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Premium Member His Pearl

HIS PEARL


So much happening in my making, 
the toss and turning, and painstaking,
The heights of troubles 
so breathtaking; 
for His glory my remaking 

Walking the ocean floors of humiliation
Those who once cared, no longer want affiliation
Hearing the mocking conversations
Unspoken gestures, more pronounced isolation.

Examining my own heart, 
putting myself in their shoes, 
If I were them, which thoughts would I choose? 
The deliberate silence to ensure an sure irritation, 
then the gift of a forced smile, 
for the entire duration 

Resisting to envy or be jealous over countless years
Degradation paving the way, of the tracks of my tears.
Making certain to air a graciousness 
through their compassionate seethe, 
Until my tumultuous cries break through 
to the point I can’t breathe.

Then suddenly my whole world has new meaning to me
As in an instant I am living the life I believed.
My promised season finally here, Joseph’s dreams coming true.
No longer dying in a cave, everything made new.
I am the daughter of the King, set apart from the world,
With sands of time and tribulations, God made me His pearl

Was for the purpose, the great commission, 
so that I’d never forget,
Who I was meant to be, from who I wasn’t yet.
Let my story be a lesson, when God have made you the head,
Those looking down on you today, 
will soon look up instead.

God is making you into a diamond or pearl,
What He will surely do for you, 
He’s already done for this girl.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Roar

I was taught
The greatest asset to have and own
Was to always strive to attain what one began.
From beginning to end
Never to give-up, give-in or falter
No matter how many hurdles, hazards or obstacles.
Believe in the lesson of success - the remaking of progress
With a mantra of fearless constitution-
The weight of the world was never my dearth.
I explored my path with the restraint of duty
Finding the enduring footing
To breed the obligation of justified power.
I cherished hope to engender faultless faith-
To echo the endowment of stamina and fortitude.
And as the arcane of my attempt became my creation,
The dreams would come and visit my soul
To speak with visions and mirrors in poems
The dissociation from the abode of my spirit
Surrendering to the sensual mindfulness 
To realize the greater part of myself....
Residing in the heart of a Lioness




July 15, 2019
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Premium Member In Hope of Just Reward

Mr. Carrot, the talking morning alarm clock making waking up fun. 
His loud chimes would shake the ground and woods and wake up the church nuns.
A small pleasure starting with sun-shine and under the ground holding none, 
forgetting it's at the farm thinking it's one sweet potato that won.

Black eyed peas eyed Mr. Wigley, curious and asked, "Who you looking at?"
Cedar waxwing with its chest puffed out in heaps, sweet musical and fat 
sings a tale of a cat who wiggled its tail;his heart swelled rat a tat tat
on swooning blueberries and cherries under glimmering awning.

Mr. Wigley leans on the sexy pears, tips his hat at sounds playing. 
Asparagus, spinach, broccoli, red, green and yellow peppers yell, 
"Buy me please!" as he went by. Tomatoes, green beans, and has beens also fell
in line, with the beets, cabbage beat to join in; we'll bring a southern belle 
to her knees in a carousel taste delight in a potluck meal spell. 

An ultimate decision was made. Mr. Wigley mused deep and hard,
listening to all their prepared flavored tales in the summer farm yard 
in hope of just reward, savors an inspirational luscious art.
I will definitely be remaking this again for my sweetheart.

12/16/2017
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

The Remaking

I stand where the sunset hugely spills    
Out upon subdued but still hotly
Glowering plains...                       
Now, perhaps, I should wistfully
Recall my own homelands; her 
Diminished and flattened hills,                    
Stretched and sleeping, far from yonder 
Adjacent wolfen domains.           
Vast plains, which, although of 
Unmatched grandeur, neither embolden 
To embrace upon mine passions... 
Or impart the reinforcement of 
Heartening succour...which the comfort 
Of those broken hills so pleasingly fulfils!       
For such is the pressing need to once 
More imbibe the contriteness that is 
The poor substance of this natives air;                             
Whilst, under cacophonous arrangement
Of timeless and haranguing bars,                            
Casting off all gaudy encumberment - 
Thee imposition of these finely stitched 
Robes,                  
To wander through uninhibited 
Fields: rudely revealed whence left
Fallow and bare!                   
And, humbling myself, but ne'er as 
Bold as Endymion, before vigilant 
Selene's disdainful glare,                         
I would'st endeavour, rightly or not to 
Thusly suppose,                       
To re-invent a lofty purpose beneath 
The hurtling rails of screaming stars;                   
Here, in happy destitution, to wrap 
Abouts in tattered remnants of 
Ragged moonlight...thrown aside
When callously abandoned there.   


