Retrospective a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

RETROSpPECTIVES unfinished &separating now returning to the allure of an invigorating sunburst of colour in memories surfacing becomin complicit involved & questioning dominated by & inspired by a setting so incarnates s by something haunting &engaging so very different &in lovable images depicting as if suggesting a vulnerable shyness doubting yet embracing tradition remaking on different terms

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