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Premium Member Don'T Quit Your Dream- POTD

Night stirred memories, once forgotten of the days 
I burnt in love when you consumed my days,
and I carried you like a queen in the palanquin of my thoughts!

without forethought, to elbow out the marauding of memories,
I set out, travelling miles, my heart throbbing in my chest
my legs shaking and trembling, finally reaching your hermitage

casting away my stilted pride, expectant and anxious,
I waited at your doorstep to seize the moment
to renew a commitment and knocked hopefully at your door.

while listening intent for the approaching footsteps
and the sound of the key turning on the latch
did I see a face peering through the window, and quickly withdraw?
was it the face I longed to see?

time skipped quickly by, hours flitted 
between limping dawns and staggering nights

how long had I waited there? Was it weeks, months, or years?

I knew roots had grown under my feet
and my body had vegetated into a tree

in Time’s eternal motion, the tree will remain there
as a trunk of fossilized dream till your love charges life into it!

Nov.24. 2022

~ Placed Second~

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Premium Member I Almost Tossed it Out

       As I am growing older and life becoming lonelier,
       The past beckons, and though I had almost tossed it out,
       The idea of going back to my native land and my people
       Now grows in me as an urgency with no trace of doubt.
       
       I shall go, my soul flying faster than my supple limbs
       To perch on my native land that I left long time ago
       To see the changes, these intervening years have brought
       And to revive the glorious past that in me still aglow

       To listen again to the melodious tunes, half forgotten
       To laugh and talk with my one- time bosom friends
       To enjoy a life lighter and less demanding
       Free of all finesse, rid of all stilted and crazy trends

       I shall visit each of my lovesome former haunts
       The parish church and my parents' forlorn graves
       I shall go to the village school which I loved the best
       That still resurrects in me memories, waves on waves
 
        I shall go wandering through the country roads
        Listen to birds' shrill calls, lovely and clear
        Watch the smile rekindling old familiar faces
        And enjoy the sweet rustic air, dust free and pure

        I want to watch the Gulmohar in opulent bloom
        Feel the scent of jasmines opening at night
        Walk through the paddy fields stretching endless
        Enjoy all the rural scenes that greatly delight

         Climb the small hill where gooseberries grow
         Wind down my way to my friends’ quarters
         And travel farther to the river side with my pals
         To have a dip in the river's cool and clear waters

        Oh, I shall be away from the roaring crowd for ever        
        And relish the peace and quiet, free of all grinding chores
        Cling to life's commonplace things and charms
        Find my own footing there, never to be back to alien shores!

Premium Member Kilroy Was Here

There was an elusive little guy often espied during World War Two,
And who he was and whence he came no one ever really knew!
He was a bald headed little feller with a very prominent nose,
And he always left the message "Kilroy Was Here" in very stilted prose!

You seldom saw his eyes and his hands were clinging to a wall.
Many G.I.s saw him in latrine stalls and in their greasy dining hall!
His origin and parting message are debated to this very day,
And no one has ever nabbed the graffiti artists who always slunk away!

He was portrayed in cruisers, battleships and even on submarines!
Kilroy's portrait was tattooed on the chests of a few diehard Marines!
'Tis said Hitler saw "Kilroy Was Here" and wondered what it meant,
Thinking it a secret code when found on American accouterment!

Kilroy became as famous as the mysterious smile on the Mona Lisa.
(I even saw his mug when I climbed to the top of the Tower of Pisa!)
Rosie the Riveter may have been guilty, if the truth were told,
Of tracing Kilroy's image on bombers, including the bomb bay hold!

Well, 'tis for sure we couldn't have won the war without the little guy!
Kilroy's antics lifted morale at home and overseas, that you can't deny!
But you haven't seen the last of him, for he is forever etched in history,
On the World War Two Monument in DC - how he got there is a mystery!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved

For those a tad younger who may have never heard of Kilroy, go to your search
and type in "Kilroy Was Here" and click the Wikipedia notation and you will learn
more than you ever wanted to know about him!


Schizophrenic Prose - the Secret Society of Hidden People

My soul is lost 
   upon ice-blue crevasses so deeply!
    help me my blue elephant
that lettuce is brave 
  like electrons always saying hello
    and never goodbyes!
You slip on lice and break your arms
it's all so SCHIZOPHRENIC: tangentiality!
stilted speech and phonemic paraphasia
are mainly broken-minded poets
   who use both sides of a pencil
  -+95% of black eyes kill 5% of rabbits
 and the bird whistles in Japaneses:
"sei shin bun retsu byo"
( mind split disease)
  where logic and proportion falls
between the King & Queen
  AND ALL ANGELS go to 7-Eleven
in their heavenly garments to buy
hot dogs and slur-pees
  and writing is a socially acceptable
form of schizophrenia...hmm....
  such is the paradox of delusion
and how are you?  When you walk down
a sidewalk to the abuse of verbally
abusive birds chirping loudly how
dull and stupid you are. So you move into
a homeless shelter and make new friends!