Inspired by the "Pure" genius that was William Butler Yeats!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Storymaking

Story telling
seems good and sufficient therapy
for those who feel not so patient
with inefficiencies of story making.

RightWing dominant telling
yelling allows remarkable capital stagnation
v fluidity
of set-back
laid-back
v rapidly
non-vapidly 
multicultural health-developing 
pace

Supporting v avoiding
StraightWhitePatriarchal privileged 
race
toward win/lose universal capitalism 
space

My EgoWealthy Yang
disgrace
in conflict with EcoSystemic Yintegral 
health communication potential
place

Multiculturally intelligent
in win/win planning and co-design
humbling grace

Avoiding win/lose elite NorthWest sectoral
cornered monocultural history
inhumanely mono-faced
male supreme pectoral

Not even win/win mentioning
eco-politically camouflaged ecofeminist
SouthEast non-elite indigenous
matriarchal
enlightening and empowering
natural/spiritual churched and templed and synagogued
polygoogled BlueWonder and GreenAwe
polyculturing Heavenly Truths

YellowLight dawning our
redawning everyday EarthBeauty,
after climate's darkest ZeroSum 
concluding Left v Right 
unwinged disempowering hour

Co-investing, in steady shaking
win-yintegral EarthClimate bounty
re-invents ReStoried Listening
preliminaries to healthiest wealth
through EarthStory ReMaking

Rebaking Leftwing eco-health
is also rightwing's truest democratic
empowering resonant CreationBeauty
enlightens bountiful 
faith-resilient 
ego wealth.


Premium Member Giving Way

Who am I
to give Light's sway
to Earthly kindness?

Who am I
to praise
love's bold told synergy?
sun sung soprano 
diva voiced

Through life's more challenged
LeftBrain capitalized energies
fearing dark base shunning
echoing not yet mind dead
predicting bare survival choice.

Yet choice
may here 
and there be wrongly voiced
regarding numerous sins
without apparent othered victims
preferring to expand 
win/win resilient
thriving to rejoice
is obviously more brilliant

Restoring justice
non-verbally unchoiced
sacred Whole Identity Systems
could become our mind repletely full
of fertile health solutions
reseen as wealthier 
when just-right 
choice

To avoid further trauma narratives
degenerating loss 
losing fried-out markets
to support a regenerating win/win land 
where 1 is not 
not also 0 empty nonchoice
out to sea

In/out
Back/forth mindful 
of timely voice
sung sapient and signed silent
inside thoughtful 
Integrity's rejoice

For resiliently healthy
universally salvific
synergetic
win/win wealthy
making

Baking
up-shaking
frosting on the cake
remaking

Abating win-1 to lose-0 
less than restoring resonant kindness 
Yang and Yin's binomial rebalance 
choice

When mindful with this quest
for who are We to give 
Light's empowering sway
to Earth-compassioned 
wealthy choice? 

Of faith
We're all doing our therapeutic best
toward a trauma prevention Earth
easing off inside loathing diatribes
becoming Kindness Tribe
full-voiced

Curiously repeating
How do we already
give Light's empowering sway
to grow Earthy kindness?

To know
when our mindful care
leaves just enough time
to generously let go.

Premium Member FAITH IN GOD WHO HELPS US TO FOLLOW HIM WITH JOY

December 13 Faith in God Bible Meditations Based on 1Thessalonians 1-5 

Key Verse – 1Thessalonians 1:6 And ye became followers of us, and of the Lord, having received the word in much affliction, with joy of the Holy Ghost.

FAITH IN GOD WHO HELPS US TO FOLLOW HIM WITH JOY	

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His precious blood
Truly effective to purify transgressions’ flood
Likewise efficacious for our faith to gain heaven’s nod
Absolutely, the only means to purge sins, beyond discipline-rod.

