FJ Thomas Poet Acrostic

Observation of a Ps Longtimer

Peace and war
Often lived here over the years
Even though initiated by the few
Tears were created between many
Relaxation and growth was the PS purpose
Yet they in themselves had to be fought for

Still, with time, peace would prevail
Offences are still doled and taken
Until all are free of mistakes so it will be
Perfection is not what brought us here, poetry is


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Deb M January 9, 2023 at 6:27 AM So beautifully said FJ…..we can get caught up in other distractions but its all about the poetry! A nice reminder for some…Debx FJ Thomas January 9, 2023 at 9:02 AM That it is :) Have to remind myself sometimes lol. Take care Deb

J. Summers January 7, 2023 at 3:25 PM A most astute observation. An even better summation. John FJ Thomas January 7, 2023 at 10:49 PM Thank you for the smile this evening John, it was a long day :)

Valsa George January 6, 2023 at 6:53 PM There can be flaws and blemishes. But what rules poetry Soup is poetry. Rightly said dear poet friend FJ Thomas January 7, 2023 at 11:38 AM You are very correct dear Valsa. Thank you again

Silent One December 27, 2022 at 6:08 AM Great acrostic FJ...You've said it perfectly FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:33 PM It is very nice to see your name S1 :) Thank you

Constance La France December 21, 2022 at 1:16 PM FJ, wonderful acrostic, well done. There have always been some that come and go who want to ruin the soup, but they fail, because we soup members hold each other close and protect each other from all attacks, that's what makes us special, blessings FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:32 PM We definitely try! Hey Constance. Take care ;)

Suzanne Delaney December 21, 2022 at 10:16 AM Flo: Fortunately for me I haven’t encountered any jealousy or heckling here, but I did once before on a different site and it is a shock that someone who had been so friendly turned suddenly hateful. I am sorry you were hurt once. Glad you are healing, Hugs, SuZ FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:30 PM Hi SuZ! It can be shocking, especially when aimed your child. Personal attacks do not bother me, but definitely caught me off guard the first time lol

Brandy Nicole December 20, 2022 at 7:33 PM "Perfection is not what brought us here, poetry is." I completely agree. A connection between words and emotions of the heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, FJ. Hugs, Brandy FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:24 PM Exactly Brandy :) Thank you very much madam.

Eve Roper December 19, 2022 at 8:23 PM So true on the observation. Great to see you. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Many Blessings My Friend... Merry Christmas FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:23 PM Hello Eve :) How have you been? It was my pleasure.

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2022 at 7:48 PM Eventually, good triumphs over evil... Hopefully... FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:21 PM Lol "hopefully" indeed GW!

Mystic Rose Rose December 19, 2022 at 5:43 PM lol you have a beautiful heart my friend, and you understands so much. Yes the true meaning of being here is not so we can crank out perfect poetry, but allow ourselves to grow as poets here, and support one another. Thank you for reminding me of that. As for daydreams, every one still lives inside of you dear girl, never lose Hope nor ambition, thank you for being You xo FJ Thomas December 27, 2022 at 9:19 PM Such kind encouraging words Vie, I thank you very sincerely. I do not think you need a reminder :) You breathe poetry my friend.

John Watt December 19, 2022 at 3:04 PM So wisely said. Peace and war go together just like gardens and weeds, or families that argue, then make up. I love what you say about peace being something that must be fought for, sounds like an oxymoron but I believe it to be true. And your last line sums it up so well. So glad to see you here Flo, your presence is one of the flavors that makes this Soup so enjoyable. Warm wishes to you this holiday season ~ John FJ Thomas December 19, 2022 at 3:22 PM Ahh dear John, how are you? Thank you so very much. You make me feel so special! I do hope you have been well :)

I Am Anaya December 19, 2022 at 2:28 PM Whew FJ 2006-that is a mark of longevity. For me it's one year on 12.20.22 tomorrow. I've seen my share of what just be. From political differences to false prophets. Above all, PS is a warm community. Hugs ~I Am Anaya FJ Thomas December 19, 2022 at 3:14 PM And you are one of the needed breaths of fresh air! Take care Anaya ;)

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2022 at 4:39 PM What a wonderful thought, FJ. Sorry but my reply box is not working over on the poem you replied to. Yes, it's so sad about Connie's passing. It was around middle of September and also we have now lost Rico. do you know who Rico is? His friend Susan made a blog about his death a few days ago. FJ Thomas December 18, 2022 at 4:48 PM I did know Rico, I did not know he passed :( I really am trying to be on more. Forgot how busy it was having a young one. Especially since I do not have the same energy as when I raised my girls! Thank you for keeping me in the loop Andie, I really appreciate it.