:: 10242015 ::

Covered Bridge

Damn you, cursed covered bridge, 
Damn your easy way,
Damn your timbers strong and high 
That let her slip away!

Opposed by torrent moat she was 
Compelled to wait and try.
But no! You let her ride across 
And keep her corset dry!

Within her surrey black and sleek,
By dappled stallion drawn,
You let her pass without dispute; 
Satanic stilted spawn! 

We quarreled once or twice ‘tis true
But now she’s gone for good.
I’ve half a mind to strike a fire
And torch your rotting wood!


3rd Place
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Sponsored by Craig Cornish



For the "Covered Bridge" Contest
Sponsored by:  Craig Cornish
© Dean Wood  Create an image from this poem.

Nutty Flavors of Life

Life is like a nut,
Differs in shape, size, color or crust,
Life is like a nut.
For some, it’s like a coconut,
Beyond the reach, safe from gust
Very important, much privileged!
Whether unripen or matured.
For some it’s like a peanut,
Malleable, fit in budget 
Widely spread, versatile no doubt
However, down and out.
For some it’s like a walnut,
You can see the eminence clear cut
Set comfortably in its dwell,
In a hard stilted shell.
For some it’s like a pine nut,
Gazes weird I tell you what
Shielded with strong beautiful woody cone,
Prevents you! to invade its zone.
For some it’s like a cashew nut,
Self-interested, pricy somewhat
Tightly attached with red pulpy drupe,
Be cautious! While shelling the fruit
For some it’s like a chestnut,
Down-to-earth, graceful but,
Surrounded with sharp spines called “Bur”
All adversities ought to conquer.
Life is like a nut,
Differs in shape, size, color or crust,
Life is like a nut.


Premium Member Addiction

In this arid plain of perennial drought,
as I stand transfixed with vexations rising in my spirit
and sadness lying mute as a stone,
I discern, I am alone with none to hold my hand
or share the burden that weighs me down.

Trudging through rugged paths
with my mournful shadow, tottering along,
the past sneers at me, breaking open 
bottled up memories- of years spent in unbridled passion,
the smell of cigarettes, ganja and beer
wine and women, bet and gambling,
and the thrill of having won and lost
I used narcotic drugs many and they kept 
gnawing into my psyche!

Once I walked with stilted gait
with friends and fans, amid laughter and haste
eager to please and to praise
Inebriated and effervescent were we
Fancied money could buy all we yearned
and turn this Earth-a virtual Paradise

But how swift was the twist of fate!
With no condiments, life suddenly turned bland.
The gorgeous castles I once built, burnt down to cinders	
like dry leaves blown by the wind,
Friends, I thought never would desert,
flitted away one by one!

With dejection and despair warping me down
a rabid dog I strayed.
Grew irritable and vicious,
fled away from bond and bondage
spitting the saliva of my angst,I barked… barked at everyone;
“Where did vanish all the fabulous dreams
Whither gone life’s ritzy splendors?

But the wildfire burnt itself down,
now a passive stillness has settled in.
In this inert hush, as I grope,through murky corridors
with the sound of my footsteps falling like a thud,
a single query breaks out from within
‘Where shall I hide unseen
from this horrid loneliness staring me in the eyes?’

Premium Member The Village On the Water

Heavily laden boats, rectangular sails billowing 
    Under seas of low cloud, braving the fierce Yangtze;                                                                       
  Held between snowcapped mountains, earth and sky 
   Indistinguishable from steaming mist and rolling fog;                                                                       
 A long drawn straggle of Grey Geese plummeting down   
From breathless, rarefied air to stumble awkwardly onto 
    Plum coloured mudbanks; an unrestrained, excitable 
  Cacophony of frenzied honking! Then wild monkeys 
   Provoked into howling each side of the river.
   
 There, at the juncture with Longjin Brook, stilted homes, 
Half-hidden by bamboo groves, crouch at the waters 
    Edge; maidens will come to wash clothes
  Whirling wooden batons, twittering like golden swallows;
   Fragrant wildflowers enhance their sweetness.
   
 At drab, pale, first-morning light, fishermen cast
Nets over the cooling, placid blue waters; 
    The fish that swim here are said to be the finest 
  In the province. 
   We will exchange Black Carp and Blunt-Snout Bream, 
 Wrapped in moist bamboo leaf, for glutinous rice                                 
With the clans that tend the terraces inside the fertile 
    River valley...
  Does not the Emperor insist upon good commerce?
   If you are dissatisfied as a peasant
 You can take the ancient "old tea horse road" 
And burden your back with heavy bales stacked high 
    On a rail;
  The road will take you all the way from Zigui
   To Tibet...or even further perhaps,
 And sombre ravens will soar overhead and taunt your 
Every footstep.

    But I will remain where I am, in the 
  Village On The Water 
   Nestled deep within the Three Gorges;
 My life, the endless horizon stretched beyond,
Held in balance as if it were Shaseng
    The Shadow Play Stone;
  And each new morning awakening to slow, 
   Chiming bells.

