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Premium Member Stranger than fiction

Two quacks walking side by side
one looking one way, the other the other
disturbingly similar, they could be one
and never the twain shall meet...


AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member The Last of Miss Last

I was young at age but old enough to recognize cruelty
My eyes watered and my tummy ached 
I was scared and embarrassed 
With wet trousers my tiny thin legs- Shaked 

I had raised my hand to go to the john 
But my fourth-grade teacher, whom I'll never forget 
She wouldn't let me go, why- I don't know?
But I know it was her fault, that I was soaking wet
 
The kids in my classroom stared at me shaking 
Watching me crying, my eyes dripping water 
Who will she not let go next? 
The boy who sat next to me- or somebody's daughter

My mother, may she rest in peace 
Rushed to the school to bring me some dry clothes 
She spoke to the principle in a fiery rage 
That's when all hell broke out, and a firing arose 

That was the last time I saw that mean teacher 
Never again would she teach in that school 
I hope that she learned a good lesson in life 
It's not very nice to be disturbingly cruel

Premium Member her man knew her well

deeply dark and disturbingly mysterious
diabolical and Gothic, with a hint of Victorian
as punk as any bouquet that came before
she smiled when she came upon them
They were perfect, her man knew her well
He was a keeper


Premium Member Sad and Painful Tears For Haiti At Xmas

The nonstop negative news or publicities on Haiti
Hurt tremendously and disturbingly
The relentless or constant bashings of all Haitians
Twinge and twist my heart like cancer patients
On their death beds, who are resigned, hopeless
Penniless, helpless, and spiritless.

Haiti needs a mega break from all the powerful parasites
That are still exploiting our precious resources at countless sites
While concomitantly exploring and impoverishing our peasants
Our innocent siblings who perilously work for crumbs and cents.

It is time that all truths are spoken or be told
It is time that we unearth, unfurl or unfold
All vile plots so the world can witness the premeditated lies.

Papa Noël is a well designed invention in disguise
At Christmas time, the hurts are excruciating
And the misery is objectionable and nauseating.

Copyright © December, 2021, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poetry.

Premium Member Grandma's Magical Quilt

A silhouette 
Backlit by glowing silver-gray
Lanky shadow
Lurking in my bedroom doorway
Arms stretch down, impossibly long
Deformed joints, disturbingly wrong

Pretending sleep
Muscles strain, be utterly still
Begin to shake
Body trembles against my will
I dream, irrationally hope
I scream, intentionally? Nope.

Shadow arms reach
Up the wall, across my ceiling
Cover my head
with Grandma's quilt, magic feeling
Love protection, hopefully right
The darkness, increasingly light

Scrutiny Following Muting

The whole thing had seemed some mutiny 
While hundred eyes stuck to scrutiny!
A young Eve with an old company 
She’d met at a roadside company,
Freshly by his side in bikini
And freshly quaffing iced martini…

Next, some careless bites of zucchini
She’d picked from a Free Sabatini, 
Litters from The Free Thing all over, 
Even as she held its left over…

Bikini! And there’s no swimming pool, 
Not for a mile pond without toadstool
A morning too cold for waters cool
And that’s why wearer had seemed a fool… 

Plus eyes could afford scrutiny 
Of The Disturbingly Skinny!


Five Haunted Men

Like The Cows in Joseph’s Dream
That garroted ones of gleam,
Five were disturbingly gaunt,
As I recalled in a jaunt: 
Blissful walk to a park
For a promised beer by Mark:
Men marine spirits did haunt
But still did me badly taunt,
Never ceasing to hearts vaunt
That they would Marine Types daunt…

“No! Don’t voice that,” I warned them,
Eyeing the one who was Clem
Repeatedly telling him
“Marine Spirits are dead grim!”
To often hold back a claim
That could, for life, make one lame:
My Appeasement of Spirits,
Whose calming is not by bits.

Hard Drug a Dug Grave

Mind-Cracking, Health-Crushing Hard Drug 
Whose taker has his own grave dug:
For all the sad life’s holes it does plug,
Any helping dosing down on rug,
As though a shooter did one slug 
Or a dirty criminal one mug.

A time to up a staircase lug
The Hopelessly Suicidal on drug;
To all the questions by a medic a shrug:
No deliverance from his medical jug!

What things in life disturbingly bug 
That we can’t The Just Sensible hug; 
Drug isn’t by a little the abnormal,
The taker often a Writhing Animal!
A balderdash making a previous “it is well”,
As he continues to wrestle with New Hell.

The Better Craftsman

He could take what most found, in the time of that
 Particular incumbent fashion, to be lacking in any 
  Pleasing or greatly passionate way,
And, after immersing it into low, blue flame,
 Repeatedly beat upon this quivering mass as 
  If it were but a whitened molten lump when
Drawn from violent, torturing heat constrained 
 Deep within some smith's insatiable forge;
  Seen there the blistered face, scorched forearms 
Impervious to the fizz and burn of popping sparks; 
 Blackened hammer wielded by a gnarly hand,
  The repeated raising; forceful, downward strikes --
High-pitched ringing chimes of metal on metal;
 And him, the better craftsman, bent desperately 
  To his task, shaping something new and 
Disturbingly strange...
 While, amassed amid the silent roaring of those 
   Unremarkable fields,
An idealistic generation, readied, prepared to spill
 Its hot, innocent young blood over a sea of 
  Flowering petals for the valueless ideal of an 
Unworthy hour spawned by a vile whoring b***h
 Before it slunk back into the lengthening 
  Shadows of a withering age.

