Low Grade Poems | Examples


Turn Off Your Head Lights

That’s not the light you're seeking.
Words cannot live
with your brain all lit up like that.

Let those dark parts of your body,
those body-prayers mostly ignored,
gift to you a poem.

Most of your better images
are born in that low-grade radiance
of flesh and bone.

After the glow
you can fill in the gaps

but not too much
or you’ll cover up
what you should have revealed.

Rattle

In light industrial units, sheet-metal roofs
ping under the rising heat of the sun.
Sounds of tin stretched into rhythm.
He tumbles out of a fuzzy dream
tramples over himself, sucks in
half-digested thoughts.
Morning on the edge
of a medium-sized mid-west city,
Mourning doves throttle a coo or two.
This late chiming morn,
he shares a first-rate breakfast tea
with the chug and chur
of a de-frosting fridge
wallows awhile in flabby abstractions.
Minor keys ding aluminum sidings,
gradually low-grade whispers
stutter into words, a kind of poem
he can almost hear.


Premium Member resolve of sainted mother

The super low-grade low-brow, low-born guy
Is not at all a low life, but we don’t know why.
Possibly it is the resolve of is sainted mother
She made most of her parenting mistakes on his low-brow brother.

Premium Member Interstellar Space


                                     Space
                                   between
                                 stars is not
                                empty at all.
                              But vast quantities
                             of neutrinos, atoms,
                          molecules and dark matter
                        with photons from radiation 
                      ranging wide from highest energy
                 to low grade cosmic microwave background.

                  Bubbling plasma in interstellar space
                    contains charged particles all over 
                    embowered by soft cosmic glow.
                     Space between stars increasing 
                           as stars receding far
                              from one another .
                                 Universe on
                                   expansion 
                                      to run
                                        on.

Premium Member Mit dem niedrig carbon, Weg low grade carbon out

Politiker niedrig carbon auß
Low grade carbon Politicans go!
Ihr seid nicht nuztfoll kein wert
Kein ahnûnug
You are of no use, you are mindless
Cronies.' 
Der zukunft ist heir im Berlin heute
2024, die leüte sind rau! sie whërte
Du bist auß-pieste' die bauer
Im friedens laßen.!
The future is here, in Berlin today in
2024, the people are angry.' They are
Defending, you have gone off-track.'
Leave the farners in peace.'
Du bist niedrig carbon mensch
You are low value carbon people.!


Premium Member Delusion To Illumination

If not this, then that,
arguments fall flat,
our ire 
grows as we contract,
with love and light lacked,
cold fire
forms with fears a pact;
being ego backed,
we tire.

Objects we aspire
and seek to acquire,
they fade
because thoughts we hire
around dark desire
don’t aid
soul to fly higher.
Ego’s a liar,
low grade.

With fears to rest laid,
pure joy readymade
does act
and kindness repaid,
resting in love’s glade,
shows tact,
blunting karmic blade,
that we in bliss wade,
love tracked.

Poet: Dim Yourself Down

Words cannot appear
with your brain all lit up like that.

Most of your better images
are born in that low-grade radiance
of flesh and bone.

After the low glow
you can fill in the mind-gaps
with moonshine and lighter fluid.

Now you can switch
the blinding glare of reason
back on again, but never fully

or you may cover up
what you have just revealed.

Premium Member Autumn Constanza

Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall
Trees, nude gods (?), welcome the winter
Rainbow colors on sky-linter...?

Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call
Days, like shade of low-grade jade, fade 
Nights slow-down, of their dusk, afraid

Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl 
Dewdrops fill the lips of fresh blooms
Humble grass plume, mesmerized, zooms

Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl 
Moon marches toward the sky-height
Do stars, to shine, among them fight? 

Within me there's an unknown squall 
Like desert dune-frock-frills, heart grills
Thrill of nature in each cell fills

Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall
Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call
Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl
Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl
Within me there's an unknown squall


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Their March

Their March

So, you dropped by to learn where the Future soon will be
And what the fascist’s creed will ultimately decree.
Constructed oh so steadily by Republican traitor calls
The fascist acid seeping through our legislative halls

Broadcast destructively by media incompetent,
Misinformation besets the right-wing ignorant
Low-grade intelligence collects the rotted theme
So, votes are banned, Rights are canned to complete the fetid scheme.

