The premise behind this poem, What does cloud 9 mean?
A state of bliss, elation or happiness
cloud nine (uncountable) (idiomatic) Often in the phrase on cloud nine: a state of bliss, elation or happiness. quotations ? He was on cloud nine for days after she agreed to marry him.
I wonder whats on cloud nine
I wonder what its like up on cloud nine,
Would the weather up there be fine,
Would the storm in my head clear,
Would it free me of all my anxiety and fear,
I wonder what it would be like up on cloud nine,
Would it just cross over country borderlines,
Or would it take me up into the sky,
Would it take me to a city in clouds up high
A city ive only ever imagine in your minds eye,
A place of peace a place where life is beautified
That's free of impurities and the evils of our world,
A place I could only dream of, I guess it is a Dreamworld,
Oh how I wonder what it would be like on cloud nine
Would the weather up there be fine,
Would the storm in my head clear,
Would it free me of all my anxiety and fear,
Plotted dis---courses
scheduled thresholds
imminent Domain portals.
we glide through an aura prism
lens of Light, Halo colored. elastic beings
thoroughly vetted by Infinite energy pixels,
ellipting Exit sign strategies.
Soul train revival-boarding on Cloud 9,
the ride of your Lives Express.
Happy Trails to you
until we Stream again.
(All Souls Points Bulletin)
TEARDROPS TURN INTO SONG
I can’t stop thinking about you
While my guitar gently weeps
To turn teardrops into songs new
I keep for you on my quivering lips.
While my guitar gently weeps
Looking for my life behind the locked door,
I keep for you on my quivering lips
The touch of my vibrant passion you’d adore.
Looking for my life behind the locked door
This is love is all I find, I want to tell you
The touch of my vibrant passion you’d adore,
You’d be on cloud 9, you’ve no clue.
This is love is all I find, I want to tell you
I’m tired, don’t let me wait too long,
You’d be on cloud 9, you’ve no clue
Your love is forever, gives melody to my song.
I’m tired, don’t let me wait too long
To turn teardrops into songs new,
Your love is forever, gives melody to my song:
‘I can’t stop thinking about you’.
April 22, 2018.
Song titles of George Harrison used :
Behind the locked door
Can't stop thinking about you
Cloud 9
Don't let me wait too long
I want to tell you
Looking for my life
This is love
Your love is forever
While my guitar gently weeps
Teardrops
Am I dreaming, don't wake me up.
It just seems, that my consciousness
re-gain
feels like a smack from a train
Keep me on cloud 9 with you
I'm losing grip gravity has alot to do
........... with it.
Hold me tight, please don't let go.
I don't wish for heart to hit the flo.
My dreams are becoming bitter
sweet memories.
Don't you see, don't you remember
me.
I'm not ready for that bet.
Can we press reset.
Please don't wake me from this
dream yet.
Copyright © Alesha Roche' | Year Posted 2013
I'm in this constant struggle
3 words
8 letters
A taboo if they slip too soon
Soon....
A measurement of time without end
Painting hearts in my head
Me + you
Elementary songs playing on repeat
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
Like a feeling is measured by a kiss
Like love is measured by physical attraction
Not the intellect or the meeting of two souls
I love you.
I said it okay?!
Bottled up like the fizz from a soda shook too many times
I. love. you.
I feel it
All 3 words.
All 8 letters.
It shouldn't be as dangerous as we make it sound.
But it's as if I'm a suicide bomber
On a mission from which I'll never recover
Waiting.
Waiting.....
To be humiliated
or to be lifted up and put on cloud 9
Afraid
of the consequences of words
A loaded gun
How did we get here?
Why is it that we give so much power
To words
And why is it that when you don't say "I love you too" my worth is diminished
Sticks and stones may break my bones
But What you don't say
is what can really hurt me
But why?
2/10/16
Star light, star bright,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have the wish that I wish come true tonight,
I've put up way too many fights,
My heart has fell victim to it's latest heist.
Love.
I'm on cloud 9,
And despite what anyone says he's mine,
And though he has made me cry,
What is love truly without a fight?
Don't misinterpret what I'm saying,
No it wasn't ok for him to hurt me but together we're slaying,
And for us I'm constantly praying,
For my love has no repaying.
After a bad day he's the only one I want to see,
And when he comes through I'm instantaneously filled with glee,
I just want to jump and scream,
Hii-5 and Low-5 are an unstoppable team.
The thing with love is that it makes you feel bipolar,
The emotions that come with it are like a painful molar,
And at one point it seems as if it makes you turn colder yet bolder.
It's an uncontrollable roller coaster and I'm still bracing
myself for the ride,
With my love and heart as my trusted guide.
