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Quiet

on the waning edge of day sunset rolls white clouds to pink and amber strands sifting back and forth like a quilt's overlay of color a sprawling vista unstoppable the quiet glide between hope and trepidation bended sky to quell settling light in gold, pink clouds quill thin, like tangled trails of choice these warm stretches of glow drifting into scattershot lives sunset whittled back as night cuts the canvas remaking itself ethereal into the the soft weave of another darkness strapped to another day Poem composed April 1st/2023

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Date: 1/5/2024 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/5/2024 3:13:00 PM
Thanks very much. I need to re-start my pen as caring for my mother in the home has sapped my energy, drained my muse. Take care. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 4/5/2023 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/5/2023 9:11:00 AM
Thanks very much, Paula, for your congratulatory message. Very thoughtful of you to drop by. Be well. Brian
Date: 4/3/2023 9:00:00 AM
Oh, This is just gorgeous, Brian--all your lines--but especially this: "quill thin, like tangled trails of choice." Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/3/2023 9:06:00 AM
Hello Ann I hope all is well with you. I'm glad you enjoyed the simile. Thank you for your positive appraisal of my piece. All the best, Brian
Date: 4/3/2023 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/3/2023 6:34:00 AM
Greetings Sara, My appreciation for your supportive comment. Sometimes the changing sky is a most gratifying muse. Be well. Brian
Date: 4/3/2023 3:27:00 AM
Brian, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/3/2023 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks for the recognition, Constance. It was a challenge to add the odd "q" word in the piece. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 4/2/2023 4:13:00 PM
I enjoyed the whole thing Brian, especially the last stanza. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/2/2023 5:06:00 PM
Thanks very much for your thoughtful, congratulatory note on my contest entry. Best wishes always. Brian
Date: 4/2/2023 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Brian of a moment captured in time through your words. The poem is beautiful and the first four lines, in particular, are outstanding. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/2/2023 5:08:00 PM
Hello Gary, Your kind appraisal gives push to pen. I hope all is well with you. Sincerest regards, Brian

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