Autumn Constanza

Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall
Trees, nude gods (?), welcome the winter
Rainbow colors on sky-linter...?

Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call
Days, like shade of low-grade jade, fade 
Nights slow-down, of their dusk, afraid

Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl 
Dewdrops fill the lips of fresh blooms
Humble grass plume, mesmerized, zooms

Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl 
Moon marches toward the sky-height
Do stars, to shine, among them fight? 

Within me there's an unknown squall 
Like desert dune-frock-frills, heart grills
Thrill of nature in each cell fills

Leaves, like reprobate angels, fall
Birds, their hatchlings, to go home, call
Frenzy fog tries to spread its shawl
Sun, on sea-front, performs cool-crawl
Within me there's an unknown squall


22 September 2022
In Remembrance of Connie -Autumn Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Such vivid imagery throughout this poem... It really pulls the reader in and takes their imagination along for the ride... Great work! Congratulations on your placement!
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 2:01 PM
I can imagine Connie reading this poem with a golden smile Chris, you did an amazing job, she would be proud of you, Congrats
Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:59 PM
The poem contains some catchy usages like 'leaves like reprobate angels fall', frenzy fog spreading a shawl, dew drops filling the lips of fresh blooms'....etc ! In the midst of all these delightful scenes, there is an unknown squall within the mind . Beauiful poem. Congratulations, Chris !
Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Christuraj …..for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your special Autumn Constanza. ‘The thrill of nature each cell fills,’ certainly fit Connie’s great love for everything on this earth. Best wishes, SuZ
Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Thank you very much for giving me and opportunity. May God Bless You!
Dutta Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 7:00 AM
‘Leaves like reprobate angel fall’ ‘Desert dune-frock-frills, heart grills ‘ …well thought composition. Blessings
Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 12:48 AM
There are so many beautiful images in this poem..... ! Of all I like....'Frenzy fog trying to spread its shawl' .... So lovely !
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