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Lost

Sitting quietly beneath the old blue gum tree
Flowers surround me lined in neat rows on the lawn
White and blue, tall and short placed as if by gods’ decree
My eyes mist, oh god what she had undergone
Her face clouded in pain, body still as a frightened fawn
 The room white, Spartan white sheets drape the bed
Her raven black hair no more, so much left unsaid
Eyes of fierce emerald green now dull and sedate
God let fall tears the day her mortal coil she did shed
Soon again in each others arms, standing at heaven’s gate




Written 30/01/2015

This Is No Picnic

This Is No Picnic
 
We packed up the grill and my uncle took us to the lake
I was hoping for a burger, maybe even a juicy steak
Amazed was I to see the cooler packed with frozen shrimp
What kind of picnic is this?  My smiling lips went limp
 
“Stop pouting,” said Uncle Tim, tossing me a fishing pole
“This here lake is filled with huge trout. It’s the best fishing hole”
If we wanted to eat lunch, first we would have to catch it
Seems his picnic invitation this info did omit
 
The hours dragged past and we hadn’t had a single bite
Our clan was growing hungry and grandma seemed uptight
So she took charge and lit the grill in spite of Tim's protests
But he could not do battle with her so he acquiesced
 
Mosquitoes were drawn to scents of shrimp on the barbecue
Then a horde of hornets found our camp and buzzed on through
We screamed and scurried about to avoid their bites and stings
Till Uncle Tim doused the grill and took us to Burger King
 
He ordered burgers to go, placed a blanket on our lawn
Till this day we still laugh at the antics we’d undergone
 
 

Written for Carol Brown's Picnic Time contest

Premium Member Remember When You Used To Smell Outside

revision

Remember when you used to smell the sea.
The briny air would open up your nose.
But now it seems this case is not to be.
Like any other place is how it goes.
World warming or pollution I suppose.

Remember when you used to smell the rain.
The petrichor perfumed the Springtime ground.
Our atmosphere has undergone a change.
Now sudden bursts of torrents do come down.
Our senses don’t react to smells not found.

Remember how outside was always fresh,
a freshness that would live in line dried sheets,
and when you came from play all out of breath
you smelled of summer sunshine and the heat.
Remember when these smells made life complete.

Remembering the past leaves fearful taste,
since Earth expresses climate change uproar.
At times I seek protection with great haste
from howling winds and snows that block the door,
as nature angers for our love the more.

Written 3/12/18
Revised 1/3/2023


Premium Member The Relic

It looked like a bleached tongue
pulled from a mouth,
petrified and incapable 
now of letting a word slide over
its calcified silence.
I picked it out of the wet sand
and held it in my hand. 
It had little weight, smooth
on one side and pitted
on the other. A cuttlefish bone.

It was a marvel of engineering.
My fingers followed its shape,
took in its texture, the pleasurable 
feel of its form. I lifted it to my nose 
and smelt its salty, faintly fishy
odor, sea washed to a clean
unsullied smell. It had undergone
a change into something 
beyond life, into an artifact of time.

I kept it cradled in my hands,
held it like a sacred relic.
I have seen them too
shrink wrapped in plastic bags
on the end of supermarket shelves,
a calcium supplement for birds
to be hung on a hook 
inside of a cage. 
They were selling for $2.50
or thereabouts.

Premium Member The Face of America

   The face of America not long ago
     an immigrant hard at work
   has undergone a dramatic change
     immigrants have gone berserk

   From sea to shining sea
     from California to New York
   they make fists and scream at rallies
     voicing opinions incredibly warped  

   Anti-American as they can be
     protected by our own laws
   it seems to me ~
     out to destroy our great country

The High School

There are sad and happy days in our life, that had gone by,
 Like the strong wind and storm, stricken the deserted land…
But there are few still remain in our heart and mind,
The bullies, laughter, fighter and the love teams you never deny…

Though, It’s been decades we had this kind of fun,
Believe me, these are the good memories of all time…
But even how long the years had over and done,
High school life is still the best, we’d ever undergone…

Though we are now getting old, white hairs are starting to grow,
Few became plump, bald and others remain the same…
Some are still single, searching and ready to mingle?
And others are happily married, and blessed with offsprings,
 We still remain young at heart, and just the same…

And even how long the time had passed by,
The camaraderie is still the same when reunify…
I guess this is the best of all and will last long for sure…
We stained our life with good memories, and history to keep…

So this I may say, “Good ones last long, and lives in our hearts…”


She

If she makes the mistake
Of loving him, he will make her
Suffer terribly for her utter lack of taste
And when he leaves her
After she had undergone
The great pain of rejection
She will find another HIM
For there is no end to the
Foolishness of a woman`s heart

Premium Member An Indirect Self Afflicted Tribulation: a Situation Never To Be

My lateness once more has caused me immediate damnation,
and my unstable state, a product of my lost attention.
Overcoming the limitation by doing three person's work at once
resulted to a failed manipulation
of compressing minutes' activities into seconds
just to beat time and achieve punctuality.

