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Noticed Poems

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List of New Poems

PMPoem TitlePoetFormFormCategories  
All of us, Swans Elsa Rosee Free verse Free verse noticed, appreciation,
Modern Churches David Welch Blank verse Blank verse noticed, christian, culture, faith, how
Premium Member Poem FOREVER HOLDING HANDS Jim Yerman Verse Verse noticed, love,
INTRUSION Gerald Greene Free verse Free verse noticed, bird, music, nature,
Suddenly Swans Michael Craig Free verse Free verse noticed, cinderella,
Effort Christopher Goss Free verse Free verse noticed, confidence, growth, introspection, poetry,
Bougainvillea Michelle Smith Free verse Free verse noticed, earth day, flower, garden,
Premium Member Poem JIMMY THE SUIT Line Gauthier Monorhyme Monorhyme noticed, character, clothes, dance, image,
Premium Member Poem not to wonder douglas pederson Rhyme Rhyme noticed, age, funny,
Abode Ravinder Soni Free verse Free verse noticed, emotions,
Premium Member Poem A Store That Only Sells Leggings Caren Krutsinger Dramatic Monologue Dramatic Monologue noticed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Bougainvillea FARRAH VERONICA SINHA Free verse Free verse noticed, nature,
Premium Member Poem NOT DEAD YET Jim Yerman Verse Verse noticed, humor, old,
Premium Member Poem Darling, Delightful, Dubious, Delectable Despicable Day Caren Krutsinger Free verse Free verse noticed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Premium Member Poem Yang-Yin ReJoined Gerald Dillenbeck Political Verse Political Verse noticed, community, destiny, green, health,
Many, Many Days Catie Lindsey Free verse Free verse noticed, life,
Premium Member Poem Imagine This Andrea Dietrich Free verse Free verse noticed, freedom,
Premium Member Poem Moon Mystery Judy Dunbar Rhyme Rhyme noticed, animal, beauty, bird, cute,
The Fisherman meets the Fish allen beilschmidt sr. Free verse Free verse noticed, fish, water,
Premium Member Poem Bubbles Kyla Bressler Sestina Sestina noticed, change,
Mueller Report Equals Unexpected Coup For Trump matthew harris Political Verse Political Verse noticed, 12th grade, america, grief,
That start Cammil Meddley ABC ABC noticed, change,
Jiggle Wendy Nipas Rhyme Rhyme noticed, food, wine,
Premium Member Poem Memory of Gibble Gabble Woman Caren Krutsinger Lyric Lyric noticed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
The Ravens Michele Sherman Free verse Free verse noticed, absence, bird, dark, death,
TAMING TYRANNY Trudy Schrader Rhyme Rhyme noticed, relationship,
Mouth Michele Sherman Free verse Free verse noticed, crush,
Premium Member Poem Alpha Crucis Caren Krutsinger Free verse Free verse noticed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Premium Member Poem The Day I Died John Crowe Rhyme Rhyme noticed, death, heartbreak, lonely, love,
Civil Twilight Diarra Boatswain Free verse Free verse noticed, deep,
Premium Member Poem The Hunderd Best At Anything Jerry T Curtis Rhyme Rhyme noticed, appreciation, discrimination, humor, perspective,
On This Day Of All Days purbasha roy Free verse Free verse noticed, love, magic,
Premium Member Poem Starting To Dribble Jack Ellison Limerick Limerick noticed, fun,
Premium Member Poem LOOKING FOR MR GOODBAR Line Gauthier Free verse Free verse noticed, youth,
So Long Jakob Towell Free verse Free verse noticed, fate, home, lost, metaphor,
Premium Member Poem DOWN A STORM DRAIN GONE FOREVER JENNIFER PROXENOS Rhyme Rhyme noticed, adventure,
Premium Member Poem Jet Stream Boogie Caren Krutsinger Rhyme Rhyme noticed, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Having Hope Maria Kelly ABC ABC noticed, anxiety, body, cry, dark,
Premium Member Poem Marmalade Kitten, Teddy and Me Dear Heart Narrative Narrative noticed, cat, child, girl, lost,
Premium Member Poem Miss My Kissing Jack Ellison Limerick Limerick noticed, kiss,
HOUSE ON FIRE Anisha Dutta Free verse Free verse noticed, fire, how i feel,
Premium Member Poem CLASSIFIED PART FOUR Tom Cunningham Prose Prose noticed, science fiction,
Premium Member Poem CLASSIFIED PART THREE Tom Cunningham Prose Prose noticed, science fiction,
Premium Member Poem The Jackson County Fair Michael Wise Ballad Ballad noticed, dark, scary, surreal,
Premium Member Poem Remember me Danielle Brunelle I do not know? I do not know? noticed, hurt, loneliness,
One Follower At A Time, Part III David Welch Epic Epic noticed, conflict, corruption, dark, daughter,
Oversights ilene bauer Rhyme Rhyme noticed, writing,
Not just a mistake Ashlyn Hunt I do not know? I do not know? noticed, deep,
Let It Snow Sandra Dee Wilson Rhyme Rhyme noticed, angel, art, bible, child,
Premium Member Poem Almost Divorced charles messina Limerick Limerick noticed, humor,