In the Philippines
There lives that special someone
Who commands respect
CRUISING ON CLOUD NINE
hills like green seas
skies lower clouds
like living rooms
furniture crowds
suffocating
simplicity
rooms accessories
with lifelike décor
pitiful candles
flying into nothing
small flames of delight
stay bright then flitter
dimmer into darkened
stop places of dread
no dreams…
is my life intriguing
perhaps appeasing
to your worsened
state of being
well…
I am on cloud 9
cruising…..
not caring
or
amusing
I hook myself
to only me
sticky candy
and
full treats
© Kim van Breda—20 October 2015
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Well I swore I'd never fall in love with you
But from the moment you came into my life
I fell head over heels for you like a silly
Teenager in high school...
I thought nobody could ever restart a
Fire that had long since died from the
Last time I loved and said goodbye but
Oh boy was I ever wrong you are proof
Love lives on, when I look into your DARK
EYES...
When I look into your DARK EYES
It’s just like magic and I get all warm
Inside maybe you are the reason for my
Being and why I never really gave up in
Believin' in love, somehow, someway maybe
I knew you'd come into my life some sweet
Day and now I am swept off my feet and
Feel like a dancin' fool on cloud 9 oh
Every time, every time I look into your DARK
EYES it feels just like magic and I feel
All warm inside...
I know it sounds funny but I could just
Grow wings and fly every time I look into
Those beautiful, beautiful DARK, DARK
EYES...
Chasing dreams and every hearts desire.
Were so mesmerized by loves eternal fire.
Dancing in the heat but not to get burnt.
Cherishing these moments from hard lessons learnt.
Hand in hand we drifted away and away.
Tangled in love its a new adventure everyday.
When the sun goes down.
I think to myself what an amazing treasure ive found.
When I close my eyes to sleep I dream of you.
I dreamed of you last night and the night before that too
Now 2 hearts have started to beat as one.
Chasing dreams and every hearts desire our dance has just begun.
People might say its just the honeymoon phase.
Its not there fault they cant see the error to there ways.
Smiles and laughs living here on cloud 9.
Well stop to dance on every rainbow we find.
were only here once to live this life.
Im not wasting anymore time to ask you to be my wife.
Let us dance off into the sunset.
To live our life that not done yet.
At parties where embraces and kisses run wild,
and alcohol flows like rivers;
I see a girl unlike the one I am use to.
I rub my eyes is disbelief, I pinch myself, I am not dreaming,
it is my dream girl, my friend
high up on Cloud 9,
smiling and dizzy,
my heart turns pale and faint,
my head aches,
I cannot breath.
What is this... a hug and kiss
from another's embrace and dirty lips;
I cannot believe,
I cannot feel myself,
I am frozen in time,
and cannot move-
I am lost;
I feel betrayal.
I feel sick,
don't come near me( I am dead inside-)
with eyes flamed red,
and dazed points of view,
puffed eyes and a blank look,
fighting mixed emotions of cool and sorrow;
oh my eyes burn to see such disgust,
awful feelings I am feeling.
Sick! I am feeling Sick!
Betrayal, sick I am SICK!
don't come near,
stay there, and kiss those dirty lips you've enjoyed kissing for so long,
my heart is broken, and I feel betrayed.
I am done, I am done, done that is what I am... it is fine... I am fine,
it... is... done...
.2.27.2014.
How can one person make you feel on top of the world
Making me feel more alive with every kiss
He dug me out of my hole of sorrow
Now driving me down the road of internal bliss
He makes me feel so alive
by making all my dreams reality
I'm floating on cloud 9
he saved me from the world of brutality
Dreams And Nightmares
When we go to sleep at night we usually have pleasant
dreams of happiness were we feel like we are on cloud 9
with some romantic partner or some beautiful island
destination, we see wonderful things of beauty, but all
of a sudden the dream drifts to another world of gloom
transporting us to the nightmare world were dark
evil happenings take place, it makes our thoughts change
our bodies grows cold and sweaty and we awake in terror
we have just experienced our worst fears out of the
nightmare world, we get up in wonder of what has
happened but later we find it is all but an illusion,
a trick of the mind, maybe this can be caused by guilt
or even food that has not agreed with us, or our
minds may have been troubled by a bad problem. We
must all go to sleep with a clear mind and dream happy
thoughts or we will enter the nightmare world once again.
Are dreams and nightmares similar, be inspired and enlightened by what my poem has to say about the 'Dream World'
Written 16th July 2013
I was just a kid,
Lost without a father,
Tormented by peers,
So many things I feared.
Disease, loss of family
I dont know where to go,
So I hid out on cloud 9
Till I spot a smooth clear road.
But before I could,
The hole dug deeper
As it starts to rain
Cant climb out
Mud slides and pain.
No one understanding
Is there anyone the same?
Still lost in this realm
So I choose another plain
A dream I cant escape
But its not a nightmare
While everyones in reality
A shame I cannot share.
Im still so lost
This dream is all I have
Stuck between growing up
And happiness,
Which one will outlast.
Now my life is far from over
More hardships to come
But I believe in my happy ending
Before my time is done.
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