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Over the Moorlands

Sullen would be onset of grey, indivisible-dawning; Soon, lifting mist dissipating beneath the brae. Comes then a gentle heat arising with the morning... Thus the remaking of another new, glorious day. Sun-kissed slopes now aglow with purple blaze, Vast moorlands slowly stirring from quiet slumber; Clamorous whaups, hanging above the veiling haze, Burbling down to disappear into the tangled tundra. Together, paired oystercatchers pipe in rapid flight; Skipping wheatears explore dry-stone walls. There, old Barjarg, aglow in Junes vibrant light, And I awakening to the hidden otters whistling calls. Oh! to stroll once more upon the Cree's hallowed banks Inside the sanctuary of her jealously guarded hills. When tramping through the myriad of dew-drenched ranks That had across the sheep-strewn meadow spilled. If I but could joyfully follow the meandering course, Again, of those rocky, gurgling, opaque, amber waters. Thoughts, such as these, that surrender to a remorse... Nought but wistful memories that provoke to taunt us.

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Date: 5/3/2021 6:33:00 AM
ahhh this sounds blissful, your beautiful words portray such serene imagery in my head - now I want to go there too :)
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John Fleming
Date: 5/24/2021 6:58:00 AM
Allow me to say that it is a pleasure to make your acquaintance Melody -- and thank you! My best regards. :) john
Date: 5/2/2021 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD award, John! Your striking imagery truly appeals to our senses....most enjoyable. ~ Regards // paul
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John Fleming
Date: 5/24/2021 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Paul! I always enjoy seeing you put in an appearance at my little corner of the great Soup. My very warmest regards! :) john
Date: 5/2/2021 9:21:00 AM
Your praise ( POTD) is very well-deserved; you have truly penned a wonderful poem. Blessings and regards, John
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John Fleming
Date: 5/24/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your taking time to visit and comment...it is very much appreciated by me. My very best wishes! :) john
Date: 5/2/2021 1:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, John! Congratulations on POTD!
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John Fleming
Date: 5/2/2021 2:56:00 AM
Hello again, Kim! Thank you very much for taking the time to visit and comment...it is very much appreciated by me. My very best regards as always -- cheers! :) john
Date: 5/1/2021 10:30:00 AM
This is packed with wonderful imagery. I would like to visit this place you have described it so vividly. Congratulations on your honor of being the POTD. Blessings to you. Janis
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John Fleming
Date: 5/1/2021 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your taking the time to visit, Janis...and your gracious and kind comments of course. Dumfries and Galloway in the lowlands of Scotland on the west coast is indeed such a lovely place...lots of very happy childhood and teenage memories. My very best to you, Janis! :) john
Date: 5/1/2021 3:15:00 AM
Hi John, This is just beautiful! Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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John Fleming
Date: 5/1/2021 5:47:00 AM
Your taking time to visit and make your generous comments are very much appreciated by me I can tell you, Alexis -- many thanks! Please be assured that you will always be most welcome here. Cheers! :) john
Date: 4/30/2021 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful poem, John. Congrats on your POTD ~
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John Fleming
Date: 5/1/2021 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Line...always nice to see you put in an appearance at my humble little corner. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 4/30/2021 9:40:00 AM
So delighted to have come across this incredible write! POTD too, I see. Congrats, John!
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John Fleming
Date: 4/30/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thank you, Unseeking seeker...your gracious comments are most appreciated. Cheers! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 11:59:00 PM
Can relate to so much of this wondrous poetry, love the journey, John. Congrats of POTD.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 6:30:00 AM
Always a pleasure for me to see you have put in an appearance here at my little corner, Harry. Good to know you are still going strong -- stay safe, Harry! Many thanks! And all the very best. :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 11:41:00 PM
Oh John, your words enthrall my senses! This is incredibly beautiful and so deserving of POTD! I am saving it to my faves. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2021 6:25:00 AM
Ahhh...my most valued commentator...always a most special place here for you, Connie. It pleases me greatly to know that you enjoyed the read...your kind and encouraging comments mean a great deal to me. I truly hope you are on the mend now, Connie. Nothing can ever replace of course...but I fervently pray you have finally found peace of mind. My very fondest thoughts for you, Connie. Your friend. :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 8:00:00 PM
I want to bask in those *Sun-kissed slopes* Be a part of the "moorlands slowly stirring from quiet slumber" This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. The images you paint, are tender and vibrant, all at the same time. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 6:19:00 AM
Gosh, Brandy...you are so very kind in all your lovely comments -- thank you! And nice to meet you, Brandy. My best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 5:45:00 PM
Certainly deserving of POTD, John. Love the classy, classic style, feel, and flow of this paean to the Cree's hallowed banks. Magical! Light and Joy, Gershon
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 6:16:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon! Your kind and generous words are very much appreciated! My very best regards -- cheers! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 4:06:00 PM
Oh wow John! How nostalgic this is. Is this set in England? It is on my bucket list. Congrats on POTD.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 4/29/2021 5:54:00 PM
Scotland's on my bucket list too.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 6:13:00 AM
Nice to meet you, Jennifer. No, not in England...just outside a little village called Barrhill in the Dumfries and Galloway area in the lowlands of Scotland. Beautiful place! Oh how I wish.... ah well. Maybe someday. My best regards, Jennifer -- and many thanks! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 3:19:00 PM
such breathtaking imagery I would love to see it myself, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2021 6:06:00 AM
Very nice to see you, Jan. Hope you are content and secure in these troubled times. Many thanks for the visit and kind comments...always very much appreciated by me of course. :) john P.s Dumfries and Galloway is indeed a very beautiful place...although not as secluded and as uninhabited as I once knew it. Such a great shame...sigh!!!