Reaching for the door with already aggravated emotions.
In self caution, I knew something was still missing
then I realized it's a stuff I cannot go without.
Oh My God! This means, beginning all over again.
A complication I most feared in a situation like this.

My dwelling place now seem a mansion
as even my bedroom has undergone exaggeration
which at this moment isn't as accommodating
as the habitation I once knew.
Starring at the plain surface of the mirror Table gave no answers
and already praying for the fruitful termination of this trying time,
as I searched among the cosmetic items it harbours.

My next location is obviously the wardrobe
and even with the intense frustration
I was still calm enough to suppress the friction with myself
as I searched each and every pocket of my clothing
which are all hanging in straight vertical position.
And yet, my state gradually reaching exacerbation,
cos' there is no answer.

In milliseconds, my Pillows are in two corners of the room
I prayed for any sort of temptation but not this
as the bed calmly accepts my aggressive search
of my item which suffers an ungodly abduction.
The Investigation continues with a quick scan through my shoes,
and finally leaving the room with no appreciation
which now looks like a ghetto market of a third world country,
a demotion I usually never allow, not until now.

The larger sitting room just increased my retardation
having hope of finding my "Precious" would be mere hallucination
so therefore, I barely did much other than a mere Inspection.
Yet, cannot find its location,
which simply increased the heap of burning coal on my head.

Already tired of exclaiming several holy Indignation
careful flash back and calculations of my previous movements
yielded no results.
"check the Double Seater" was my last thought.
And as I acted in submission to that command,
the invaluable material surprisingly fell off my shirt
My Car Keys!

Born On the Goldhawk Road One

I was born at the tail end of the Goldhawk Road
Which runs through Shepherds Bush 
Like an artery, 
And in the mid 1960s,
Served as one of the great centres 
Of the London Mod movement, 
But I was raised in relative gentility
In a ward of nearby South Acton 
Whose vast council estate
Is surely the most formidable 
Of the whole of West London.
Although my little suburb 
Has since become
One of its most exclusive neighbourhoods.
                                                                    
My first school was a kind of nursery
Held locally on a daily basis 
At the private residence 
Of one Miss Henrietta Pearson, 
And then aged 4 years old, 
I joined the exclusive 
Lycee Francais du Kensington du Sud, 
Where I was soon to become bilingual 
And almost every race and nationality 
Under the sun was to be found 
At the Lycee in those days... 
And among those who went on to be good pals mine
Were kids of English, French, Jewish, American, 
Yugoslavian and Middle Eastern origin.
                                                                    
While my first closest pals were Esther, 
The vivacious daughter 
Of a Norwegian character actor 
And a beautiful Israeli dancer, 
And Craig, an English kid like myself,
With whom I remain in contact to this day.
For a time, we formed an unlikely trio:
"Hi kiddy," was Esther's sacred greeting 
To her blood brother, who'd respond in kind. 
But at some stage, I became a problem child,
A disruptive influence in the class, 
And a trouble maker in the streets, 
An eccentric loon full of madcap fun 
And half-deranged imaginativeness.
                                                                  
("Born on the Goldhawk Road" is a versified version of one much reproduced in various forms throughout my writings, although it bears little resemblance to its original, which first glimpsed the light of day in around 2002. It's undergone much modification since then, including the alteration of all names of people and places for the solemn purpose of privacy.)

My Journey With Butterflies

On a sunny day, I encountered a caterpillar
in the midst of curry leaves.
I escorted it and kept in a transparent box.
Feeding the caterpillar had become my daily work.
I gleefully did it.
One day it started spinning cocoon. 
I was scared by seeing that.
It had undergone a tough transformation-Metamorphism
I was said that the butterfly will come out within a week.
It was the eighth day.
There was no butterfly, rather I noticed some changes in the chrysalis(Cocoon).
I was anxious and thought it was dead.
The next day morning my mom squeed"Hey,there is a butterfly inside the box".
I was at the height of bliss by hearing that.The moment I would like to cherish for lifetime.
It was a swallow tail butterfly. It walked on my arms, kissed me.
After a few hours it flew away but the happiness would not be forgotten.
Since that day I decided to raise butterflies. So far I have raised 50 butterflies.
Now our garden is full of a kaleidoscope of butterflies.
After all,happiness lies in the little things.

Premium Member Cowboys

Hey, you all new cowboy brides 
Listen, what my cowboy is…..
There are no Pizza Huts nearby
So got to cook in great quantities.

