Kim Van Breda Poet Free verse

Cruising On Cloud Nine

CRUISING ON CLOUD NINE

hills like green seas
skies lower clouds
like living rooms 
furniture crowds
suffocating
simplicity

rooms accessories
with lifelike décor 
pitiful candles
flying into nothing

small flames of delight
stay bright then flitter
dimmer into darkened
stop places of dread
no dreams…

is my life intriguing
perhaps appeasing 
to your worsened
state of being

well…

I am on cloud 9
cruising…..
not caring
or
amusing

I hook myself
to only me
sticky candy
and 
full treats


© Kim van Breda—20 October 2015

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Skat A October 20, 2015 at 10:43 PM Hi Kim, Sounds like you enjoy your own personal cloud. I cannot describe my cloud, LOL I fell off long ago. Anyways, We have all felt this before, without the treat of course. I enjoyed this most when the imagery became dim with reality. A wonderful flare, thanks for sharing. Good write. The imagery is especially effective. SKAT Kim Van Breda October 25, 2015 at 6:45 PM Thanks Linda... yeah happens often.. my own little cloud 9 to dilute the pollution..as I am sure you do too ~~X~~