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Autumn Constanza

Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall Trees, nude gods (?), welcome the winter Rainbow colors on sky-linter...? Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call Days, like shade of low-grade jade, fade Nights slow-down, of their dusk, afraid Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl Dewdrops fill the lips of fresh blooms Humble grass plume, mesmerized, zooms Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl Moon marches toward the sky-height Do stars, to shine, among them fight? Within me there's an unknown squall Like desert dune-frock-frills, heart grills Thrill of nature in each cell fills Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl Within me there's an unknown squall 22 September 2022 In Remembrance of Connie -Autumn Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 11/5/2022 10:39:00 AM
Such vivid imagery throughout this poem... It really pulls the reader in and takes their imagination along for the ride... Great work! Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 10/22/2022 2:01:00 PM
I can imagine Connie reading this poem with a golden smile Chris, you did an amazing job, she would be proud of you, Congrats
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/22/2022 9:31:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 10/21/2022 8:59:00 PM
The poem contains some catchy usages like 'leaves like reprobate angels fall', frenzy fog spreading a shawl, dew drops filling the lips of fresh blooms'....etc ! In the midst of all these delightful scenes, there is an unknown squall within the mind . Beauiful poem. Congratulations, Chris !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/22/2022 5:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 10/21/2022 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj …..for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your special Autumn Constanza. ‘The thrill of nature each cell fills,’ certainly fit Connie’s great love for everything on this earth. Best wishes, SuZ
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/22/2022 5:37:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me and opportunity. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/26/2022 7:00:00 AM
‘Leaves like reprobate angel fall’ ‘Desert dune-frock-frills, heart grills ‘ …well thought composition. Blessings
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/22/2022 5:37:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/26/2022 12:48:00 AM
There are so many beautiful images in this poem..... ! Of all I like....'Frenzy fog trying to spread its shawl' .... So lovely !
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