Paul Bell December 16, 2022 at 3:07 AM War and poetry in the trenches. Mind you, words are powerful weapons. FJ Thomas December 18, 2022 at 4:43 PM Very! Well said Paul :)

Laura Breidenthal December 6, 2022 at 12:44 PM That last line wraps in up so well. Peace should always be the goal. Much love always, Laura FJ Thomas December 15, 2022 at 11:07 AM I definitely agree, take care Laura.

Kelly Deschler October 1, 2022 at 11:20 AM Next year will mark my 10th anniversary on PS. It doesn't seem like it has been that long... And, even with all of the ups and downs, I am still so grateful that I was introduced to this extraordinary place... Keep up the wonderful writing, my friend! FJ Thomas December 5, 2022 at 8:17 AM You are another steady presence here Kelly, another reassurance of the reason we come here :) I hope you have been well. Thank you

Eileen Manassian September 30, 2022 at 3:46 AM Such beauty in your lines...Though the truth of it all hurts, we need to rise above. I've had my share of attacks here. A lot of those peoplehave left. I miss you. My life has been overwhelming lately, but I do miss you dearly. FJ Thomas December 5, 2022 at 8:14 AM I know Eilee, I remember my friend. Life has been hectic here as well. It always gives my heart a smile to see you here :)

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2022 at 9:49 PM yes, we have seen our share of quarreling here, but more often, it is like a family, a good and sweet family! FJ Thomas December 5, 2022 at 8:12 AM Very much so Andie :) You yourself are a calm presence here.

Joe Maverick September 24, 2022 at 3:32 AM And long may we, continue in its Folds F J, despite differences may we Allow it to guide us to better understanding All Blessings Joe ' FJ Thomas December 5, 2022 at 8:11 AM Hello Joe :) How have you been? You have said it perfectly.

James Inman September 23, 2022 at 7:24 PM We've lost too many through the attacks of others, including you for a while. I personally see the positive as far outweighing the negative. There are some wonderful people here. A thought provoking write. FJ Thomas September 23, 2022 at 8:34 PM Very true James. For some the unexpected personal attacks were just too much, understandably. But the instigators eventually calm down, leave, or are able to be ignored. I regret deleting my original account. Hopefully others will simply take a break without going that far if they need a breath. Thank you my old PS friend.

Honestly J.T. September 9, 2022 at 11:41 AM Cool poem -JT FJ Thomas September 23, 2022 at 8:35 PM Thank you JT

Harry Horsman September 3, 2022 at 5:39 PM It wonderful to read your poetry, FJ, Love this, hope its an entry.. FJ Thomas September 3, 2022 at 5:45 PM It is not Harry but thank so much!

Juliet Ligon August 31, 2022 at 2:58 PM Yes, well said. It's all about the poetry and growing. I'm sure you've been an encouragement to many over the years, as you have been to me. FJ Thomas September 3, 2022 at 5:45 PM I have been bitten and, honestly, my returning words bit back on one occasion. A soft-hearted daughter that used to post here was targeted and that was a line crosser for me. But I hope I have been to at least a few Juliet, thank you for YOUR encouraging words :)

Jim Slaughter August 31, 2022 at 11:15 AM Progress...not perfection...in my opinion, should always be the ultimate goal of any writer. A very good and pithy acrostic, FJ. FJ Thomas August 31, 2022 at 11:26 AM Ahh perfectly said Slaughter Man! Lol I miss calling you that. Thank you Jim.

Sotto Poet August 30, 2022 at 6:19 PM Thomas, that was a very well-written poem. I think most of us have similar thoughts and feelings, but at the end of the day, it's all about poetry and getting better at it. Best wishes for the contest. FJ Thomas August 30, 2022 at 9:22 PM Many thanks Sotto, I do agree. It is not for contest but, as I'm sure you know, it was inspired by one :) ~FJ

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