Rattle

In light industrial units, sheet-metal roofs ping under the rising heat of the sun. Sounds of tin stretched into rhythm. He tumbles out of a fuzzy dream tramples over himself, sucks in half-digested thoughts. Morning on the edge of a medium-sized mid-west city, Mourning doves throttle a coo or two. This late chiming morn, he shares a first-rate breakfast tea with the chug and chur of a de-frosting fridge wallows awhile in flabby abstractions. Minor keys ding aluminum sidings, gradually low-grade whispers stutter into words, a kind of poem he can almost hear.
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