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His power
Truly omnipotent midst salvation-assurance upon regeneration-tower
Likewise miraculous for our faith to bloom into Gospel seed-sower
Absolutely, the genuine spirituality-grower.

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His supreme leadership
Truly authoritative by His ministry-partnership
Likewise credible for our faith to practice effective stewardship
Absolutely, the sovereign might in productive discipleship.

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His wondrous working
Truly majestic in His marvellous transformation and remaking
Likewise great for our faith to increase midst pride’s breaking
Absolutely, the proven strength against filthy provoking.

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His holiness
Truly immaculate for our justification-completeness
Likewise radiant for our faith to shine in His righteous brightness
Absolutely, the magnificent seal of pardon’s completeness.

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His grace
Truly abundant to cover iniquities with His pardon’s embrace
Likewise unconditional for our faith to testify about His mercy’s rays
Absolutely, the marvelous gift worthy of our grateful praise!

God helps us to follow Him with joy along His sacrifice
Truly worthy along His compassion’s price
Likewise magnificent for our faith to serve Him by His divine advice
Absolutely, the perfect offering, Scripturally wise.

December 13, 2025
Form: Quatrain

Take of Taunia

Taught Iago to trance,
the pungent smell made me balance the stance,

raided the 'pulse' and sought no other deviant,

I was looted in the same way I soared above all the monumentleness, 
and got into it ahead.

They told us that we 'like' the hold on the today's whole whole because of the ways that the daze distracts in haze, on lightness and bled out fazed rocketry-

totality toward tanking is the remaking so I can start happily planking the tanned plinked' out shaking, 

and be my own staking-

he'd let me know in an outside laking that the entanglements are not withstood otherwise so in our own eye's we tie and tie, and say goodbye doll, die die!

Your own forgiveness is in a way it's own stay yet the hearing does not go over that one flip and dive to dig like it's all sits in...

Your keep and your bold are not getting as old as the try in our sky and demand of the night to spy...

I'd take anyone on in a jimmin' janky dotton berry heelie feelie wheelie straight down the center of common carry.

Premium Member Thing One and Thing Two

Things One and Two
visited Fitness Planet Earth,
a land of milk and honeyed promise

NonJudgement NonZero ego-health zone
for nonviolent communication,

Emergent win/win nongrunting
nonslamming
noncursing 
active compassion
in language
action
reaction
responsive positive communication

Internally and externally bilateral space
placed promised time
timeless co-empathic consciousness

CoEmpathic meditation
grows healthy minds
as massage
graceful touching/feeling action
endows multicultural
active win/win mediation

Embodied medication
to ego/eco-bicameral
macroeconomic politicization

Body/mind
Nature/spirit
therapeutic win/win thriving
EarthHealth Fitness optimization

Not win/lose survival of the autonomous fittest
by making my own stressed-out luck;

Instead,
win/win thrival of flexing resilient
fit in ingest

Remaking
reshaping
reconnecting
re-ligioning our cooperative win/win liturgies
lucky co-investments
co-empathic
bilaterally polypathic
resonant RightBrain Feeling ecopolitically engaged

And resilient Left verbalized intentions
of liberal loving logical win/win poli-economic
retributive judgment-free nonzero planetary Zone

For reconnected empowering bicameral enlightenment

For intelligent
cooperative
co-invested
democratically healthy
co-designing future egohealth/ecosystemic
co-relational wealth

Collateralized opportunity
to optimize thrival trends
for planetary
health/wealth fitness,

Said LeftBrain dominant
Thing autonomous ego One
to RightBrain nonverbally flexing
Things bilaterally ecosystemic 
and polypathically interdependent,
Two.

Premium Member Frenzy

FRENZY
imbued with
 sensibility
liberated
by a
creative flowering
gloriously
  austere
yet
 overwhelmed
by anxiety &
doubt
to the
point of
obliteration

increasingly
  remaking
 an adventurousan
 thing to  do
displaying
new shapes
  twisted
menacingly

simply
  presented
&
aesthetically
 significant
yet
never finished
they remain
terse &
  enigmatic
endless
possibilities

as
a
poignant
 epiphany
 breathing
 new life


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Form: Other

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