Date: 4/27/2021 3:13:00 PM
Gorgeous writing and I see a POTD as well. Congrats on that deserved honor. As for matrimony and kids. It's not for everyone,so just enjoy your life, I say.
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Date: 4/28/2021 6:01:00 AM
Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Andrea...always so very nice to see you putting an appearance in here at my humble little corner. Hope you are well and happy, Andrea. My very warmest regards as always! :) john P.s Agreed...not for everyone. Still...I should have, at the very least, made the effort.
Date: 4/27/2021 1:54:00 PM
Great pen John, this is a rather superb piece with wonderful imagery and brings memories of the beauty of that area as it's years since I've been in that area maybe need to return again. Congrats on the POTD so are you still in Scotland? Take care, Gordon
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 5:56:00 AM
Hello, Gordon. Not in Scotland...live in Cheshire, England. Every Summer, as a teenager, I would travel up to fish on the Cree. I would stay in a static caravan just yards from the riverside. It was at a farm called Barjarg, quite near to a village called Barrhill. Lovely times! My very best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 12:14:00 PM
Congrats John on poem of the day--enjoyed lovely images of your beloved place.
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Date: 4/28/2021 5:47:00 AM
Good to see you again, Vijay. I very much hope you are in good spirits and excellent heath. You are always most welcome here! Thank you -- and my very best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 10:05:00 AM
You have described to us a place I l'll likely never see. It is a marvelous composition and your award is worthy of the work you obviously put into it.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 5:42:00 AM
Nice to meet you, ken...and many thanks for your time and kind comments. Very much appreciated! Best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 9:54:00 AM
John, congratulations on your POTD. You have taken us trekking through the stillness of a treasured memory to remind us of the places where we would return. Lovely images in your wistful poem of yearning. All the best.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 5:40:00 AM
Sam, many thanks for making the time to visit and comment...I can assure you it is much appreciated. My best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 8:38:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! I would love to go there. Congrats on POTD, well deserved.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Ann, for taking time to visit and comment -- it is very much appreciated! And nice to meet you also -- cheers! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 8:27:00 AM
A poets poem for potd, has all the quintessential qualities, I indeed have a yearning for a spectacular place like this in Wicklow, we used to go there annually on holiday as children, congratulations for a more than deserving potd, cheers David
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 5:14:00 AM
The happiest days of our lives...and it is only in later life when we truly realize it. Mistaken nostalgia? No. Just a yearning for what, in so many ways, was a more sedate, leisurely way of life uncluttered by all the intrusions that modern living can now impose upon us. How I wish those days had come at the end of my life...not the start...but I was still blessed in so many ways. Thank you, David. Best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Sun-kissed slopes now aglow with purple blaze," So colorful. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 4/28/2021 5:01:00 AM
Nice to become acquainted, Paula...and my gratitude for your visit and generous comments. Many thanks -- cheers! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 7:15:00 AM
Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on a well-deserved honor--POTD! I knew it was destined for more recognition when I first read it, John.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/28/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thanks, L.M....you are a gentleman, sir. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on having this fine write chosen as poem of the day.
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John Fleming
Date: 4/27/2021 5:19:00 AM
Nice to become acquainted, Robert. Many thanks for making the time to visit and comment...it is very much appreciated I can assure you. My best regards -- cheers! :) john
Date: 4/27/2021 2:00:00 AM
Sounds an amazing place John, I see from the comments its somewhere in Scotland. Love the imagery in this well composed verse. Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 4/27/2021 5:13:00 AM
Hello, Tom. The river Cree is situated in Dumfries and Galloway. It runs down to, and through, a village called Newton Stewart....and then empties into the Solway Firth. It flows through some of the most beautiful countryside in the UK! Dumfries and Galloway Forest Park is the biggest area of untouched forest still intact in not just Scotland itself...but indeed the whole of the British Isles. My very best regards Tom! And many thanks!
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