Best Noticed Poems
Beard looks weird,
that's a lyrical genius to be feared,
you wrote a 6 year song and got the facts wrong,
fired with the hair and safety still on,
I guess that scope's just a tele,
with sights and hopes on the tele,
Machine Bun Shelly,
initials, MBS, Caps empty,
Mostly Bull Sh……
a superficial sipping soup to his belly
or is it breakfast for a serial prodigy,
steadfast out selling cereal probably,
problems with his intellectual property
so he's just a prop to stop and see.
6'4 and standing taller,
picking on a man, his wife and his daughter,
who needs protection ay,
you're a big and bad ball-less brawler,
that's the shallowest level you can resort to,
and though it's none of my bees wax,
you did it to be witnessed and receive plaques,
but it was easy and witless like corny flakes,
the business doesn't need Autotune fakes,
forcing the rhyme like all you want is a smoke,
not literally you'd choke, that's such a weak joke,
clearly begging for your songs to be bought up,
as if we went from Shady please stand up,
to worshipping a hairband on a no flair brand corrupt
and yeah I admit some of it was good, generous, but look,
with 6 years to write it should have been off the hook,
this lame ass your best and you took as long as you could,
when your next hits out you'll remember when you last stood,
and you'll be mocked by the only line that was any good,
MGK can't stand up,
that'll get you like Cranbrook,
from Cleveland Ohio,
leave now and fly home.
Note the depth and the many double entendre in this,
written within an hour of hearing that diss,
MGK's peak, now for the diss-appearance,
I've heard you can't write your own lyrical sentence,
that's dense, how you ever gona go the distance,
now go into the distance with your spoon and bowl,
you had your 15 minutes so back to your hole.
Part 2: Picking the rhymes apart and taking a shot, on my page to read now.
* the second line is a double entendre,
a serious comment about Eminem and a sarcastic one about MGK, you know, cus rhyming beard and weird is amazing haa.
* Hair and safety clip on
* Just a tele, a telescope
* Initials - cus MGK initials but Eminem doesn't M&M
I'm standing in a crowded room, but yet I'm all alone.
I'm screaming at the top of my lungs, but no one hears me.
I'm jumping up and down, panicking, but no one even bothers to look up,
To notice me!
PLEASE notice me, give me some attention
It seems as though our body and mind waves are in different divisions.
Separated by negativity
Our childish minds and stupidity.
Trust and Truth. Some people find it hard to show this.
But all they really want to do is be noticed.
poka-dots and stripes
black blue red purple and green
these are my favorites
Have you ever noticed that look on a persons face when she/he is trying to close
their shoelaces in a perfect manner? It’s the very same look when concentrating
in an exam…
Have you ever noticed the silence that falls upon you after a lot of laughter? It’s a
feeling that somehow you feel like something’s missing…
We always say Oh my God I just had a terrible hair day! When we don’t know that
the person beside you just had a hard day listening to her parents shout all day
long…
Have you ever noticed that nobody has time? And everybody is too busy for their
own good? While a patient with an illness that cannot be cured always says, yes
I still have time…
Have you ever noticed that twelve years attending school you never say, thank
God for these memories and when you grow up that’s all they become…
memories and not friends that still keep in touch?
Isn’t it funny that old people always whine about younger ones, while younger
ones always complain about the old people and once either one of the old
people or the young people go and leave or pass away they think about it … why
didn’t we get along?
If you are a teenager you would think lectures are such a drag, while you wouldn’t
know that adults aren’t so fond of it either. They care. So why don’t you?
And lastly life and love the two things that deserve the whole time of the world.
Smile the world has a beautiful source of life, and love it makes like worth living.
So why not enjoy them?
V1:
I guess why doesn't matter, but I know I always will.
wonder why you were the you, the one I tried to kill.
I left you long before I knew, you were always there,
by the time I had it figured out, I claimed I didn't care.
chorus:
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Daddy Daddy, Daddy why?
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Why is it I can't cry?
V2:
All the common obstacles, the fashions of the day.
excuses, reasons, happenings, all came into play.
