New Species

with slow, stilted gait
neck bent and eyes fixed downward…
      the smart phone zombie

              18 Mar 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 6, 2016 at 9:43 PM
David, Congrats on your "New Species win." PD
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:02 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb write david..
Delaney Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:16 PM
yes...a new species is born, Good one, David:SuZ
Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Wow, this it so precise and true senryu and the title you chose is excellent - another 7.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Having been bumped into so many times in the street I think we can all relate to this one David - sad reflection of life today for so many people:-( I think this will fly high for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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