While the Democrats administer the distractions fascists breed
Democracy’s chipped away - Constitution’s left to bleed
Can’t see the forest through fascist planted trees
But only on distractions do left-wingers work to please.


Our foundation’s being eaten while our building’s being cleaned
Fascist erosion’s fed while Democracy’s demeaned
Next time you “drop by” I think I’ll hear you say:
Why didn’t we divert our fight … go on to Save the Day?

But … by then, it’ll be way too late.


Medgar Fallon Roe

Turn Off Your Lights

That’s not the light you are looking for.
Words cannot live
with your brain all lit up like that.

Let those dark parts of your body,
those body-prayers mostly ignored,
gift to you a few poems.

Most of your better images
are born in that low-grade radiance
of flesh and bone.

After the glow
you can fill in the gaps

but not too much
or you’ll cover up
what you should have revealed.

Premium Member My Prayer Wheel Has the Blues

It's getting late-time to leave for work,
where we've lost our first to the red Wuhan curse.
I'll be strolling the halls with his freshly minted ghost.
Hopefully it won't loathe me, I pray it leaves me alone-
Everyone's masked and macabre tinged. 
Management is working remotely from home 
but giving us free soda and chips.
With a side of ham and corona on rye 
all this for risking our insignificant lives-

I'm starting to make more mistakes.
Taking days off for the most trivial things.
I'm getting old and soft-I'm suffocating.
Every day is just another bluish Monday. 
but we plow on-there's loved ones to feed...

My psyche is quickly thinning. 
The mind swirling like a 70's mood ring. 
With pinches of low-grade hashish. 
My faith sure could use a good cleaning,,,
to rid its prayer wheel of debris,
so, it can start spinning freely again. 

I'm already beat and have a headache,
lunchtime is still two and a half hours away.

Rattle

In light industrial units, sheet-metal roofs
ting under the rising flames of sunlight,
sounds of tin are stretched into rhythm.

He arises, rolls off the edge of comfort
tramples on himself as if he had 
a baggy skin.

Morning on the edge of a medium-sized mid-west city,
“This summer
I will inflate or die”, he thinks,
“this late chiming morn,
I will behead habitual pretensions”.

“First-rate breakfast tea”, he thinks.
sucking his lips.
Minor keys ping as a tin roof warms up,
gradually low-grade whispers
splutter into tuneful rattles.

‘Those sounds’, he thinks,
‘I can use somewhere,
after all I am a poet
of sorts’.

Kiss the Pride


Steely conceit,
low-grade manufactured lies
Stolen property:
iron crowbar kiss the tinted window glass
before the face paint dries
Idol chassis things 
rolling off the conveyor belt
Humble beginnings — 
discarded memories ... slag from the smelt
Silver dross assembled self,
triple A ego batteries required
Love in tow:
another vow insurance scam liar
You may now kiss the pride,
lift the veil of the scarred innocent heart
The black widow is once again a bride,
wiping those silken teary eyes
Can’t shatter the glass ceiling web 
that ensnares your soul
Upon further arrogant inspection,
shutdown emotional quality control
Reinforced vanity — 
upgrade the annealed haughtiness
Trophy buck showcase
the taxidermic truth reinvented self

The Bus Trip

The Bus Trip 
We are driving to Cascais on Sunday my wife wants to take 
the bus she thinks we are too old to drive 300 miles. 
On the bus, you might risk sitting by someone who can`t afford 
water or soap that is a low grade working person on his way to 
use a spade and whatever to build a trench that keeps the water 
away when it is raining

I`m  a tonic water socialist and read the Guardian, crystal glasses 
and a sneaky *** on the loo. To meet a proper working class person 
would shatter my illusion and bring back a memory of my father last time 
I saw him it was on a bus and he was drunk.
I will drive- anyway- not long from now I will not be able to they are 
putting up obstacles to stop us old ones driving

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