
tomorrow
vision to recall
Prescience
in the offing
feelings coming home
Sentience
remaking
— that forever known


(Dreamsleep: September, 2025)
Form: Rhyme

filled by complaint

the home was taught
in form as passing custom
to hide is freedom
from a sight not allowed to begin
protected from cinders town
escaped to preserve brown
a coastal expanse 
blinding beauty 
remaking lords
from dukes and blow
grandmothers quakes
learning by instruction
how to blend
defend and die
prescribe and imbibe
adjust and join
dive and dive
destroy your remains
and bridges as news escaped home
awakenings blame
prides failing regret
astride regrets wings
bring home the pens
quill and brow
be fearful of when
you, when is your new name


Premium Member The Remaking Of America

The Remaking Of America
Written: by Miracle Man
6/21/2024

Each sunrise brings with it more horrid tidings,
America is now experiencing grievous change.
Seems no day passes without some rape or killing,
like livestock, illegals rush in to graze free range.

Many bring dissenting views and stated demands,
they wave their flags holding fast to former ways.
Some elected officials promote this way of thinking,
some stand around disoriented, frozen in a daze.

Many think it’s all a part of some grand scheme,
and time may come when only Government has a say.
We’re seeing the land we love destroyed from within,
the only hope we have is for Christians to pray.



One change that I notice most every day,
my freedoms are slowly being taken away.
But though they take all I have to give,
it’s the very best place on earth to live.
Tom
Form: Quatrain

Through the storm

I'm taking back the power I had
I'm reclaiming bits of me
I'm rebuilding what once was
But this time, I'll build something stronger 

I'm taking back the command I had
I'm claiming what has always been mine
I'm stacking up the confidence I had
But this time, I'll not give them a chance to have me doubt 

For what made me unique was my resilience
The same resilience that got me standing
The same resilience that even when I was down
I kept moving cause I had to reach my destination 

I'm taking back the determination I had
I'm remaking it to fit in this new shell
I'm making sure it's a great fit
But this time, I'll make it to my specifications 

I'm taking back the strength I had
I'm recreating the battles I faced
I'm going through the storm to piece it all back
But this time, I'll stay longer in the storm so that I learn 

For what made me great has waned
But I'm going back and changing that
The same person that walked into the storm
Is the same person i'm going after, cause I'm taking control 

The PO£T

Premium Member Retrospective a Freed Verse

RETROSpPECTIVES
unfinished
&separating
now
returning
to the allure
of  an
 invigorating
sunburst
of colour
in  memories
surfacing
becomin
 complicit
  involved
& questioning

dominated by
& inspired by
 a setting
so incarnates s
by something haunting
&engaging
so very different
&in
 lovable  images
depicting
 as if suggesting
a vulnerable
shyness
doubting yet
 embracing
tradition
 remaking
 on different terms


Premium Member Quiet

on the waning edge of day
sunset rolls white clouds to pink and amber strands
sifting back and forth like a quilt's overlay of color
a sprawling vista
                      unstoppable
the quiet glide between hope and trepidation
 
bended sky to quell settling light
in gold, pink clouds
                       quill thin, like tangled trails of choice
these warm stretches of glow
drifting
into scattershot lives

sunset whittled back
as night cuts the canvas
remaking itself
ethereal
into the the soft weave of another darkness
strapped to another day




Poem composed April 1st/2023

Premium Member Frenzy

FRENZY
imbued with
 sensibility
liberated
by a
creative flowering
gloriously
  austere
yet
 overwhelmed
by anxiety &
doubt
to the
point of
obliteration

increasingly
  remaking
 an adventurousan
 thing to  do
displaying
new shapes
  twisted
menacingly

simply
  presented
&
aesthetically
 significant
yet
never finished
they remain
terse &
  enigmatic
endless
possibilities

as
a
poignant
 epiphany
 breathing
 new life


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Form: Other

Premium Member Humanity Needs To Be Remade-

Hard and all the thoughts Stone Cold is the soul
 Heart made of Stone 
a spirit of the human hard as bone 
must be reshapened for the lot 
this body needs remaking molded at any cost
 a lot of hands of God to perform CPR
 allow the hands of God to remove your flesh
 kiss you once again make you living witness
 remake you,  rename you call then His child
 for the body of humanity needs a change
 a new birth a new name

Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2022

Premium Member Moon and Sun

Moon & Sun
David J Walker

Sleepless 
nameless
The strangeness of life

Seamless 
Dauntless 

A man
	A wife
And a child named 

For the course of time
	Yet to come

In the tallied sum
of giving
	of taking
Of rethinking
	Of remaking 

The meaning of 
Outcome 

One child born to
Become
The moon 
The other 
	The sun
Form: Rhyme

Remaking the World

We need to dress the world,
tear off its rags ...
We need to offer light to the gloom
rescue the human mass
who lives in the wintry ...
We need to be the sun
of the somber ...
We need to feed the dreams
of the dead figures in obscurity,
of prisoners in murks and nightmares ...
We need to format hope to
people fallen trees,
people who are infertile
in life...

Premium Member Over the Moorlands

Sullen would be onset of grey, indivisible-dawning;
Soon, lifting mist dissipating beneath the brae.
Comes then a gentle heat arising with the morning...
Thus the remaking of another new, glorious day.

Sun-kissed slopes now aglow with purple blaze,
Vast moorlands slowly stirring from quiet slumber;
Clamorous whaups, hanging above the veiling haze,     
Burbling down to disappear into the tangled tundra.      

Together, paired oystercatchers pipe in rapid flight;      
Skipping wheatears explore dry-stone walls.
There, old Barjarg, aglow in Junes vibrant light,
And I awakening to the hidden otters whistling calls.

Oh! to stroll once more upon the Cree's hallowed banks 
Inside the sanctuary of her jealously guarded hills.
When tramping through the myriad of dew-drenched ranks
That had across the sheep-strewn meadow spilled.

If I but could joyfully follow the meandering course,
Again, of those rocky, gurgling, opaque, amber waters.
Thoughts, such as these, that surrender to a remorse...        
Nought but wistful memories that provoke to taunt us.
Form: Rhyme

Blood Resin Liquid Blood

The blood of the forest
           it's green ... consolidated
           hope remains!
           The blood of heaven
           it's blue ... peace reigns
           infinite trust ...
           The river runs clear
           its blood of life
            and remaking ...
          But, red is our
          blood ... perennial sign
           of our struggle ...!

Cinnamon Girl, Four Minutes and Three Seconds

I am a girl with a body made of soil. We catch falling embers of fire in our bare hands with laughter;

And later I catch your eye across the dance floor. I can't find a way to open my mouth. 

I dreamt once that Aphrodite was a human soul with her arms full of lilies, and I dreamt once that you were a sun-kissed god remaking my bones into wildflowers. 

Please, love, devour me.

The Poeter's Framework

Taking into account; the Poeter's quip
Shant it be unfurled to reveal thine
Penned and newly coined path of authorship 
Paying out the Poeter’s plumb line

Veering from the course 
Plotting new wave points 
Carting the next rhyme before the horse
Beginning each line with the next conjoint 

Taking time to proceed; and dote 
Forsaking time tested ways
Remaking each verse concave and connote 
Breaking the norm; within this phrase

Plucking the strings of a mental violin 
That one trains to adroit and therein
Making each intellectual a rational linchpin.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Last Master of War Ii

I who have dwelt long
 On the keeping of a vow,
That which is folded into 
  Steel --
And hammered and drawn --
The making and remaking --
Melded and beaten into one,     

Sat now pondering
 Upon all thus whence forged      
At the battles heightened 
  Pitch...
For where else do men
 Discover a truer kinship
Than when engaged in fierce 
  War?

Immersed in deep thought --
Mesmerised by glint and glare;
Drawn into the fractured glass               
 As a distracted man,
Ensconced at the bright 
  Hearths side,
Stares vacantly into flames.      

Images, memories;
A mind, pliable as water,
 Crowded with dead, long ago 
  Faces
Of those comrades slain...
For no promise ever made
 Was truly made unless kept.

My little craft stirs                  
 As rousing from idle dreams;
Shrill birdsong from woodland 
  Fringe,
Glib mallards laughing;
Incessant lap, lap, lapping,
Mist dissipates at lakes edge;

Prow swings slow about
 As if turned by unseen hands.
And out across the vastness,
This wide emptiness,             
Faraway voices calling...
Then gone like evening breeze.
Form: Choka

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