Set Me Free

I came to you because I loved you
 
I stretched my arm of friendship and you warmly welcomed me
 
And since that day, my life had undergone a metamorphic change
 
Renewed for the future with a focus of unwavering concentration
 
I gave you all I had for that moment
 
I told you all I ever knew and been through
 
I was committed to the friendship because I believed in you
 
Always saw you as some kind of heavenly angel on earthly assignment
 
But along the way I found out I was alone
 
Though I could find your body around
 
But your spirit and soul were far gone away
 
I knew I was caged because I had given my all
 
I needed someone to set me free
 
Who would set me free? For I was drawn in the ocean of love
 
 I had withdrawn every other thing except my heart of love
 
It kept longing for you, more, more and more
 
Who would set me free? Set me free.
 

(c) 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/25/2011 5:42:00 PM
There are so many a people joining the broken hearted daily. Who would set you free? Jesus will. Well, He did quite a long time ago, but you'd start to enjoy the benefits more if only you realise.
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Joshua Akinwande
Date: 8/26/2011 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Ingibo... this is more like a p-experience, maybe with exaggeration. lol
Date: 8/21/2011 5:44:00 PM
This is beautiful Joshua.....a pleasure to read!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joshua Akinwande
Date: 8/21/2011 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Chiquita... It was p-experience in black and white...
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