Premium Member His Feathered Image

Silently, he stood on the edge of a mirrored pool 
For breakfast, he'd have to do a bit of wading
The egret's feathered image I wanted to capture
among wild cattails at this early morning hour.
He seemed to sense that I was watching him.
Stilted legs twitched, poised to take flight
but I was still as overhead, clouds hovered...
whiter yet, than this egret of the morning.

His regal head suddenly turned my way
but I dared not move, not to frighten him away.
His long, graceful neck turned from side to side,
as he tried to figure out if I was something to fear.
He took a stride towards me and then stopped.
A ripple on the pool caused him to change direction.
Breakfast was being served and so, he ate his fill.
I quickly sketched what I knew I'd have to paint.
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Guests of Embera Drua

GUESTS OF EMBERA DRUA

We are guests in this village on the Chagris River shore.
Tribe members of Embera Drua twist palms of Panama -

embrace us each, with this wreath of scented flora,
language barriers break down with food and dance.

In this jungle we’ve no need to be formal in dress,
the natives share achiote seeds to redden my lips and cheeks.

And fresh coconut chased down with sips of sugar cane,
plenteous Panamanian fruit, hot lunch served in banana leaves.

Before we position our eyes upon the treasured trades
we are invited to join them for some entertainment.

Our acquaintances in tribal wear, write lyrics upon
their dirt floor ballroom, with calloused feet.

Dressed in paloma skirt and cotton taparabo, men and women
invite tourists to dance with them, as drums pulse and flutes charm.

We will remember the stilted homes of our friends,
dogs lazing underneath the floor, abundance of fruit trees,

a school in development so students can remain with parents
instead of placing sandals upon feet and leaving their family home.

Our dugout canoe glides back to the shore of lily pads,
we swim with invigorated thoughts and gladness.

Kim Rodrigues © 2017

Iambics

I am enticed by the iambics felt
in tides between my heart, your tongue;
I know dark orchids hem your stilted voice  
and yet your kiss unfolds me lip by lip.
Each line you've breathed has been exhumed before
by a more faithful heartbeat than your own.
Am I in love with practiced whispers pulled
from mouths of dead romantics, rhythm cursed?

Premium Member New Species

with slow, stilted gait
neck bent and eyes fixed downward…
      the smart phone zombie

              18 Mar 2016
© David Mohn  Create an image from this poem.

My Valentine For Contest

MY VALENTINE


                  In a stilted shanty
                  On a Gulf spring night--
                  There a ring lay shining
                  On a pillow white.
                  Jazz was in the moonlight,
                  Jasmine in the air,
                  Frozen was this moment-- 
                  Love beyond compare.
                  Empty are my arms now,
                  Years away are you.
                  How did lonely happen--
                  when one diverged in two?



January 20, 2013

Premium Member A Wait Infinite- POTD

Night stirred memories, once forgotten,
           of the days I burnt in love
    when you consumed my days and I carried you like a queen,	
                   in the palanquin of my thoughts.

      Without forethought, to elbow out 
     the marauding of thorny memories,
  I set out, travelling miles, my heart throbbing in my chest,
            my nimble legs shaking and trembling 
       and finally reaching your hermitage.

  Casting away my stilted pride, expectant and anxious,
            I waited at your doorstep to seize the moment
  to renew a commitment and knocked hopefully at your door,
                     so far never opened before anyone.

     While listening intent for the approaching foot steps
   and the sound of the key turning on the latch,
         did I see a face peering through the window,
                              and quickly withdraw?
      Was it the face I longed to see?
          Might not be or else, I would have been admitted in!

   Time skipped quickly by, hours flitted
       between limping dawns and staggering nights

       Initially I knew the tedium of waiting
     and the crushing weight of Time on me. 
         Soon I lost count of it…. 

     Like an alien, how long had I waited there?
          Was it weeks, months or years?

   The wait must have been pretty long.
    I knew roots had grown under my feet
       and my body had vegetated into a tree,
            but without leaves and fruits!

           In Time’s eternal motion, the tree will remain there
    as a trunk of fossilized hope, till your love charges life into it!

The Amazon

Above the palms I scan the ebon night
With crystal stars reflecting in the dark
The yellow moon is shining on the boat
A crocodile swims by without a sound

A cacophony of sound is stirred in the morn
A shaman greets us with a blessed hand
Three frontiers await us as we drift
In ageless waters of the deep
 
Pink dolphins leap as we move on
I see a capybara by the shore
The largest rodent in the world
The capuchins all beg for food

Piranhas swivel back and forth
Below the mammoth lily pads
Awaiting all the food that moves 
Then pounced upon without delay

The thunderous rain has wet the forest land
Colombia, Brazil and now Peru
With stilted huts and cherub children there

Primordial, the Amazon and I 
I'm filled with awe, a conqueror of life
primeval scenes in tense display
These memories will stay until I die

April 26,2015 Memorable Vacations
Shadow Hamilton

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