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Remember When You Used To Smell Outside

revision Remember when you used to smell the sea. The briny air would open up your nose. But now it seems this case is not to be. Like any other place is how it goes. World warming or pollution I suppose. Remember when you used to smell the rain. The petrichor perfumed the Springtime ground. Our atmosphere has undergone a change. Now sudden bursts of torrents do come down. Our senses don’t react to smells not found. Remember how outside was always fresh, a freshness that would live in line dried sheets, and when you came from play all out of breath you smelled of summer sunshine and the heat. Remember when these smells made life complete. Remembering the past leaves fearful taste, since Earth expresses climate change uproar. At times I seek protection with great haste from howling winds and snows that block the door, as nature angers for our love the more. Written 3/12/18 Revised 1/3/2023

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Date: 2/20/2019 5:31:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:10:00 PM
Hi Janis, congrats on a unique take on the contest theme, Anthony
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:06:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2019 2:18:00 AM
Now that's original and wonderful! The olfactory sense is a much-underused sense in poetry, I think! I love the way you use scents to draw forth remembrance. I used to love the smell of line-dried sheets! All hail to the wonderful golden days of childhood! Okay, okay... not ALL of them were wonderful and golden, but SOME were!
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Date: 2/19/2019 8:05:00 PM
Fortunately some of us can still smell these things, unfortunately, our grandchildren may not. Excellent write, Janis. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie
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Date: 2/19/2019 4:13:00 PM
I still smell all these things and your poem made me hope we always will... the sad thought that one day they’d be gone. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2019 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win in the contest! There were some great Earth Day poems, Janis, but yours took me back to a time when our atmosphere did smell sweeter. So sad to things that made it sweet being destroyed by pollution and carelessness. Please send me a Soup mail with your address, so I can send a prize to you. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2018 10:20:00 AM
Lovely old-time scents imaged and much enjoyed in your lovely Sonnet, Sian! congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/8/2018 6:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sian. Well done.
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:23:00 PM
Great write, Sian. So true. Scents from childhood are rare today. Well done.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Randy.
Date: 3/30/2018 8:20:00 PM
Charming poem, Sian. Well done Congrats on your win, Sian.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Line.
Date: 3/30/2018 7:25:00 PM
I like how you compared today with the sweeter scents of yesteryears. VEry well done, and Congrats!!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 3/30/2018 5:09:00 PM
The outside air did have a lovely scent when I was a child. I don't get out there to inhale it as much as I once did. Thank you for your participation in my contest. Congrats on it being on the winners' lineup. Sara
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:39:00 AM
I enjoyed being in your contest as I do all of yours Sara. Thanks for the placement and the creative theme. I really remember the sheets and the bread from my grandmother but it was something I could not get in touch with. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 3/30/2018 12:43:00 PM
I am so lucky as I can still have fresh unpolluted air when i walk by the sea:-) congrats on your win Sian:-) hugs jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:41:00 AM
I need to move there, Thanks.
Date: 3/30/2018 12:05:00 PM
Liked your beautiful poem ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thanks and blessings Probir.
Date: 3/30/2018 1:42:00 AM
Times of wonder so sadly missed, the smells of nature, now mingle with the foul odour of pollution, as you said, "Remember when they made life complete", I do. Great poem, congratulations on your win Sian... Mick
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:42:00 AM
This is so true. Things just don't smell the same anymore. Thanks for the encouraging remarks.
Date: 3/29/2018 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sian! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks and bless you Eve. Had a wonderful Easter.
Date: 3/29/2018 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this win with this descriptive nostalgic poem!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 3/25/2018 1:36:00 PM
I do. Wonderful penning. My best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/2/2018 10:44:00 AM
Love your avatar Maureen. He seems like a real cutie. Thanks and blessings, Janis.

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