The Soul Knows

Where did all the sunny days go?
I feel my Soul tell me it knows
Howbeit I’m constantly chasing shadows 
Through bravado and deepening sorrows 
Endlessly I hear life's soprano
Though it sounds empty and disturbingly hollow.

My Soul tells me which rainbow to follow
Daily however, I live in this empty burrow
Not listening to you tell me which way to go 
For I am lost in the depths of my restless mind 
Mine eyes are blind as I push you behind.

This is the life I created with strife
Running away and bitterness rife
These are the times I chased after to find
The challenges constantly here in my life
And I hear you speak to me in the night
For I feel a trembling and I see the light
But I question is this even right?
How do I know you my Soul knows?
When I have been playing this Comedy Show.

How I live my life the same everyday 
Look at the people around me I say
They also travel over shameful and blame 
Nothing much changes
This is no hall of fame.
Spinning on wheels of empty emotion 
Trudging and turning over spills of devotion 
For should I let be all this tribulation
What will I do, if I listen to you?

To Start Smiling At President Biden

The feeling-cheated Igbo of Nigeria
Now judges her a worse malaria,
To keep celebrating Donald Trump
While bemoaning his angering dump …

But plans he to start smiling at Biden,
For one should often one’s options widen,
When at stake is life-transforming Crude oil,
With huge pipes channeling it to far-off soil.

The Fast-choking-with-anger Igbo
Might start an emergency Judo
For an ending of his humiliation,
That took off from the day of assimilation.

Now, I see a colder shoulder
To all Negotiation Tables,
A Stone-throwing kid trying a boulder,
And hangmen’s dropping of ropes for cables.

Already, it’s a kung fu- movie – watching people,
Disturbingly worshipped by their cripple.

Fear

Easily kicking open The floodgate of panic,
The quickening of blood circulation, titanic:
A once normal breathing is disturbingly hoarse
And the modest in behavior dreadfully coarse.
Eyes now pop out of their homely sockets,
Relaxed hands out of trousers pockets.
Some hearts are ready to make their last murmurs,
The headaches of this moment, crushing hammers.

Fluid secretions choose knotted temples,
With bangs on one’s door supplying more samples:
Sometimes over a mismanaged mammoth sum of money,
For which one hasn’t yet informed one’s attorney.

Fear often would follow a demeaning rape,
Whose legal implications one foresaw its shape
Or some business, very untidy, completely rotten?
Which one had contracted but long forgotten;
Death now in a hurry to visit
And one doesn’t want to meet it.
To Fear
 I say, ‘’Tufia!’’
Fie!
Die!
Readily unsettling the mind
And the body does bind;
Meaningful activities to a halt, grind.

Premium Member The Men Hide In the Man Cave

They arrived on broomsticks
Cackling in a disturbingly knowing way.
Their men hid in the man cave
With their wives’ father.

How did you happen to have nine girls?
One asked his father-in-law.
He could not hear him 
Because of the loud cackle laughter from the kitchen.

The TV was at full volume too
Which did not lead to any conversation
So they drank beer, trying not to think 
About what the women were doing in the kitchen

Typical Sunday for all ten of them
Seeing their fate for the next fifty years
Luckily there was a refrigerator down there
Full of beer and snacks fit for ten kings.

Limited Shelf Life

Contemporary hunters wielding 21st century weapons of influence

Firing indiscreetly upon blindfolded hostages that double as their clients

Mutilating their customer case before gutting them with ease

once they're expendable


Feasting upon the impoverished entrails

until there is not a shred of identifiable human flesh

Disturbingly convenient as it is prevalent

Once the remains cannot be recognized as human,

there is no chance, not even a miniscule possibily, of retribution

There is no face and no conscious voice

to  demand justice for countless grievances


The corpses sink into the Earth where they

are subjected to further degradation

Posthumously polluted with the toxicity emanating from murderous mouths

Premium Member Cries Comes Coos

Wails of a child unknown to me,
Capriciously about my lobes.
Troubles me most disturbingly,
Generates many tears that holds.


If it were mines, tender the touch,
My soul, my heart, they would both be.
Extended warmths will be so much,
Eyes be wide opened to receive. 


A surprise to be, of its hold,
At a distance I turned and saw,
The once wailing child looked so bold,
Child cracks a smile at me with awe.


This be so unexpectedly,
What be within me emanates,
Outstretched it did invisibly,
Delights of three now resonates.


Departure of three that it be,
Their hearts they will be now comforts,
Three souls unites with so much glee,
Parts knowing of the warm efforts.


Date: 06/09/2019
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