Best Observation Poems
Just An ObservationWe oft expect of others,
In most given situations,
What we ourselves would do,
For it's our inclination,
To think that we are all the same,
So we think they would do,
The same as we if we should find,
Ourselves in those same shoes;
So when we suspect another,
Of some skullduggery,
Or we...
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Categories:
observation, discrimination, judgement,
Form:
Quatrain
A Casual ObservationIt was not that she was the only woman in the group, when mingling precariously beneath the bronze figure of William Booth, or her classic stance, when placing saintly, the newsprint covered bottle to lips willingly breached, but her opulent style, her contrast of attire,...
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Categories:
observation, angst,
Form:
Haibun
ObservationOBSERVATION
Every town
I mean town or city
Has one
And it aint pretty
There’s this old, red brick building
Nothin on either side
No place for a dealer or his junky to hide
Hell no!
This wreck’s been boarded-up for years
Everything all round’s been torn down
Once in a while some truck’ll ...
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Categories:
observation, america,
Form:
Free verse
Observation - 2017OBSERVATION – 2017
Far from Monet’s garden
with ruptured thought of plain air
the futurist philosophers have tasted
the poison mushroom
and rushed to Bethlehem
As though mere noise will save the day
They wave to...
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Categories:
observation, corruption,
Form:
Free verse
An Analytical Observation Into the Causation of EarthquakesFirstly, one has to take into account their scientific peers’ remarks,
As to the likely cause of how an Earthquake starts.
Some forums say it is caused by the shift in tectonic plates,
Others seem to doubt, seem to hesitate.
Some believe a government conspiracy of a machine that...
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Categories:
observation, funnyme, time, earth, me,
Form:
Rhyme
Observation of a Ps LongtimerPeace and war
Often lived here over the years
Even though initiated by the few
Tears were created between many
Relaxation and growth was the PS purpose
Yet they in themselves had to be fought for
Still, with time, peace would prevail
Offences are still doled and taken
Until all are free of...
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Categories:
observation, poetry,
Form:
Acrostic
just an observation
no 2 people can see the same light photon ~ yet both can’t miss the void
one hundred trillion photons hits our eyes each second ~ don’t be devoid
By
David Kavanagh...
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Categories:
observation, light, perspective, philosophy,
Form:
Monoku
Humanity - An ObservationI put a man on the moon
… I helped
I carried flame across the sky
… Without a net
I took Heaven’s obsolete virginity
And displayed the taking
On a billion TV screens
For I am God’s child
And what there is, is mine
Mine to take
Mine to hold
Mine to stand by and...
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Categories:
observation, humanity,
Form:
Free verse
Alien ObservationWind circulates, lifting and flattening
an otherwise, benign, breathless world,
relying also on deeper, slowly moving
tectonics, belching foully, scattering
seas...effecting change. Seasons like Sun
rejoice and fold. An occasional comet or
meteor perhaps a compassionate
God-sent, heaven rethinking the dawdling
pace of destiny…. Man a defiant offspring,
rejecting...
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Categories:
observation, destiny, environment, humanity, nature,
Form:
Free verse
An Alien Observation of Cell Phone UseA Martian spy from the earth fled
and to his superiors said,
“Although no one is near,
they still talk hand to ear.
Too much oxygen’s gone to their head.”
For Carolyn Devnoshire's contest: Out of this world limericks...
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Categories:
observation, funny
Form:
Limerick
The ObservationWith the beauty of the eyes - I see
The optical illusion runs through my mind
Looking - i observe behaviorism
My eyes they wander - I write reflections
Vivid of personality - I am astounded
I speculate! May I be bewildered
Wow! Etiquette becomes me
Yet i still wonder - seeing...
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Categories:
observation, psychological, visionary,
Form:
Dramatic Monologue
Satchel of OrdinariesI sat quietly staring out the porthole window
As we were passing over a village in the low hills
A cumulus cloud casting over its ominous shadow
Far below in the silence of the engine’s shrills,
I wondered where those tiny people were going
Beneath the wing...
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Categories:
observation, flying, imagination, people, places,
Form:
Sonnet
Fish Are NamedFish are named
Lazarus and Carl Jung
they swim in the library, art studio,
that spare room
where I write, paint.
Their eyes are the size
of their stomachs.
They mouth dreams
in silence behind glass.
I stare back, envious
of graceful slow motion angel gills
immersed in a tank of tears
gathered from...
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Categories:
observation, boy, day, fish, romantic,
Form:
Free verse
Cafe WatchCafé Watch
Sitting in a café, watching life pass by.
People rushing into shops; important stuff to buy.
Groups of foreign workers, stopping, shaking hands;
Local people bustling by – can’t interrupt their plans.
Outside, a lonely busker tries hard to make a splash,
But in these post-pandemic days, so few...
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Categories:
observation, life, people,
Form:
Rhyme
BlackbirdIn the wink the suns rays turn black to silver
In molten precision
He leaps; hopping
A mystic dance around his meal
Cloaked in glistening pitch
The whisper of each immaculate feather
brushing against the others
No more a flawless symphony could nature compose
than the sounds of a raven, being...
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Categories:
observation, animal, beauty, bird, imagery,
Form:
Free verse