The Village On the Water

Heavily laden boats, rectangular sails billowing 
    Under seas of low cloud, braving the fierce Yangtze;                                                                       
  Held between snowcapped mountains, earth and sky 
   Indistinguishable from steaming mist and rolling fog;                                                                       
 A long drawn straggle of Grey Geese plummeting down   
From breathless, rarefied air to stumble awkwardly onto 
    Plum coloured mudbanks; an unrestrained, excitable 
  Cacophony of frenzied honking! Then wild monkeys 
   Provoked into howling each side of the river.
   
 There, at the juncture with Longjin Brook, stilted homes, 
Half-hidden by bamboo groves, crouch at the waters 
    Edge; maidens will come to wash clothes
  Whirling wooden batons, twittering like golden swallows;
   Fragrant wildflowers enhance their sweetness.
   
 At drab, pale, first-morning light, fishermen cast
Nets over the cooling, placid blue waters; 
    The fish that swim here are said to be the finest 
  In the province. 
   We will exchange Black Carp and Blunt-Snout Bream, 
 Wrapped in moist bamboo leaf, for glutinous rice                                 
With the clans that tend the terraces inside the fertile 
    River valley...
  Does not the Emperor insist upon good commerce?
   If you are dissatisfied as a peasant
 You can take the ancient "old tea horse road" 
And burden your back with heavy bales stacked high 
    On a rail;
  The road will take you all the way from Zigui
   To Tibet...or even further perhaps,
 And sombre ravens will soar overhead and taunt your 
Every footstep.

    But I will remain where I am, in the 
  Village On The Water 
   Nestled deep within the Three Gorges;
 My life, the endless horizon stretched beyond,
Held in balance as if it were Shaseng
    The Shadow Play Stone;
  And each new morning awakening to slow, 
   Chiming bells.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/21/2021 11:38:00 AM
This is simply astounding John! Your lines contain stunning imagery that takes the reader along for the journey. This is some of your best writing my friend. I look forward to reading the sequels. I purposely began with this poem. Truly a masterpiece! I haven’t been around much for nine months since my husband passed away July 2020. It is wonderful to be back reading poetry again. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/27/2025 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I have finally made my way back home. Your friend as ever. :) john
Date: 1/10/2021 5:13:00 AM
what a journey you took on with this incredible free verse, John. ~ Elaine
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Date: 11/13/2020 3:23:00 PM
You are an artist, painting with words. Or maybe a poet who transforms words into journeys of languorous delight. I sat next to you all the way. I look forward to the moment when you dip clean brushes into paint of words and start your voyage anew.
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John Fleming
Date: 11/22/2020 7:35:00 AM
Many thanks, Mark...your kind words are very much appreciated. My sincere gratitude. :) john
Date: 9/4/2020 1:01:00 PM
What a mesmerizing journey for me it was.. to take a ride with you...in the village on the water. Great details and scenes you painted, John.
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Date: 9/4/2020 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay...you really are most kind. In my humble opinion, for what it is worth...this is some of the very best poetry I have ever written; although I do have to admit to a small amount of "plagiarism": some Chinese travel brochures. The poem is inspired by Ezra Pound's: Cathay poetry collection...and his fantastic "Canto 49": For the seven lakes. :) john
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