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CRUISING ON CLOUD NINE hills like green seas skies lower clouds like living rooms furniture crowds suffocating simplicity rooms accessories with lifelike décor pitiful candles flying into nothing small flames of delight stay bright then flitter dimmer into darkened stop places of dread no dreams… is my life intriguing perhaps appeasing to your worsened state of being well… I am on cloud 9 cruising….. not caring or amusing I hook myself to only me sticky candy and full treats © Kim van Breda—20 October 2015

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Date: 10/20/2015 10:43:00 PM
Hi Kim, Sounds like you enjoy your own personal cloud. I cannot describe my cloud, LOL I fell off long ago. Anyways, We have all felt this before, without the treat of course. I enjoyed this most when the imagery became dim with reality. A wonderful flare, thanks for sharing. Good write. The imagery is especially effective. SKAT
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Kim van Breda
Date: 10/25/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thanks Linda... yeah happens often.. my own little cloud 9 to dilute the I am sure you do too ~~X~~