Long Loss Poems

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Premium Member The Dust Accumulated From a Span

The dust accumulated from a span
Of years that reaches well into the past,
In folders placed from back when it began;
Discrete events across a distance, vast.
Like vapors freed by comet's forward cast,
Receding, fading like a tail mundane.
Will aught of this trajectory remain?
Or pass by undetected, with no trace?
Or counting all as loss, seek better gain:
To know that You ordained this merry chase?

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(for the ‘Dizain’ poetry contest, on the subject of ‘Dust’
cleaning out my desk drawers after a career of work

Sponsored by Constance La France
Submitted 2/4/22)
© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Dizain


Premium Member Collateral Hearts

To kindle flames for which the heart has yearned,
One sets out on a quest to find great love,
Each mountain climbed, no corner left unturned,
From deepest seas to endless skies above.

As sunlight pierces through a clouded sky,
True love awakens what was cold and still,
It finds its nest where deepest passions lie,
In spaces longing for true love to fill.

Yet in the strongest bonds, a fragile chance,
Should love be found then lost, one must accept,
A void to reach the depth of its expanse,
Is left within the space of love once kept.

To seek a love so deep, one risks its cost,
A price to match the weight of love, if lost.
Form: Sonnet

I Wonder Where I Am

Before my first heartbreak
Before I'd been done wrong
I was a happy man
Who loved heart and soul

But now I'm a shadow
Of the man I once was
It's like I've built up walls
It's like I've given up

Where has my heart gone
Why has my passion all died
Though I spread my wings
I can no longer fly

Who have I become
Oh how I miss that good man
I lost him so long ago
I wonder where I am

Cause the man that I gave her
Is so little of me
He's just pieces of the once was
This I believe

My happy's just contentment
My contentment's a lie
The degree of my sorrow
Is now something I hide

For somehow I lost me 
In the blink of an eye
The man who I once was
The man who loved life

So I go on without him
I find peace through the strife
Hoping my wish is granted
Hoping I realize

That though he is gone
What remains to this day
Is for those pieces though fallen
To soon be reclaimed
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Kolbe Responds

Mother: Oh Raymond, Raymond, what's to become of you?  :(
Raymond: I'll stay pure & give my life; Our Lady says it's true.

Jesus: Father Maximilian Kolbe, if you love Me... feed my sheep!  :O
Priest: And I'll even share my soup, and my Auschwitz brothers-- keep.

Nazi: Prisoner number 16,670--- who are you?! :O
Fr. Kolbe: I am a Catholic priest! I have no family, too.



[Inspired by:
A Man for Others: Maximilian Kolbe --the Saint of Auschwitz-- in the Words of Those Who Knew Him book by Patricia Treece, + the M.I. movie
(not Mission Impossible, but the Militia of the Immaculata!)]

Premium Member Moonlit Sky

I’m flapping in the wind like a torn sail
The sea of life is rough from shore to shore
I am feeling tired, worn and oh, so frail
Losing things, I cannot find anymore

A broken heart bleeds across crimson skies
Where the sun shuts me down another day
A horizon far, where the sea gull cries
My soul searches waves for another way

Then, upon the dark waters a glimmer
As the full moon shines, a pathway for me
I follow the light of its pale shimmer
Transformation into a calming sea

Now I rest, under the clouds passing by
Feeling all the glow of a moonlit sky

Heidi Sands

8/22/18
Form: Sonnet


Premium Member Adieu, Adieu

Twenty-Twenty-Two

                                             Adieu, adieu

                                          Though you pass

                                             Deepest alas

                                        We see you through

                                          With losses true

                                               New Year 

                                      Twenty-Twenty-Three

                                          Upon your heals

                                           Replaces thee 

                                        We'll hold on tight

                                          Sweet Memory,

                                         Of those we lost;

                                         A mounting cost

                                          Time marches

                                              Speedily.
                                              
                                          We say adieu

                                       Remembering you

                                       And those we had

                                     While you were new

                                  Though old Time Square

                                      Drops Apple there

                                    We'll wipe our tears

                                      For bygone years

                                  And with the toll bell of

                                           Midnight....

                                  Another year rolls into

                                             Sight


                                             Adieu 

                                        Connie, Rico,

                                      Now, Milton too,

                                        The Soup lost

                                             Much

                                       In  loss of  you

  
                                            ~BJ~
Form: Rhyme

The Denial of Love

In this life when the moments cross.
And bring my body to pass my successor. 
In the silent flask, reflections on the glass,
Paint the dark shadows becoming clearer.

A revelation of time in my waking nights 
Became a burden of my daily obsession. 
With the fragility of the impure thoughts
The denial of love enraged with emotion. 

In a whirlwind of changes on your mind.
I loved you as only love can be found once. 
Although we knew that this love was kind
On volatile heart given this slender chance.

A dream that may last to the end of our being. 
Was a reality, lost behind a distant screen.
Personalities are divided between everything.
We own and thought we could have been.

Our life-ending denied by the blatant proof.
Broken, with the awakening that is fading. 
The rapid troop of an oath is taken in holy truth.
Assemble in the severity of feelings faltering.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Laundry

He glances through the curtains as she leaves.

And he knew she was going with him instead.

Desperately he washes his soul of her but its for naught.

And  he hangs each feeling on the line and the cool breeze.

She walks to the corner and gets into his car and flips her hair.

He always loved the way she flipped her hair and the body after a drink.

Her body would glisten with the sweat of his thrust and the bite on his shoulder.

The car pulls away and he watches the lights drive off with his heart and the bite.

The laundry machine moves like her and shudders and vibrates.

But she will return with food from the Chinaman.

Chinese food was how he knew.

She never ate Chinese food except afterwards.

The clothes lay fluttering in the night air as his heart dried.

And she came home with egg rolls and the feint smell of polo.
Form: Narrative

Long, Long Ago

I find the one remaining photograph from my wedding:
everyone is still smiling, despite the way things turned out
(time can fade print, but the smiles remain fixed forever).
Somehow, that one picture survived;
the others had fallen victim to Mum's scissors,
      long, long ago.

My dad is wearing his blazer and one of my ties;
he's looking healthy (just as I remember before the cancer...)
      long, long ago.
My mum in a new suit, is much younger-looking, and well.
I wish I could step into the happy picture, 
and keep my parents as they were then.

My wife and I are wearing our shining new rings -
      long, long ago
they were sold and melted down for other newly-weds to wear.
I remember the deep love I felt for my wife then.
Mum asks what I'm looking at and she tears out part of the picture...
my ex wife is still smiling from the waste paper basket...

Date written 24th September 
Writing Challenge 2, September 2019 - The Photograph 
Sponsor, Wiishkobi Ode
© Jack Horne  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Narrative

Why Do Ghost's Wear Clothes

I passed the elm at eventide,
Its arms were bare, its breath was wide,
And there beneath the twilight sky 
I thought I saw a woman roam.

Her gown was thin as woven mist,
A memory the dark had kissed;
No rustle made, no shadow cast—
She moved as moonlight through the grass.

Do ghosts wear gowns like we once wore,
With hems that brush the oaken floor?
Do buttons cling and silks remain
When souls have slipped the cords of life?

Perhaps they wear what dreams devise—
Not stitched by hand, but born of skies.
A shawl of dusk, a veil of rain,
The hush of snow against the pane.

She turned to me but made no sound,
And yet my heart was loosely bound—
By what, I cannot quite define:
A lace of loss, a thread of time.

If ghosts wear clothes, they must be spun
From things undone, from lives begun.
Form: Rhyme

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