I said you built a wall between, I said you didn't care,
By the time I had it figured out, the place you'd been was air.
Bridge:
Oh the dam broke brothers,
but I never saw the flood
A tide of life washed over me
and with it I made mud
Of the solitary life I've lived
but now I know it's true:
Brothers please forgive them,
for they know not what they do.
V3:
I guess why doesn't matter, but I know I always will,
wonder why you were the you, the one I tried to kill.
Anger burning in my heart, sure as hell I tried,
To kill the man who lived your life, but I'm the one who died.
Chorus:
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Daddy Daddy, Daddy why?
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Why is it I can't cry?
V4:
Many years have passed on by, with you not around.
I never felt much different, with you in the ground.
But if I could see you one more time, one thing I'd ask of you,
Daddy please forgive me, if it's the last thing that you do.
Final chorus:
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Daddy Daddy, Daddy why?
Father, why'd you do it?
Father why'd you die?
Why'd you live your life like that?
Daddy daddy let me cry.
* original song by lim'rik flats
Am i just A convenience to you? I try and try to make you visualise the potential me and
you have deep inside. I sometimes wish that I pass your mind, so I dont feel so stupid for
always having you cross mine. I wonder why your eyes are so blind you only see the beauty
which will soon begin to die. You dont see my beauty within, you only see my scars, and
smile which hides the truth of A love-sick heart being ripped apart becoming love warned out
and thrown out. Do I need to have killer thighs with a perfect sense to accessorise, or
beautiful eyes with a seductive style just to be noticed by you that once in a while? Well
sorry I dont wear gold or diamond chains, or even play these love sick games. Im not
everything or anything but will always continue to shine because I will forever hold my head
up high. I am noticed now, for my question is mirrored back at you. What do You need, To
be noticed?
- Wiko Te Maru
I Noticed; “Jesus Loves You,” Above Your Door!
I noticed a sign, “Jesus Loves You,”
above your front door.
I want to know about him!
I want to know more!
Could you tell me without
any hesitation...
About Jesus and his plan
of salvation?
Could you tell me about
being born again?
And share with me how
much you love him?
What is it like to become
a Christian?
And to serve Christ,
As a daily mission?
I want to know how God
has changed you!
I don't really know whom else to turn to.
Are you one that I can
really depend?
I assume that Jesus is
your best friend?
Please listen to what
I have to say...
And spend some of your time
with me today!.
By Jim Pemberton
You saw her ever smiling face
You just loved her laughter
You were amazed by her caring soul
You wished she was your child
You wished your kids were like her
Ever noticed how lonely she was?
Do you remember the day you saw her sitting alone down the road?
Ever wondered why she was sitting alone under that tree?
What about the day you saw her sitting in that place of sleeping?
Did you ever noticed her shattered soul?
She was a "happy kid/soul"
But deep down she was a broken soul
She missed her parents
To her, a medicine to wake the dead would have been great.
She was a "happy kid/soul"
But deep down she was empty
She was a slave in her parent's house
Having to do house chores was nothing to her,
Her mother taught her well.
But.. having her aunt's husband forcing his way inside her tiny body, takes the cake.
She was a "happy kid/soul"
But she was empty and hopeless
That she thought suicide was her only hope.
Someone should have noticed
Haven’t you noticed sometimes that it goes
As if not with yourself, but with somebody else
Whom you never desired to know, but who knows
Something about your state of health
I've no clue how it happens, but it seems unreal
That I’m not the same anymore
It is more than surprise, that I have to feel
A stranger, whom I cannot ignore.
He was a mild mannered man,
a Clark Kent type
He was never noticed at work,
although he never missed a day in his life
Each morning, he exchanged the same bland, trite pleasantries
No information was ever given of his personal history
He preferred it that way,
to just blend into the background
Don't make waves,
don't make a fuss
Whenever their was a corporate crisis,
he didn't get involved,
he let waste management clean up the mess
Though he was given the nickname, Mr. Clean
It was because he had a neat office cubicle,
tidy as the day he first got there, some thirty years ago
Other than that casual, circulating office joke,
he wasn't noticed at all one bit
He didn't make any personal connections with his co-workers,
never tried to socially interact at work or off the job
They looked at him as being just an ordinary, boring guy,
who didn't have much of a life
No one ever noticed him
Until he came to work with a gun on his last day
Retirement was gonna be a free fall,
after he threw the golden parachute away
The news reports said that he only killed one person,
but they couldn't make the connection as to why
It was someone in the Human Resources department,
whose unlucky day it was to die
A bright, young detective finally figured out the mystery of it all:
Louise (Lois) Lane never once,
ever returned any of his alter ego calls
Initially the rich built big houses,
The poor whatever they afford.
