The Relic

It looked like a bleached tongue
pulled from a mouth,
petrified and incapable 
now of letting a word slide over
its calcified silence.
I picked it out of the wet sand
and held it in my hand. 
It had little weight, smooth
on one side and pitted
on the other. A cuttlefish bone.

It was a marvel of engineering.
My fingers followed its shape,
took in its texture, the pleasurable 
feel of its form. I lifted it to my nose 
and smelt its salty, faintly fishy
odor, sea washed to a clean
unsullied smell. It had undergone
a change into something 
beyond life, into an artifact of time.

I kept it cradled in my hands,
held it like a sacred relic.
I have seen them too
shrink wrapped in plastic bags
on the end of supermarket shelves,
a calcium supplement for birds
to be hung on a hook 
inside of a cage. 
They were selling for $2.50
or thereabouts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/31/2024 3:39:00 PM
Once again dear Paul, your immense ability to not just let the reader read the words but actually get pulled into them is on full display here. Your descriptions, always full of the senses, are amazing. Like one of my hero’s namely Oscar Wilde, you are a great observer and pen so poetically and artistically wonderful, reflective scenes that captivates the reader. I love and truly appreciate your own unique style of poetry which is inspirational. Really enjoyed reading this. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 4/1/2024 5:12:00 AM
Humbled by your words dear Christina, such thoughtful and sensitive comments give encouragement to an old poet and helps me along the path. Your generous spirit is deeply appreciated. I must reacquaint myself with Wilde, haven't read him since my youthful hauntings of the local library. Again, thankyou Christina....blessings.
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