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Noticed Poem Example

Love in the Silence of the Soul




As a young boy
Sitting in a pew
The winter darkness pressing down
Candlelight waves from hidden drafts
Shadows danced on the walls

I heard the words destined to me
“Be still . . . know that I am God”
So I listen  . . . eyes open
“The Passion of Christ”
I was gone . . . 

I saw eyes . . . 
Judas under the olive trees - Gethsemane
His eyes  . . . cold, darting  . . . filled with manic evil
Torchlights hissing  . . . turning eyes yellow
Then a kiss and chaos erupts
I closed my eyes  . . . suddenly afraid

Now I see a set of eyes  . . . filled with burning hate
A High Priest screaming . . .    B-L-A-S-S-P-H-E-M-Y ! ! ! ! !
All around ugly eyes staring with dripping contempt
Old men spitting with bared rotting teeth
Then I noticed . . . and . . . 
And my heart ached . . . 
Jesus . . . standing quietly with closed eyes

Then we were off to Roman authority -- Pontius Pilate
I saw his slanted eyes . . . squinting as if too much sunlight
Loud voices yelling outside . . .  “Crucify him!”
In my heart, I cursed these people – but his eyes
His eyes were dark, soft – forgiving
A hand washing and we are walking . . . 

To a hillside, a place called Golgotha – the skull
Empty eye sockets . . . a place of death
The eyes of soldiers hard, focused  . . . 
Spikes, woods – his sad eyes burning my heart
Closing my eyes, I heard a sharp gasp . . . soldiers yelling
“Lift”

As I opened my eyes – I was looking out with his eyes
We were seeing the same things
Angry faces with eyes of burning ashes
Taunting and jeering – a wave of hysteria hitting us
I heard and felt a deep groan 
Fear gripping me – I knew instantly we needed to go
Now!

Men, women, soldiers, slaves, leaders, teachers 
Eyes filled with blood lust
Evil, hatred . . . . I can’t breath
Death coming with the darkness
Jesus!        Can’t you see . . . 
Then I heard him whisper
 “Father, forgive them, they know not what they do.”

My heart sank realizing with horror
Jesus is staying . . . dying
I felt his purposeful breathing
Muscles, bones, joints aching with a searing pain
My eyes filled with tears

I saw another set of bloodshot eyes
A voice next to me yelling
“If you’re the Christ, get down from the cross
And take me too!  Let’s go!”
NO, NO!!!  . . . What is he saying
Those are my words – I am sick
My stomach seizes  . . . guilt fills me
I close my eyes

Another voice – on our right speaks
“Lord, remember me . . . “
Jesus painfully turns, twisting his body . . . looking . . . 
He sees blue eyes – my eyes
I am hanging next to Jesus
“Today you will be with me in Paradise”

We were one – together . . . one body
Now separate crosses . . . I feel crushed by loneliness
But his words . . . “Paradise” . . . “today”
He loves me – I see him looking at me
His eyes illuminating my soul . . . it hurts
I tried crying out – I love you . . . 
But only a sob squeaks out

Gravity pulling down pulling down
Eyes straining against the pain
Joints and ribs stretching . . .  popping
Chest heaving for each breath
Body convulsing against wood
Head back . . . eyes wide open . . . he screams
“My God! My God! Why have you forsaken me?”

No one answers . . . surprised eyes
In my tears I felt the agony of the cross
The bleakness . . .  hell
Dead eyes

Back in the pew
I heard the preacher 
“He died for you”
What . . . why . . . no . . . 
No, I don’t want you dead
Jesus?

                       .
                       .
                       .

Hey, wait for me – slow down
Running hard, breathing deeply
I stuck my head in empty tomb – hum??? . . . . 
I sat quietly next to Mary Magdalene . . . wondering
The gardener spoke – “Mary”
But he was looking at me – bright eyes
He said . . . “David”
“David, I love you”

Yes!!  Woo Hoo . . . 
Look at me . . . I am dancing
With shinning eyes 
“I love you too”
“I love you”
“Lord Jesus”
“I do”









David Meade
02/22/2015

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