Materials differ in both cases
Completing the project made a
difference too!
But today's wise women took charge of that,
Building liberally what they could afford.
Using materials, man-power too,
These wise women went the metallic way!
Though this in not for everyone,
It proudly shows how some liberated women,
Refused to sit and let time go by!
Don't call them rich, don't call them poor;
The term should be "Women Liberated",
Especially if they live alone!
And so now view these metal cans,
As well adorned shipping containers too,
I couldn't help but share them with you!
Barely noticed amongst the crowd
It's that one last stop-sign romance
Signalling the end, the tragic demise
Never again, no train station glance
Barely noticed amongst the crowd
It's that one last opening heart
The thoughts spin by, identical but not
For he had the edge, the classic head-start
The short pink dress
the long blonde hair
She cakes on her makeup
but you dont care
She wants you to notice
that shes there
Like the night of your first kiss
Do you tell her you love her
does she know
Does she know how you feel
although its been a year
Do you treat her with love or make her feel fear
She waits for you to open her door
but you bite her head off
and then enter a storm
She doesnt know why
she deserves this pain
waiting for someone
to show her the way
she'l forgive you again
and again and again
until one day,
it will be too late
there's something about this air
its misty morning rise
feels heavy
like a thunderous rain
pounding against window's
the eyes of a soul cries
somewhere in the fog
lost within the edges
of society
in silence
it's shrouded
almost unnoticed
but i see it
peeking through
like this sun
beneath clouds
yet i can't feel it
in its hidden state
the warm glow
the way it was always shining
now sits dormant
no one saw it waning
but i did
i wondered why
but never questioned
do we ever question
every passing storm
or is it just the ones
that leave the biggest impacts?
perhaps no one else noticed
it was growing dimmer
in the recent months
no one saw
the storm approaching
like i did
i almost feel the weight
this soul bears
it's heavy
upon my mind
like this air
as it chokes me
on thoughts
yet i know
not why
I have noticed John writing less, visiting less, commenting less...perhaps many did too...i just never questioned because i am not one to pry...as the first to notice his farewell poem, it weighed heavy...i have sensed something for a while now and his short replies to those of us that did comment on his poem seem so off for John, out of character...i pray he is well and all is okay
Have You Noticed?
What first began as a mild attraction
Grew so large and divided itself by a fraction
What used to be your laugh, what used to be your smile
Is what causes me to hang in awe- for awhile
I feel a sudden urge for you to hold me, to tell me you care
But if you hold such desire, I can't tell that it's there
And I just can't say a thing, to you or anyone
Lest this friendship we have fall away
So I keep it all inside me, hoping and wishing
That you'll feel the same for me someday
Do you ever catch me looking at you, before I look away?
Did you ever notice a change of feelings as I fell for you that day?
Of course not, we're just friends, it could ruin everything
So behind your back I mount the stage, and about you I'll sing
There's nothing better than the feeling I get when I'm with you
But nothing worse than knowing, my dream won't ever come true
for now, I guess I'm happy just being by your side
I await that wondrous day to come when I won't have to hide
I try so hard to impress you, to go the extra mile
For you roam my thoughts all day, you always make me smile
Just listen to me, a lovesick freak
And I have to let this all go
But as soon as I've made up my stubborn mind
I feel an urge to let you know
Did you know that you're amazing? Know that you're the best?
It makes me wanna sing to you, to tell you all the rest
When I look at all the couples walking down the street
I can't help but think of you
I fell in love with your laugh, I fell in love
I only wish that you knew