Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

Retrospective a Freed Verse

RETROSpPECTIVES
unfinished
&separating
now
returning
to the allure
of  an
 invigorating
sunburst
of colour
in  memories
surfacing
becomin
 complicit
  involved
& questioning

dominated by
& inspired by
 a setting
so incarnates s
by something haunting
&engaging
so very different
&in
 lovable  images
depicting
 as if suggesting
a vulnerable
shyness
doubting yet
 embracing
tradition
 remaking
 on different terms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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