As there are no perfect cowboy jobs
Don’t be surprised if to live in a new ranch
Maybe your third house in one year.

When he returns home listen to his tales
Of every drive, every bronco ride
And every spree he has undergone.

If you are tired of this moving life
Buy heavy and costly furniture and
A piano or a cabinet and of course 
Have a couple of kids to weigh him down.

Take care that his horse never stumbles
Spurs never rust, guts never grumble
Boots never pinch and stays out of jail!

Prefer the company of cowboys 
Because they have not been educated
Sufficiently to reason incorrectly.

                 +++++++

April 20, 2014
Form Free Verse
Dr.Ram Mehta
Fifth Place win
Contest:Howdy Pard by Shadow Hamilton

The Longest Day of Waiting

Life on earth is a large platform where people show the highness or lowness of spirits of their lives. A queue in time bargaining for the much-awaited satisfaction in life.  Just like in litigation, we all undergone proceedings in order to determine our unalienable rights --from conception to birth--judgment has been made whether to preserve or to abandon a life. Is it the longest day of waiting to be born on this earth? Not until we begin to crawl and cry weakly; run and stumble many times; stutter while trying to express the feelings, and get the needed fostering from parents that we realize all these as part of the stages of life. Is it the longest day of molding life inside the house? Not until we are brought up learning under the doctrine of the school to get further knowledge that we see a brighter future.  We struggled hard to the academic discussion--from shapes, numbers, reading and into writing, we learned and been guided coherently. Is it the longest day of waiting for commendation? Not until we stepped out from our alma mater and into the challenging workforce that we feel the test of life.  We faced many setbacks and blows but determination made us choose to get on it until we gradually climb into the targeted rank. Is it the longest day of the tiring effort to make a living? Not until we retired from work and have seen the fruits of our effort that we begin to feel good enough. As growing old is inevitable, it is about changes in yourself and life. Eyesight begins to dim and hearing fails, agility has turned into weakness, and health deteriorated until you sigh, “It is time to lay all worries to rest and maneuver myself into an open fluorescent green field.”

For all we know, it is still not the end of waiting until we see our next generation coming into being and deserving to be treated as such.


Noel N. Villarosa
12 February 2013

Set Me Free

I came to you because I loved you
 
I stretched my arm of friendship and you warmly welcomed me
 
And since that day, my life had undergone a metamorphic change
 
Renewed for the future with a focus of unwavering concentration
 
I gave you all I had for that moment
 
I told you all I ever knew and been through
 
I was committed to the friendship because I believed in you
 
Always saw you as some kind of heavenly angel on earthly assignment
 
But along the way I found out I was alone
 
Though I could find your body around
 
But your spirit and soul were far gone away
 
I knew I was caged because I had given my all
 
I needed someone to set me free
 
Who would set me free? For I was drawn in the ocean of love
 
 I had withdrawn every other thing except my heart of love
 
It kept longing for you, more, more and more
 
Who would set me free? Set me free.
 

(c) 2009

Return To Sorrento

(N.A.A.F.I.  =  universal store, found on
every British military base)

On some bleak airfield on some Cambridge fen 
(that awful winter - 'forty-seven, I think) 
my mother, novice servicewoman then, 

crossed parade-ground like a skating rink 
to see the Christmas concert on the camp. 
Inside, the quonset hut was black as ink 

till airmen lit a feeble spirit lamp. 
The snow was driving against one outer wall: 
she calls to mind a smell of tents and damp 

and stinging fingers, fresh from thrown snowballs, 
and gouts of steam, blown out in cloudy spurts 
as people laughed. Then lights dimmed in the hall. 

She now recalls a curious stab of hurt 
to see the Italian janitor of the base 
revealed onstage in P.O.W. shirt 

when curtains opened. What had been a place 
of uproar, now - faced by this threadbare clown - 
had undergone some dreadful loss of face. 

In dubbin make-up, N.A.A.F.I. dressing-gown, 
as solemn as a high priest at the altar, 
this patched-up Pagliacci, ear-flaps down, 

sang ludicrously well. The keyboard faltered, 
and stopped. The singer, weeping now, kept on, 
quite heedless, as his clown's nose dripped tear-water. 

There's something sacred in the humblest song 
(with wretchedness wrought into lasting good 
through alchemy of art) and, all along, 

the watchers, to their horror, understood. 
He sang so gorgeously of going home 
because he knew full well he never would.

Premium Member The Righteous Express

The righteous express is on track seven. 
It's leaving shortly as a nonstop for heaven. 
If you have lived a pious life, 
and undergone sacrifice and strife, 
it will leave you off at the pearly gates. 
It's the final destination for all the greats. 
It's a trip all the good can afford. 
Your devout life is what you need to board. 
You'll be welcomed by representatives of Our Lord.

inspired by another member's poem.

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